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| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love this story, and I finally finished it!!!!!!! Let me see . . . ittle to no spelling or grammer errors, so that increases the quality of the story, and an interesting plot as well. I notice that it seems like alll are going to be paired . . . And if so, does that mean Tyranno will be paired with someone? I'm sorry he's my fave character and I'd like to know, lol. But seriously, great idea here, with wonderful character developement and whatnot. Keep it up!!!! By the way, my enjoyment factor should've been 10+, not ten, lol.
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:55 CDT
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Here's an idea, someone going after the Pharaoh's power revives Tanyia. Then Tanyia and Ami fight over Bastion. I've always wanted something like that to happen to Bastion.
| Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Wow, I love this story, not only does it flow wonderfully, but it's not one of those short stories that leave you hanging!... I must say, this must be THE longest story I have ever read! :] Good job!
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 18:21 CDT
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Nice chapter as usual, especially this scene from the story: Yusuke and Hikari giggle at Atticus' `pet name' for his sister and Yusuke and Hikari say with a sly smile, "Sissy?" Alexis yells out, embarrassed, "Atticus! I told you to stop calling me that!" Yusuke gets a wide sly grin on his lips while both Hikari and Yusuke gave a few chuckles and Alexis gets an annoyed look causing her to plaster him on his head, which hurt because she is getting up to strength to match Yusuke and Hikari, thanks to her Sailor Scouts, demonic, and some spiritual powers from her human side of her blood. Yusuke holds his head and exclaims, "Yow! What was that for?!" Alexis retorts, in a serious tone, "For being a wiseass, Yusuke!" Yusuke yells at Alexis, annoyed, "Hey, Kari, chuckled at that `pet name' that your bro gave you, too!" Alexis replies, with a sly smile and tone, "Well, Kari is an older sibling and plus, she is a girl like me!" Yusuke yells out, angrily, "That's not fair!" Hikari replies, with a sly grin, "Sorry, bro, but out of Alexis, you, and me, you are the youngest twin sibling. Alexis and I were born before you. I was born five seconds before Alexis and she was born four seconds before you." Alexis tells Yusuke, with a sly smile, "That's what big sisters do, Yusuke." Yusuke mutters under his breath, annoyed, "Yeah, be bossy bitches." However, Alexis and Hikari heard that, they gain very annoyed looks at him, and both of them slam their fists into Yusuke's head. Hikari yells out, annoyed tone in her voice, "And that one was for your mouth, bro!" Kuwabara laughs at this and yells out, in a sly excited tone, "Looks like Kari got your number, Urameshi! Serve you right since you are the little baby of the `royal family tree'!" Kuwabara laughs at Yusuke, Yusuke gets pissed off, and before anyone could say or do anything, Yusuke roars out and knocks Kuwabara to the ground and temporary senseless with anime-spirals in his eyes. Yusuke cracks his knuckles and tells Kuwabara, in his typical annoyed tone, "Oh, yeah, big mouth! Remember, even through I'm trying to get rid of the `street punk' rep, that doesn't mean that I can't kick your butt into next Tuesday, Kuwabara! Remember that!" Keiko, Botan, and Koemna sigh and sweatdrop and Keiko says, with a weak smile, "Some things will never change . . . including Yusuke's temper." Ami, Rei, Mina, Lita, Hotaru, and Serena sweatdrop at this and Mina says, nervously, "Wow. And I thought that Rei and Serena arguments and fights was bad." Ami nods her head and says, nervously and amazed, "I'll say, Mina." Serena says, nervously, "And I thought that I had gained one nasty temper." Kagome gives a sigh and says, "I come from one weird family tree." Inuyasha tells Kagome, "I'll say." Kagome gives Inuyasha an annoyed stare and he yells out, in his usual defensive tone, "What?! I was just agreeing with you!" At that point, I thought Kagome's will 'sit' Inuyasha for that comment and I have a request for the next chapter, you know about Kagome 'weird illiness' that her grandfather has told her friends, can you make it that Kagome's is rumored as the 'sick girl', much like Yusuke's 'Great Urameshi' rep.
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO COOL! Loved the chapter. But I got to ask, when is Bastion gonna duel? I'm going stir crazy. If you're having trouble making a Light deck for Bastion let me know. Patinator from ff.net is making a deck for my fics and if it gets done soon and you still are having trouble you can use my Bastion Light Deck. Other than that good chapter.
| Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: June 01, 2007 14:39 CDT
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This fic has virtually no downside, you mix all the animes together perfectly! I can't wait for your next part. Jaden vs Yami Marik! I'd pay money to see Jaden face my favourite Yu-gi-oh villain on screen! Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 00:17 CDT
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Me: Another kick ass chapter. But why did Serena have to hit my Bastion in the face? His face and his groin are the only places I wanted unharmed.*cries* Lena: Bastion, you're still handsome in our eyes!*cries* Kittuna: You just had to get them started didn't you. Me:*notices Lena and Kittuna* What are you two doing here?! I thought I told you to send Noire back to outofstategirl. You two have tortured Noire for two months now. ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! Lena: We did. But we got bored and noticed the mediaminer door open. Me: It's bad enough I have to put up with you two on ff.net. You have a reason to be there because you were created on ff.net, BUT STAY AWAY FROM MEDIAMINER! It's my safe haven from you two. Lena and Kittuna: NEVER! We will follow you everywhere! Me: What did I do to deserve this?! Lena: You wanted us out of your mind so you asked Agent Malkere to create us in her fanfiction Attack of the Fan Girls. Me: Don't remind me! Gallantmon of the Hazard I'm sorry that the two lunatics showed up. Now that they found mediaminer they'll never want to leave. Lena is a Bastion fan girl and Kittuna is a Evil Sartorius fan girl. Read Attack of the Fan Girls to find out more about Lena and Kittuna. Keep up the good work and I'll try to keep these two from my Destiny Stars reviews. Lena and Kittuna: MANY HAVE TRIED BUT ALL HAVE FAILED! Me: If you two don't leave I'll read fanfiction that bashes both Bastion and Sartorius! Lena and Kittuna: Eeep!*both run out of the room* Me: Who needs an evil entitiny in your body when you have to deal with those two. Well see ya and I'll be looking forward to more Yu-Gi-Oh GX crossover updates.
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 23:15 CDT
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Bastion quickly takes out a pair of glasses, puts them over his eyes, and he asks, nervously, "Now, you wouldn't hit someone with glasses on?" Serena's dark angered sneer stays just as strong as ever, she gives a dark angered snort, she puts the palm on her right hand on his chest, using her super-strength to keep him pinned to the wall, lowers her right legs back to the ground, Serena then takes the glasses off of Bastion's face, drops them to the ground, and crushes them flat with her left foot. Bastion winches in fear and asks, nervously, "I'm going to get hurt, aren't I?" Serena retorts, in a dark serious tone, "In the words of Chazz Princeton: `What was your first clue Sherlock?'" That's one of the funniest quote I've heard and also can you have in the next chapter, besides Serena, have Jaden and Alexis be trained by Genkai as well.
| Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: May 22, 2007 14:54 CDT
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What can i say? It keeps getting better and better! Sartorius on the ropes and almost out, Prince Diamond in the game and someone else in the shadows. Love to know who it is next chapter, maybe Togoro, Suzaku, Yami Marik? (just my guesses!) I'm thinking of starting a fic of my own if i get the time, which do you think sounds better: a crossover with Tekken or one with Command and Conquer? There'll be lots of SOL hurt whichever you prefer!
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 12:23 CDT
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Another nicely done story.
| Title: How about in the next chapter
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 23:18 CDT
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How about for the finisher in the duel with Frantz Jaden summons the true Winged Dragon of Ra that Serena gave to him when she found out that he is going after Frantz.
| Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love the Story!!
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another kick ass chapter. Keep up the good work. But when are you going to update Destiny Stars? That was the first fic I read of yours that I liked. Please update that fic soon.
| Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:9 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though Bastion was hardly in this chapter, IT TOTALLY KICKED ASS!! Keep up the good work. I'm a little sad that you won't be able to update Destiny Stars and Darkness Moon for awhile but I'll be waiting for those updates.
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