| "One-Half a Wing and a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a fantastic chapter thank you for posting please update again a.s.a.l.a.= as soon as life alowes
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of hentai fanfics and yours is one of the best! Its fast paced and is never boring, I've read every chapter. Love what you did with Kasumi and I can actually see that happening. It's always the quiet ones ^_^ I just want to know if Ryoga is ever gonna tell Akane the truth and if Akane is gonna lighten up. I do feel sorry fo Kodachi in a way, because she aspired to be just like Kasumi, but went about it in the wrong way. There is definately something wrong with the Kuno clan and I think the Principle is to blame. Where's Sasuke by the way? Great story, great author, keep up the kick ass work, you're a favorite now!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent new chapter. Hehehe, I guess onna Ranma will have a new girl after her now... It would have been interesting if Kodachi had seen the scene in the shower but Akane's reaction won't be pretty I'm sure.
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Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 21:22 EDT
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Fantastic chapter keep them going I can't wait till the next chapter seriously this story is fantastic thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter by a great writer. Keep them going.. can't wait til next chapter... seriously... The end of the fight in 13 reminded me of a scene in Death Note, did you happen to use that as inspiration or was it just coincidence? Well anyways, the end was great. Whatever you do with the golden pair will be awesome. Keep up the GREAT work!
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 15:40 EDT
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Awesome fresh chapter. The Akane nosebleed was rich ^^
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 15:03 EDT
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Very well done. It's a great variation on the canon version of the battle against the 'Black Rose'. I also liked the "Divine Excrement, Flying Nocturnal Rodent Male Human" or in layman's terms: "Holy Crap, Batman"
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 12:15 EDT
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What the hell is "Divine Excrement, Flying Nocturnal Rodent Male Human"? I have no clue, but the end of chapter 13's little final twist is fricking awesome. Although, how Akane's gonna act once she learns about sex is gonna be an interesting question. Shit, how is she gonna act when she wakes up? "I blame you guys for turning me into a pervert!" I expect would be a start, at least when she runs away to her room. Neh. Anyway, love the story, I look very much forward to the next chapter. Later.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 00:11 EDT
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You sir, are an extremely skilled writer. Your plotting is good, flow works well, and the steamy is smokin'. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I think this is your best chapter so far. Definitelyone of the best written lemon stories I've ever read (mainly because there IS a plot and not just PWP). I also love your portrayal of Kasumi.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent new chapter. I like your portrayal of Kodachi. As twisted as always.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 10:39 EDT
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It's awesome to read another chapter of this story, and some congrats are in order for getting the 360, just don't neglect the real world either. I know I wouldn't. Anyway, latest chapter is awesome (and seeing Kodachi get a beatdown is always fun. Can't wait to see the actual match. And what is behind the name Kodachi has? Some other significance? Anyway, I think this story is, well, the shit, and is definitely something I want more chapters of. So, GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS, THE PRECIOUS DOES NOT LIKE TO BE KEPT WAITING!!! *said in Golem voice* (So awesome) Anyway, later.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 11:32 EDT
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Got to hand this to you ... your story's turning out real good! And getting better with each chapter ... Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read all 10 chapters in one sitting... very well thought out and put together. I'm loving this fic the more and more I read it. Please keep up the good work. I like how you don't just follow the anime/manga storyline and come up with your own ideas and events as well as tweaking the actual events to your liking. I haven't been on this site in a long time, but now I have a reason to check back to this site often. Once again, please keep up the good work. Nice cliffhanger at the end of chapter 10 (I hate when people do that because now I'll be checking almost everyday in April to see if you've added more to the story.)
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 06:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that this is one of the best stories I've ever read on any fanfiction site. Well written, excellent form, and a terrific idea. Also, changing Shampoo like that, brilliant. Keep up the excellent work.
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