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| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: cursed l0ve [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 09:21 CST
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i love this story! but i wasnt able to read the whole chapter 11.. it's cut off could u upload it again or something? thanks!!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thaanks for writting it really made my day after finding out that the boy i like is going out with i girl i know since 5th grade. i made it better
| Title: The Girl Next Door
Reviewed By: Kogasgurl/Jam maybe... On: November 17, 2006 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of all,a.)Yes,I survived and b.)I will NOT stop writing stupid things!Sorry I didn't read this chappy ealier even though I already read it!Here,I made up a quote/song thing... What if the secert I had to keep,could save you from yourself,If it was the only way to save you,but I wouldn't tell you,instead I save everyone else,To gain your trust and drop it down,Down further than the ground,If I made a promise I counldn't keep,To make so many weep,If I would die tonight would you cry,I need to know are you the guy,Please tell me before I give into the sky,I need to know,Are you the guy,Things can fade,Things go on,But would your love keep going strong,If I was gone for so long,Don't ask me why,But are you the guy,You don't know that I like you,I won't tell,I don't know why.I just don't want you to die,So I'll take your place,like a trapped man eating fly,make so many give into the sky,Black clouded sky,shadows kill the night,Huge sharp teeth,crows in the sky,A lingering thought,An innocent dream,the body found last time,Dead as my dreams,Tears of red run down my face,I want to die in your grace.I need to know are you the guy,Please tell me before I give into the sky,I need to know,Are you the guy?Things can fade,Things go on,But would your love keep going strong,If I was gone for so long,Don't ask me why,But are you the guy,I get fed to Cebreus,gnawing on my skin,A million needles down my back,Blood flows out,Forget me now,Forget me not,did she die,From the pot?Things can fade,Things go on but would your love keep going strong?Are you the guy?Now I lay me down to sleep,I pray the Lord my soul to keep,If I should die before I wake,I pray the Lord my soul to take... Ain't it so totally awesome?Oh ur storey is so cool! So Ne way,Miss Smitty Dragon,I WILL write more things b/c I din't have to hear her complain~MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Points finger at Smitty Dragon,"Sorry!Wait,no I'm not,I enjoyed to see other people in pain from Nicole!Now if u'll excuse me,I have an anger menagment/Sadism is not good class!C ya sucker!I hope she complains 2 x as much!" XO!*puts gunin pocket*"I need this to shoot that damn cherry teacher thats just as unditructable as a fucking bug,or Nicole..."(just kidding McFolley! ~Ur 1 cuz,Ashley!~ This thing keeps making me redo it!*pouts*~3rd try...~
| Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good! although i think that maybe kikyo could just suffer an accident and die and make everyone happy... including herself... lol... =) great chapter!
| Title: Ummmm Okay?
Reviewed By: Chippy/Maybe Jam On: November 15, 2006 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah,its cool and all but I read ur reviews....I don't think Wynter(sp?) likes me....*Quickly runs away*.
| Reviewed By: yo! On: November 15, 2006 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! keep it up and update!!
| Reviewed By: inuluvver On: November 13, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i am a major kikyo hater to... so i adore this story. please continue as soon as possible, i love it
| Reviewed By: Lifes_untold_stories [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 20:53 CST
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YAY!!!!!!! this fic is soooooo good pleeeeeaaaase continue!!! ^.^
| Title: COOL
Reviewed By: Irene On: November 12, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiiii PLEASE DONT DELETE THIS FIC ITS AWSOME!!! KICKS ASS XDDD I love this fic please please please please continue!!!!!! Your fellow fan Irene
| Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wonder whats going to happen next update soon.
| Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry you got frustrated with the lack of reviews. You really shouldn't let that stop you though. It's a good story and you should keep it up, not only for us fans, but for your own sake too. If it's something you enjoy you should do it no matter how many reviews you get. I for one am hoping to read more soon. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Zonza(not logged in) On: November 11, 2006 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, this one is not logged in, I normally don't review if I'm not... I was just siffting through the stories and found yours. Very wonderful it is, this one loves story lines like this...errr, I've never read one like this one as fanfiction and so it was a treat to find it. I really hope you continue and don't give it up. You've got something great going on here and This One really hopes to read more in the future as I'm quite intrested in where everything leads to. ~Zonza
| Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never saw someone so frustrated for not getting reviews... i get stressed myself but i don't whine about it (don't consider this a flame please) i swear i was about to review on your last update but my mom came right in to take me to the supermarket... kinda funny, right? whatever... try not to get stressed about reviews i know they are hard to get but keep writting this story is too good to have interruptions... =) (update soon too!!!)
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY IT'S OK JUST BECAUSE NO ON IS REVIWEING DON'T MEAN THEY DON'T LIKE IT I LOVE IT AND HOPE YOU KEEP WRITEING BUT YOU SAID YOU REALLY WANTED A REVIEW SO HERE YOU GO IT'S A GREAT STORY SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. PS. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 17:47 CST
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i mean no disrespect but.......the updates could be longer....you know?.....but other than that, that was totally cool
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