| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 19:04 EDT
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So Sesshomaru was faking the whole time? Or did he just suddenly come back to himself? I'm really interested in seeing where this goes. But I have to admit, the whole nipples thing was kinda weird. I've never heard of anyone being that enthralled by nipples. But hey I guess that makes it original then eh? I can picture Sess on top in the next chapter, but for some reason it doesnt seem to be what he "really" wants. Haha so it'd be interesting if Inuyasha turned it on him once again. I dunno why but Uke Sess always seems to draw me in more then Seme.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 18:04 EDT
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This chapter and it's evil pretty pink nipples were hillarious. Completely hillarious. I have seen the look in a dog's eyes when he knows you are going to throw the ball. He's glued to the ball, just like Inu's eyes are glued to the evil pretty pink nipples. Thanks so much for sharing this!
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Title: Damnit
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:24 EDT
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Ignore that second post with the wrong hikou. I'm blaming it on a half bottle of shiraz, oh yes I am. *kicks self* Carry on! Excellent work to both of you! (I'd toast you but I'm now out of wine. :0)
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: DemonGoddess On: April 07, 2007 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* I like how you meandered around..... and led up to... a SANE Sesshomaru at the very end! LOL Of course, the nipples couldn't POSSIBLY be anywhere near as scary at that THING that's always stalking Inuyasha's ass! ^-^ As always, a joy to read.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: April 06, 2007 23:27 EDT
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It's hard to picture Sesshomaru acting like a dog. I keep picturing him as knee high. very cute
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Reviewed By: Azalea J [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly I'd like to shout: THANK YOU HELLFYARRE!!!! Secondly I'd like to sing: I'M SOMEBODY'S FAVORITE FLOWER!!! And thirdly I'd like to gush: DAMN BUT YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER! And he was not hard! Uh huh, and neither was his sword. All the comparisons were so… funny, yet... logical. I dunno if that made sense but, fuckin' hell I loved this chapter- not as much as the last one, but it's a close second ^-^. And the ending? OMG, I could almost see Sesshoumaru smirking over his brother's prone form- poor Inuyasha! And the nipples! Ah, you kill me! Cheers! *Raises wine class and cheese*.
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Reviewed By: Margre On: April 06, 2007 17:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give 10 on all of the voting thingies! ^^ I love CH! It's so.. so.. HOT! yeah! Absolutly wicked it is!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 17:06 EDT
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Well shit. I fubared the haiku. It SHOULD have went: Pretty pink nipples. At the tip of his tongue, so close. Under his fingers 5-7-5, I remember my language arts classes, yes I do! Again, good work and bloody well update this one sooner! :p. Thanks again for the wonderful story:)
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 16:44 EDT
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You know what I love best about your story? You take the "storms of passions" and "fires of lust" clichéd 'thoughts' and add hella funny 'thoughts of which I shouldn't be thinking' statements. Very funny and original!(Kudos and girl-guide cookies with mocha-lattes!) It's funny in subtle ways as well as in your face blatant. You're doing well on the nuances of multi-levels of story writting, or I could be drinking too much.;P Either way I'm loving your story. You read like you're having as much fun as the people reading it, and I hope you're having more! (Pokes your muse for this story. "geroff CS and remember this one dammit" ) Nicely done though, and if you look hard enough, there's a hikou in the nipple-thoughts bits: Pretty pink nipples At the tip of his tongue, close Under his fingers I used only your words. Mixed a bit. There were some less wholesome ones I could have made, but... I'm sure you and fyre have more than covered that ;P Anyway,good work!!:D Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Vague/Emi On: April 06, 2007 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha revenge is sweet! and miss why did you take so long?! I'm dying here. Yo hardly ever get a story where inuyasha is the seme and youre makingus wait! I love this story. I seriously do. I didnt think id like it so much . Okay i knew id like it but not to this extent. Good job and most definitely keep it up!! I ANXIOUSLY await the next chapter
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Title: chp. 8
Reviewed By: HPTR Fangirl On: April 06, 2007 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter. As you said in the whole chapter, "Sesshoumaru's nipples are evil" (chants the mantra repeatedly. Loved it, and is absolutely fablulous. Can't wait until next update. I think Inuyasha would be bottom in the next chapter, however, you could change to Sesshoumaru being the submissive in the middle of the story. Can't wait for the lemon.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! you updated....and i LOVED it it was funny as hell i can't wait to see what will happen now that sess can talk again....and has bitten inu-chan...YAY!!....PLEAE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 08:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really kept the laugh going. thank you! i enjoyed it very much. i even like the way you ended this chapter. with fangs. hellfyrre thanks!!! if she had an lj one, i'd go and thank her there. i like the nipple treatment. really worth waiting for. =)
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Reviewed By: szaugg On: April 06, 2007 07:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it...love the ending line. Can't wait to see what happens next!!! szaugglaughs not logged in
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 19:01 EDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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