| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. But Bastion was barely in so I give the chapter 8 out of 10. But I really like the part where Sailor Moon freaked Crowler out, that was funny. Is Bastion gonna get his revenge against the Light of Ruin soon? Just want to know.
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Reviewed By: gmredninja25 On: August 12, 2007 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am liking this fic, well done so far. As I read the preview for next time, I wondered, what if Nephlite came back, and tried to help Serena get Molly back, so I'm just going to present it as a suggestion. Weather it's used or not, I can say that I look forward to the continuation of this fic, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: August 09, 2007 14:53 CDT
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Talk about a battle royale! Love to see Yeshua duel as well plus can the Negaverse/Negamoon forces clash with the SOL too? Can't see Sartorius standing up to true dark side fighters! Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Tri-Edge of the Azure Flames On: August 06, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your story. It is truely a work of art but the second season is coming to a close and you still have not allowed Yeshua a single duel. I took great pride in designing every one of his angelic cards and would love to see them in action before I retire the character for another one.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 12:28 CDT
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Nice work, but you said in the next chapter that Serena will duel with the powers of the Shadow Games without her Millennium Necklace. How will she do that?
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Reviewed By: CelticHero [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just two things. One: I was Anonymous2 and Anonymous99. Two, was isn't Pluto upgraded?
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 09:56 CDT
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WOOT!!!!! KEEP UPDATING I MUST READ MORE ASAP!!!! (glomps Tyranno) I adore Tyranno . . . wee . . . (goes off to write) Perhaps Sailor Heaven Star and Sailor Hell Star can get him, hmmm . . .
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great new chapter !!!!!!! finally and how about this you know about the messiahs i was thinking about sovereighn level and how it can have different forms like purity,crystal,dragon,and twilight and maybe put in other ideas its your story but we can give ideas right
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL CHAPTER! I like it, especially the duel with Bastion. But when is Bastion gonna get the powers of darkness? Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters.
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Title: wake up
Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 18:44 CDT
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helloooooooooooo hurry up and update whats taking you so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hurry
Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 18:53 CDT
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hurry and update the fic its too good to stop
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 17:07 CDT
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Excellent as always go you!!!!!! hope to see more ASAp . . . and more Tyranno too lol.
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Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: July 21, 2007 18:01 CDT
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How much better can this get!? Those 2 so called teachers devastated (that was a favourite!) and the SOL humiliated again. Why a dark side killer like Klaus would ally with those losers is beyond me. Looking forward to the massive battle next part!!
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Title: new charecters
Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 22:32 CDT
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what if you put in the asteroid senshi that is mini moon's team in the battle and others to make it more exciting
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapteer i can't wait for that big clash oh yeah can jaden's friends from his formerly past be part of jaden's court too that would be so awsome now how about the roon idea i'd say do that with crowler i'd think he deserves it.
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