| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOL, loving it, hope you don't put such big gaps between now and the next chapter. Loved the end line of chapter one "where is my bone?" ROFL
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Title: Ch 14 review!!
Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 01:23 EDT
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XD I love each of your chapters! I always find phrases that tickle me senseless (like: "His mate had hit him and he had done nothing to deserve it. All he wanted was a little food. It was sitting there, already dead and doing nothing. Really. It wasn't as though it was going to jump up and attack him." oh god and this one: "You had sex and it was an accident!? If you mated you had sex, right?", "I swear, it was an accident!" XXD LIAR! XD aha... and Sessh is accident prone... Inuyasha is in a world of shit after this! I look forward to more!! Great job!!! -DM
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Title: Ch 13 review
Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 01:05 EDT
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Oh lawd! XD Poor Sesshomaru's raw ass T_T XD... I loved these lines btw: "Mated? You call this mating? Where in the world did this idea happen to infect your inherently diseased brain?" and "Meanwhile, on what he deemed the considerably damaged section of his brain, whoops of celebration could be heard". Wahh! Inu-tachi has shown up during hopeful smutty tiemz for Sesshou! T_T Poor guys just can catch a break. *sigh* XD Great job! -DM
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Title: Ch 11 review
Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 16:48 EDT
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O...M...G. 18 pages of sex. I think I just DIED and went to HEAVEN. O_O *nosebleed* Damn, woman! Your chapters are getting me all hot and bothered *runs around in circles XD* Great job on this chapter!! -DM
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Title: Ch 10 review
Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 16:22 EDT
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Oooo, suspense at this statement: "Yet, as long as his mate continued to follow his instinctual journey toward home, there was no doubt that there would continue to be opportunities, especially when he tended to lead Inuyasha the long way around, adding a few circles along the way." O_O! Hehe! Crafty Sesshou is crafty! But wait! Oh oh! Kagura's around?! WAH! Did she see Sessh and Inu? Did she HEAR Sessh?! O_O!! Must... read... more!! Great job! -DM
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Title: LMAO!
Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First- I don't think I've ever read this chapter!! O_O! LAWD!! *dies* that was so hot I seriously almost squished a twinkie in my pants! O_O! And... not only hot, it was hilarious, too! I'm not sure how you make your chapters funny, sexy, dominant and submissive at the same time but you do!! I love it! I think, though, this is my favorite line in this chapter: Inuyasha was brought out of his worries by Sesshoumaru falling forward and wrapping around him like an overgrown octopus. XD!!!! for some reason.... that is SO fucking cute. Hell. I wanna put it in a signature or something! X*DD so funny. Great job! I'm on to read the next one!! -DM
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Title: Congrats on the Update!
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 22:29 EDT
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I'm baaack!! Sorry for being MIA. I told you that I'd be out of town didn't I? Anyhow, congrats for this update!!! I didn't know that you had changed jobs but I'm glad to hear that the seizures are letting you work eight hour days now. I continue to wish for them seizures to continually diminish for you. Now, "Kuku Clocks & Trinkets"... heheheheh FUN-NY! heheheh I was a bit confused about Izayoi, Sessmom and SessInudad's sudden presence but then I realized that they were like Zeus looking at/ talking to his subjects in the sand box. The raspberry that the horrid red eyed squirrels gave to Naraku was priceless. I did love how InuYasha pounced Sessy and gave him a "searing kiss." Hmmmmm Yummmm ..... ok, coming back to earth. If they start getting hot and heavy in front of the others then so be it. I have absolutely no problem with that. However, the others may want to leave and give them their privacy. *hint, hint* I did enjoy how the beads from the subjugation necklace fell to the floor. After reading "It's My Life" from MadMaxxCoyote I totally despise that necklace. So hurrah and no more gardens in Inu's nostrils. heheheh That was funny too. Thanks to Kiten and AmberRose for helping you with this chapter. Again congrats on the update and I look forward to your next one! QS
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Reviewed By: Azalea J. On: April 13, 2009 21:47 EDT
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Pretty flower? Awww... But YES! I loved this one so much - so stupidly funny. The ending was awesome, I positively squealed when Inuyasha pounced Sesshi infront of everyone. Although... I do hope he has tact enough not to continue, ehm... on that train, infront of everyone... And yes, Sango is Hentai at heart.
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Title: Centennial Hunger
Reviewed By: aleabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see... it's different... it's funny... it's sexy... and I can't wait for updates. If that doesn't mean it's a jolly good story, than I don't know what is. :)
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Reviewed By: Pumpkinpi82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:25 EDT
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I'm glad to hear that you are feeling better! I have read many of your stories and have enjoyed them all greatly! All of them had me laughing to the point of tears and this one is no exception. Sesshoumaru, the big beautiful Inu does have some major mental issues. I always thought he had a few short circuts in his mind (despite his intellegence, just because someone is smart does not mean that they are sane). And Inuyasha was saved from being sat to the center of the earth by his mate, lucky Inu. Meanwhile Naraku has become nothing basically but a bouncing pink beach ball thanks to Inuyasha's new attack. I wonder what will happen next, especially since Sesshoumaru seems to be ready and willing to have another roll in the grass with his 'little red creature', not caring at all that there is an audience watching. Can't wait to find out:-)
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha this is so funny. I don't know where Inuyasha and Sesshomaru parents came from but this is so funny. Ah Inuyasha's new attack yeah that was funny as heck. How do you come up with these's things? Omg You know I would Like Kagome to hear his I'm free I'm free so that she realize that she treated Inuyasha as a slave and was forcing him to want to be with her. Some one in love should not have to fear being abused. beside she called him three timing jerk she's always going out with hojo and beside they were never really together in the first place. Please update very soon this is one of the only fics that really give me a good laugh.
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Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You completely made my week with this update. It was well worth the wait. And the end of the chapter, that was so cute. You do such a great job keeping them in character, but then having something like the ending you did in there. So happy to see the beads gone, I like how you have them come off, and InuYasha's new sword attck, that's great. I was laughing my ass off at the little red eye squirrel rats sticking their tongues out analogy. No Kags bashing is cool with me, I just hate when she keeps my doggies apart. I don;t always bash here, she's actually sometimes a good character when she can still be Inuyasha's friend or at least not hate him for being with Sessh. Well, thanks for the awesome update. I won't say update soon because I know it doesn't help, but I will eagerly anicipating any updates to any of your terrific stories. Luv, Izzi
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Reviewed By: Rethira [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 11:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was laughing all the way through this chapter. -hugs- Thanks so much for updating.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 08:51 EDT
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ok, isnt naraku still there needing beaten up, of course sess doesnt understand that. i cant wait to see what happens next, i know its going to be great
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 07:14 EDT
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I'm....confused. Somehow Inuyasha's dad, his mom, and Sesshomaru's mom are there? Inuyasha has a new attack? They don't seem to be too worried about Naraku...if they are making out right now. I've re-read this twice...and I really don't know what is going on.
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