| "One-Half a Wing and a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nightfyre Dono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truely love your story. I can't wait to see that next chapter. The fight should be a long one, with all sort of crazy stuff happen. Cya :P
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:54 EDT
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I haven't reviewed for a couple of updates, and I must say I'm very much liking this fic's direction. Akane never getting "The Talk" properly is spot-on, quite likely, and hilarious. I'm glad to see Shampoo back in the loop too. On a fun note, I'm anticipating Nabiki and Shampoo's reaction to the Neko-ken that Gosunguki will probably induce, and wondering how it will affect him in his succubi form. I think it's safe to predict that several people will be fucked. Figuratively and literally.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. Can't wait to see the battle between Genma and Ranma. He'll probably use the sealed techniques to win. And as Ranma can't use his succubus powers it will be tough.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 04:38 EDT
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Let's see. Ranma has Nabiki as his lover/fiancee, Kasumi as a willing battery, Kodachi ditto, Shampoo as a wife (albeit brainwashed but that won't likely last long), and Akane seems to be on the way. Hooboy. Umm... I really enjoy this story and all but is it going to end up a "Ranma the harem master" story? Please say 'no'. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply perfect once again.
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: DJinnai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well-written, entertaining story--as soon as I saw there was a new chapter, I had to read it. Looking forward to the new chapters (with baited breath, no less). Can't wait to see the resolution of the Ranma/Enema battle arc, and see how Shampoo fits in to Nerima! Keep it up, please!
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Title: i love this story
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 11:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have sed it befor i will say it again i love this story keep up the fantastic work and please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: Seth O Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and great chapter, I would love for you to update really quickly and see what the next chapter holds.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 17:12 EDT
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gha more write more lol i love this story thank you for the new chapter please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. I loved the scene at the beginning with Akane visiting the psychiatrist. Great job with that one. And finally Kasumi got some. It was high time. Will she gain special powers too, like Nabiki? The only thing that bothers me a bit is that Ranma and Nabiki had too difficult a time with dealing with Mikado and Azusa. With their combined power and perfect synchronization the fight should have been over in a few seconds.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent like always. Kodachi should maybe help Nabiki to teach Ranma how to iceskate. And Shampoo has arrived. Wonder what chaos she will cause.
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 15:07 EDT
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Short chapter this time but still awesome. I like how you left lots of possibilities for Kodachi. It's good to see her act something close to 'normal.' Keep up the good work as always.. and I'm looking forward to future chapters. =)
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Title: o my god! wow!
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 00:30 EDT
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O my god wow you have out done your self you rewrite and post two new chapters wow thank you so much well I beter get reading this is going to be a long night thank you.
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 00:01 EDT
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still going strong!!! keep up the good work =D
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. What else to expect ^_^. Quite frankly I don't think that you got your ideas from other fics, or if you do at least not from the most popular ones... and I've read at least 100-200 Ranma fics. About this chapter. Zhe meeting between Mikado and Ranma was well done. The idea of the match between Ranma and Genma is nice. Can't wait for that to happen. Akane's going to see a shrink? Well she should. Well done. And I see that you haven't finished with Kodachi. Can't wait to see what you've planned with her. How about a Ranma/Kasumi/Kodachi/Nabiki foursome *drool* ?
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