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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Is the dreaded Yamucha making an appearence in a Kahlan Nightwing fic?! And his not a complete idiot?! Oh the horror! So what is he like the leader of the Z crew since he's doing all the talking? That's a scary thought o.O. I wonder what that whole deal about Radditz was?
Kakarot! Kakarot! Where for art thou?
Oh, oh, oh, I know who the insider is! It's Mrs. Briefs right! No...oh. Well nevermind.
Catch a cold my ass. He's sweet and adorable and loving and kind and gen-
Vegeta: Now you're getting carried away.
JB: *blushes* Oh sorry.
Thesaurus? What's that? :P No, that would take too much work. I'd have to get up and find it.
Vegeta: But it's sitting in front of you.
JB: Shhhhh!!! I'd still have to read through it and turn the pages and stuff.
Vegeta: You're pathetic.
JB: *crosses arms over chest and turns her back to him* And I intend to stay that way too. So there! *sticks out her tongue*
Anyway, I'll stick with the same-o, same-o. Great chapter!-JB |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!
Loved the chappy. i can't wait to see what happens next. well keep up the awesome writing.
Lauren |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 23:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
Poor everyone. Is Vegeta's hand still broken? cause if it is, won't a senzu bean cure that? And will Vegeta be able to get strong enough to beat Freeza? help from the Hyper bolic time chamber perhaps? Oh well! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! They shot Veggie! My poor, poor baby. I have to agree with Susan when I say that I sound like a broken record with the 'great chapter' stuff but what else can I say, they're always...great.
Hey look! It's the 20th! That means that by the time I finish reading the Unexplainables there should be a new chapter up! Hooray! Sorry I'm a little giddy today. But with good reason. Can you say me + the guy = hot date (I hope)? Keep your fingers crossed. Great chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I haven't finished the chapter yet but I had to pause and tell you that the whole ship scene had me rollin' on the floor. I know I said poor Vegeta but I guess I should have said poor Bulma. LOL! Well I guess I'll go finish the chapter now.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEE!! I told you Vegeta was sweet!!! But you never want to believe me when I tell you anything ^_^!
I loved the whole Kakarot/Vegeta scene. Excellent! Well on to the next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! I can't believe how ugly things turned out for the trio. Then again, this is Frieza we're talking about. I hope the info Bulma gave the general will help him see that she's telling the truth. It's a shame too because it ruined the mood. One moment I was laughing at their obvious cabin fever, as well as Kakarott's childish behavior and rampant stupidity, and the next thing I know they were being apprehended. Good Lord I'm getting the mood swings but I'm not on the rag. Thanks alot dammit! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter (I wish you would write something that really sucks so I don't sound like a broken record). It's fantastic the way you always manage to keep them in character thereby helping the story flow nicely. The interaction between the three was perfect, specially Veggie tending to Bulma's wounds (Awwwwwwww). |
Reviewed By: dbz728 On: June 18, 2002 01:44 EDT
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lov'n this...lov'n this ....lov'n this!!!!! Excellent work!!! I love VEGETA!!! Keep up the awesome writing....can't wait til the next chapter...what will happen to Vegeta!!??!! |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!
i think you made me the happiest reader/reviewer on eart hehe. (ok maybe i'm exagerating) but two chappies at the same time. makes me want to jump for joy hehe. well i must sleep i've been deprived of it haha well cya next time ya update
~Lauren~ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 00:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! You better update soon! ;) |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-whines- You have to hurry! I can't stand the suspense! -lol- This fic totally rocks! I mean seriously!!! Tjis is one of the better A/U fics I've read plus it has a lot of interesting twists! -giggles- I have to agree with Goku and say that Bulma and Vegeta do act like they're married. ^_^ I also have to praise you on the wonderful way you've kept them in character most of the time. But then even if they aren't in character it just fits the fic soooo right! Truely an awesome fic!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. They got away but Furiza is after them, and I can't wait to find out why Bulma wanted to go to Earth knowing that the lavendar lizard would follow. This is getting pretty exciting. I hope Veggie recovers soon from that beating, and that you update soon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shhhh! *looks around* Be quiet or Vegeta will hear you!
Vegeta: I already did. *wags boot in front of JB's face*.
JB: *sigh* Look! See what you did now?
So they're on their way to Earth huh? I wonder...yeah you're right I'm no fun, I'm not going to try and guess. But it could be interesting: Vegeta, Bulma, and Kakarot trapped together in a ship o.O. The strain on my poor Veggie's nerves!
Yajirobe! LOL! That's too scary to even think about. Worry not, though, a victor will emerge...maybe ^_~.
K(G)/CC! Oh yeah!
Funny how I never suffer from writer's block with my reviews. *taps chin thoughtfully*
Oh! Speaking of reviews, I was also trying to read this story over at Fanfiction.net and it said the story wasn't found. I don't know what's up with that place lately.
Well what else to say...what else to say...well I'm drawing a blank. Vegeta?
Vegeta: Nice chapter.
JB: True. That was a nice thing to say Vegeta.
Vegeta: *shrugs and looks off into the distance*
JB: Anyone else come up with anything?
Z Senshi: *shakes heads*
JB: Well I geuss that's all from us. Til next time.-JB |
Reviewed By: nicole del [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it....did I already comment on this story?
Well, if I did, it wouldn't hurt to do it again. Anyways, I read your latest comments on my story and I'm sorry if I didn't clarify it clearly...but the girl I described in the last couple of paragraphs was Aerin. A dragon I created to fit the story line. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
I hope you're not disappointed about Trunks...and everything
I try to keep the characters as original as possible...
Anyways...Great story...can't wait to read more. |
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