| "Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:19 CDT
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nooooooooooo....y is harry so stubborn!?....there's supposed 2 b a happy ending dammit!....wat if snape dies on this mission wat'll he do then?!...argh!!...stupid harry!...nyway...i luv this fic..i'm glad u finally updated...noiw...i'm waiting 4 the next update!^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 06:36 CDT
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Why Harry?.?.? Snape must have felt so sad man why does Harry have to be such a prat.!.!.! update again soon please
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Reviewed By: betweenyouandme319 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:28 CDT
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I love this story. I just one question. What year is Harry in?
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...i have 2 say zega u've really outdone urself this time...i mean...this is awesome^^...i nvr knew a yaoi fic would get me addicted 2 harry potter...he is SO hot...i have his e-mail address and i've gotten a response 2 an e-mail i sent 2 him b4...he's nice^^...plz continues this fic and ur others...i hate cliffhangers and that's all ur doing 2 ur loyal fans*pouts*..if u just stop updating on evrything like this i'll cry...i will 2 cause i can force myself 2:)...well...plz update soon..thank u and buh-bye!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: April 12, 2007 11:14 CDT
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What happened? are you done with the fanfict?????????? I WANNA KNOW!!!!! ITS BEEN TOOOOO LONG! UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~jennyfer On: March 25, 2007 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really Love This!! It's my first Snarry fic, and I'm really glad that it was yours~♥ I'll be looking forward to an update, and you're keeping me in suspense!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: March 23, 2007 15:01 CDT
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WHY HAVNT YOU UPDATED????? WANNA READ MORE!!!!!!! HURRRRRRYYYYYY UUUUPPPPPPP PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: March 15, 2007 15:10 CDT
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SOB!!!! thats sooooo sad.........neeeeeds more romance if ya know what I mean.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:07 CDT
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Wait until Sevy finds out what Harry is planning to do!!!!!! Why are you doing this to him???? anywas LOVING THE STORY!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it is AMAZINGLY GREAT. You are doing a great job with the Snape/Hary pairing. You have really kept me on the edge here because. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 11:09 CST
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update please
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Reviewed By: nekomew78 On: March 05, 2007 13:52 CST
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ITS BEEN OVER A MONTH NOW AND STILL NO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHATS WRONG????I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: High Priestess On: February 20, 2007 02:01 CST
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LOVE IT!!!!DO MORE A.S.A.P.!!!! High Priestess
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Reviewed By: Drakeluvr On: February 10, 2007 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the style of the story however I believe that it was writen too fast and not checked over well if at all before it it was posted. I saw numerous spelling errors in chapter 4 I believe, where they go to London. For example, waitress suggests female, and there were several instances to them being referred to as a man among other things. The style of writing refers more to the chosen section break of the character names for the story being repeated to make a page break all scrunched up - astrisks spaced a tab with a part and centered would be better for making the break as it does not detract from the story. Creativity, originality and enjoyment factor are rated higher though not too much so as for me at least, the style along with spelling and grammar issues detract from both. The over all score I gave was reached by adding each and dividing by four. Because the score was a half number, I made it whole by adding. On a side note that I did not put into my rating - a character rarely looks at themselves in a third person... i.e. Harry jumped with a start when Severus caressed Harry's side. For all intents and purposes, even though this form is likely used to dispell confusion when dealing with a same sex relationship, it should read: Harry jumped with a start when Severus caressed his side; without the bold and italic notation of course. Over all, the story is good and I look forward to more, hope this helps.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Lunitic Pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 16:03 CST
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lol, just discovered the update today..still a really good fanfic! keep at it, and update soon!
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