| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: April 26, 2008 23:06 EDT
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I wonder when Sesshomaru's gonna return to his snotty self It's like waiting for a rubber band to swing back hehehe
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Reviewed By: Trigger Happy Bitch On: April 26, 2008 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fluffy just had to get his 2 cents in didn't he? LMAO. *Rushes around to find tissues* the whole chappie gave me a constant nosebleed! That was friggin' hawt! *passes out from too much blood loss*
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Title: niiiice! ~_^
Reviewed By: jenerik_brand [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 21:31 EDT
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I love how you give us a long lemon to enjoy. And it's got just the right pace for a sex scene. It's laid out like a feast for us to enjoy. The way Inuyasha eats Sesshomaru up, then screws him silly is so erotic and sweet. Great erotica!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 18:17 EDT
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OMG!Where in the world have U been?! Nevermind! Awesome chapter, welcome back! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Lunarfang On: April 25, 2008 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay besides the fact that this entire chapter was unfucking believable(sorry had to say it)I did notice one or two things in the grammar section but besides that it was awesome! I love how you get in both of InuYasha's and Sesshomaru's feelings and sensations while also telling the story. For me, I don't know where this is going to go but right now I couldn't care less since I love where it's going NOW!
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Title: HEY! You did it!
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 13:40 EDT
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You updated! And, your writing style has changed a bit. I didn't notice it in other places, but I had to go back and re-read some chapters here, to reacquaint myself with some details and sho'nuff, your style has morphed ever so slightly. Not that it's a bad thing, you just seem to be maturing in your use of prose and character portrayal. It's Good! I was also glad to see you've made both characters have to come to grips with the fact this might not be just a 'centennial' thing with their conscious minds as well as their lusts. And hey! I'm relatively sober for this review! Again, my love of the nipples cannot be understated and I'm glad to see you got over the evil block that's been plaguing you, and not only over it, but kicked it's ass with some mighty fine writing! Nice Work! The wait was well worth it and I'm glad you put it up. Good going snowy, it's well written and enjoyable. Now, back to the plumbing mines for me. :D Cheers!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 00:53 EDT
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please update this soon.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Skye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 16:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ah this fic has left me laughing hysterically in several parts. Absolutely brilliant and I'll be ready and waiting for your next update :)
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Reviewed By: Trigger Happy Bitch On: October 17, 2007 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie as always. Smiling never ends when reading your story. YAY!! Sesshoumaru finally aid those 3 little words that Inuyasha always wanted to hear. even though he denies it most of the time Ahhhh! Kouga is soooo rude. He comes out of nowhere, interrupts, threatens Inu and then leaves. Well n e way update asap plz. ^_^
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Reviewed By: evilblackcat On: September 10, 2007 08:04 EDT
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God! I love this story...It's so funny and so sexy and hot...Wonderfull! Update soon! Pleaseeee!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story...very hot..yet hilarius.... The Pink Nipples just got me laughing all of the way.... keep it up..
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Title: Too Funny
Reviewed By: AmberRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 22:04 EDT
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Is it wrong that my favorite line in this whole chapter was "Stupid bitch…always getting herself killed then coming back to life. She should make up her mind." you are hilarious and a genius. as usual love the comedy and the turmoil they're both in. they're both so adorable when trying to sort out all those annoying emotions. good stuff! and if you've got some ideas about kouga i'd love to hear'em! i've hit a major roadblock with BI (yes again)and some fresh perspective and ideas would be very much appreciated. *smooches*
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Title: I found you!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I'm so happy that you have updated. I was looking for this story but I couldn't remember what the title was and who wrote it and thanks to Shigure-san and you review to her story. and Mad Maxx Coyote for his I don't think I would have ever found you again. It's fate I tell and, I'm so happy. I'm still laughing about nipples those darn nipples did a number on him. and Sesshomaru such a devil he is a cute on at that. and he's in love what a baka awe! damn koga intrupting a good moment and damn Kagome so gotta get that lease off of him how could he expect him to love her when she treats him like a dog. the others are always trying to get him to love her but did they ask weather or not he wanted her. whats he suppose to do stay with her while he's waiting for her to die to be free again? baka's I say let koga have her, he'll learn. and Inuyasha should tell it like it is to her so she will finally understand. hm it bit over board huh sorry about the rant. I don't really like Kagome while she has her good points she has some flaws that I serious don't like. She keeps him as a slave or pet and make him behave the way she wants. He's a Male Hanyou for crying out loud. I guess I should end this very long review and say that this fic is so much fun to read and that, I'm so happy that I found this again and please update as often as you can.
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Reviewed By: Kamakura Yumi On: September 03, 2007 20:22 EDT
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I appear to have lost your email address. At the risk of bothering you please regard my recent remarks as a mistake and delete them. KamakuraYumi should really have stayed dead.
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first off I have to thank you for the review you left on my own story. I was wondering if this story had been forgotten and I'm glad to see that it has not. I'm rather curious as to what is going to happen when Inuyasha and Sesshomaru catch up to Inu's group, if they do at all. I like this whole Centennial of Sesshomaru's though it does make me wonder if Inuyasha will get one as well. Granted....now that I think about it, a period of growth and change for Inuyasha is...practially what I'm already writing about, and if you started then I'd have to work twice as hard to ensure that I didnt do the same thing you did. Thats so hard too XD. So Inuyasha used Sesshomaru's teeth and such for accessories partly because of instinct? That seems to be what Fluffy thinks, or perhaps I misunderstood? I think it would be interesting if Inuyasha somehow gained something from them, though would he lose the gained if he lost the Sess presents? Also I just realized its kind of hard to write a good review when you are also writing a story, because when you think of a good suggestion, you instantly think "Oh thats a good idea....wait I should keep that!" Haha, well anyway I enjoy this story and I always enjoy a nice long review so thus I tried to give you one. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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