| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vague86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That absolutely made my toes curl! Girl you are just awesome. I love it when Inuyasha get' to take our sexy sesshoumaru and did youever go it well. My godYou should write more as not only was this story incredibly funny butit was believable, had a good dose of sexiness and jusr all around was great. I look forward to more chapters. In fact i anxiously way for them Vague
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
re-reading. thought i needed a lemon or two to tide away this less than brilliant monday morning. i like this phrase 'submission complete' and both too stupid to realize it. =) i could visualize both faces....
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Reviewed By: HPTR Fangirl On: March 02, 2007 13:08 EST
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No need to answer the question I'd asked, you've already answered it in you livejournal account. Gomen
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Title: the lemon
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:01 EST
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i was feeling terribly frustrated with your CS as for the life of me i was able to access 7-9 only to have them disappear yesterday and today. i even logged on to mm. to no avail. *sigh* so i thought i'd make myself laugh and read this last chapter (chappie 7, the lemon). Ah fluffy.. somehow fluffy and inuyasha mesh well together
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Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeek, I forgot all about this story! I read the first chapter or two when it first came out, and then got the title mixed up in my head with a different one (hate when that happens). So glad a reviewer to one of my stories mentioned this one! I am enjoying it soooo much. 'Nakify' = best word ever, LOL. anyway, I look forward to more!!
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cute and quite different which is what I like about it. Really want to know about those bitches. Will Sessy be able to stay coherent enough to talk to Inuyasha? Will Inuyasha finally learn about the legend? In fact, will we????? Curiousa as hell here! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 00:04 EST
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Shit,I just re-read my review and noticed what I said could have been taken wrong. I'm certainly not meaning any bad things towards Hellfyre or yourself! On the contrary, you both are doing well and great. damn, do I know how to be and idiot or what?.....Cheers!:D
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter. So much naughtyness plus Inu got top. I loved it good. thanks so much for posting Best wishes and good waves.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Holy shit. THAT was rather astoundingly....amazingly written/Pulled out of the next issue of InucestSMUTFEST/making me wonder why I love the kagxinu stories so much. Not only did you make me giggle, you made me blush, laugh outright and think about where on earth you can be goin with this. Oh, and least I forget" "THANK YOU HELLFYRE!!! for your swift and excellent betta work. I have to admit though, I actually saw a flaw in this one! Quotations were missed. But I guess if I read a damn thing five times, I'm bound to notice stuff once in a while. I never give 10's and if I do, you either deserved it, paid me money or I was drunk. I read lots (some professionally) and if I don't notice the grammer and spelling, it means your story is that good. Thank you yet again. Cheers!:D
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: February 09, 2007 20:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! *Blush, blush, blush* Umm, wow? An accident lol, at least Sesshomaru enjoyed it ne? ^^' I wonder if he'll ever get to be on top, or if the fates with just cut his thing off to spite him >.< lol im sorry i'll be good =p great chapter by the way ^^'
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Title: Sesshoumaru vs Fluffy
Reviewed By: HPTR Fangirl On: February 09, 2007 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was simply hot. But I do think that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha would be in denial of this fact and this would bring out the angst and sad emotions of this story. By the way, I asked a question in you livejournal, but I don't think answered it. The question is this: you wrote that "Naraku hadn't even made his cameo apparance" Does that mean thar Naraku is going to do something bad to them (like torture / rape and stuff)
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: DemonGoddess061 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 07:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, thank you Hellfyre for being such an EXCELLENT beta for Snow! ^-^ Now, on to the review.... OMFG!!! I couldn't quite picture just HOW he was going to accidentally do what he did, but that was PERFECT! And the FLUFFY voice! heheheheh. Yep, you had me laughing my ass off, AGAIN.
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj On: February 09, 2007 04:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was fun!! i was laughing (still at work!) and it was - is a good thing i'm alone in this part of the office. that was so good! saying thank you again to hellfyrre!!! nice way to begin my weekend (friday pm where i am) i absolutely like your descriptions of the two of them.... to each his own agenda... *laughing still* i'm going to be re-reading this again over the weekend ... where i can laugh to my heart's content (at home... i need a bit of circumspection when at work, one never knows if there's anyone lurking...) i like this chapter best of all so far, not because of the lemon but because its fun!! not funny, fun!
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Reviewed By: calenloke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 02:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOTALLY HOT!!!!!!! I think that was very very (breathing very heavily) lol. It was truly exciting to see little fluffy in his back. In the rare stories that Sesshoumaru is uke, it's never this well written. I was spellbound. It had character even through the act...delicious fever that I think she been a shocker...(very good) GREAT I mean. I think Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's denials are going to catch up to them. And when they continue on refusing to see the truth...(sigh)...I hope they can live with it. I love it..I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Azalea J. On: February 09, 2007 02:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh… wow. Just, wow. *Frantically fanning herself* When you said this chappie held the lemon- I didn't think the chappie WAS the lemon. A whole chapter lemon. Wow. And the writing was, and per usual- phenomenal. The ending was splendiferous. But I must say, my favorite part had to be right when the entire balance shifted, and fluffy finally got what he wanted. The surprise expressed and utter hotness of that moment- wonderful. Oh, and Sesshoumaru constantly arguing with that little inner part of himself; comic relief and foreshadowing in one- I loved it! So creative! And now if you'll excuse me... *Races to the start of the chapter and starts over*. -Azalea J.
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