| "Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how this story is going. I can't until the day of the wedding. Idea, maybe Voldy could 'show up' at the wedding. You crash it. Just an idea. But I do like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 21:36 CDT
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Oh yeah!! It's getting good, a little too good! Your a excellent writer! Continue and you will continue to hear from me!! ~MangaChild420 aka A-Jay
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Reviewed By: Nekomew78 On: July 29, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Sorry I havent reviewed, I'm sooo busey. Wouldnt it be funny if Padfoot turned out to be Snape's best man? Or even voldemort (though I doubt it)anywho, i love it. Update soon!
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Title: HAPPY
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated and I'm so happy how this chapter turned out. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 22:55 CDT
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Ahhh...so sweet Snape is finally happy with Harry...can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 10:55 CDT
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Like the chapter really explains why Snape actually chose Harry...can;t wait for more...
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Title: Oh my gosh
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!!!!! I so hope that Harry and Snape get married. I can't believe what Harry said and did to Snap!!!! I mean the grit loves Harry!!! They must get married!! They love each other!!! I really, really, really, really, like this story! Keep it up and please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: ~Jennyfer On: July 20, 2007 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O________O Wow. You are killing me. But, nevertheless, keeping me all the more interested. I can't wait to see what that "prat" Harry will do next. Please keep it up and please have happier chapters!!! ;___; ♥
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 14:45 CDT
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Nooo don't sign it!!!!! Oh my god oh my god....hate the cliffy!! REALLY REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HARYY WIL DO!!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: TakayanagiLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter... I think it is the best so far~!!! I loved how Severus stayed in his room because of Sirius... That was very amusing~! XD
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a bit skeptical about reading this at first, not because it's a Harry/Snape fic(I actually like the pairing..) but because not many people can pull it off. I think you've done a pretty good job though (even though Harry's coming off as...well a little bitch to tell the truth). And as for sexually graphic scenes, the most realistic are the best. Sex isn't always perfect, damn near never is. But you should also write what you're comfortable writing. So yeah, that's my bit and like everyone else, I'm anxiously awaiting the next update ^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 23:42 CDT
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Why did u have to cut the chapter there... I wanted to read more...*pouts*.....can;t wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: nevertooclear On: June 02, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I wasn't sure at first, but I thought it looked really interesting. Once I began reading it, I had to stay and finish all the chapters! Please please please add more...you left off at a horrible part to just..stop. (Not that I think you meant to finish it now, but it really would stink to have to wait a month for something new..) :)
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: May 30, 2007 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww! he loves him!! even if he is bein a little GIT! they better stay 2gether nd harry better nt break off tha engagment... do u no how many ppl will cry?! ha ha nyways uve got talent hun!! :D
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Title: Consider Me Converted!
Reviewed By: A R Deviante [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll admit that I was skeptical of the pairing, however, after reading your story--I'm absolutely in love with them! Your story has an interesting plot with the characters in pretty good character. I love the sassy conversations between Severus and Harry, they're so much fun to read. I do hope that you'll update soon and cannot wait to read the next chapter. Awesome job.
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