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| "Never for the Public..." Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: scribs On: July 18, 2007 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brava! Brava! Brava! I admit that I was a little apprehensive when I read your warnings about the rape/gore in the earlier chapters, but I'm glad I decided to give it a try. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style and the story you've decided to share. :) It's been a long, long while since I've watched Rurouni Kenshin, but you brought Kenshin and Kaoru (lovingly) back to me. :D 'Bout your Japanese: it's often very easy to want to swap English words with Japanese words, but done without awareness, it becomes jarring or stilted, so I'm very impressed with the way you blended the language seamlessly into the writing. Even without the glossary, I think most readers wouldn't have a problem getting the context. :) Also appreciated your lime/lemon tags--as one other reviewer said, that was very considerate. Especially for readers who might not want to read the too explicit material, or.. for the reader who looks eagerly to them. ;) Thank you for sharing; I had a great time reading.
| Title: am so grateful
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X. On: July 15, 2007 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is finished... ^_^ thanks for writing this way too original and wonderful epilogue. if i didn't know better, this could have been a oneshot. kenshin and kaoru remained in character and i really liked the addition of those two characters. it was such a beautiful and heartbreaking scene of having kenshin be comforted by the whole family. ayame and suzume are so cute and understanding chibis ^^d kisho was a wonderful character, i like him too :) thanks for writing fanfiction and sharing it with all of us, it was a very fun read. good luck with your other works and if you need another one to proofread your work, i'd gladly volunteer. good luck again, plyric, ja!
| Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 20:42 EDT
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Wahhhhh its all over. Booo Hooo. I want more Kenshin. I wanted to see Kenji's birth. But atleast you left it at a good point. Great story. Can't see if you make another one.
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 17:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and they never did get to find out how kaoru and kenshin met... good chapter, could have been a story on it's own. . . ya know i'll be looking for more stories from you so don't take too long. ~ciao, ginny
| Title: YATTA!~~
Reviewed By: takada-san On: July 08, 2007 11:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you added an epilogue today! i love it,, sweet and gosh,, i really love the way you write!! i was rereading your story and when i was about to click on another chapter, i noticed this new chapter, and just have to read it!!!! wow, really,, oh, are you making doujinshis too? i'm reading some RK kenshin kaoru doujins right now,, ^^
| Title: sincerely awaiting an epilogue
Reviewed By: meetALEX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! it's done... i'm still awaiting for the epilogue you've said you're working on :) hehehe i liked the ceremony, it's more, um, modern :P and yey! no white makeup for kaoru :P holding hands is PDA?! haha! what will they say about the present meaning of PDA?! tsktsk... really had fun with your story, am trying to reread it again sometime soon. good luck with writing more stories, thanks for sharing them with us too ^_^
| Title: WOW.......
Reviewed By: anime_fushigi On: June 18, 2007 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!!!! ^_^ WAIII!!! >.< its just TOO CUTE!!!! *sigh* this review is for teh ENTIRE story since i was too lazy to review each one indevisualy......*sigh*.......w/e.....i just LOVED the way you ended this fic....it's so sweet and heartfelt!
| Reviewed By: takada-san On: June 13, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh,, a perfect ten! i wanna rate and forgot to do it. dumb. shocks,, i can imagine how hot and hmmm yummy kenshin is with every chapter!! kenshin and kaoru are so made for each other, no doubt!!! and your story just made me repeat something to myself.. kenshin and kaoru are so made for each other, no doubt!!! i really find the other members of the kenshin-gumi so funny! i really have to laugh,, i mean, it's really funny how they tease kenshin and kaoru.. ^^,, and damn, kenshin and kaoru's making love sessions are way steamy!! hot.. and steamy!
| Title: kyah.....!!!
Reviewed By: takada-san On: June 13, 2007 09:12 EDT
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this is the best rated fic i've ever read!! and i finished it and never even got bored!!!^^, i have a confession to make, i'm way young to read stuff like this,, but i've read quite a lot... *forgive me, kami!!*,, i really love it,, and just really got hanged up with kenshin's dream at the end,, coz i was like, "what? that was the ending? tomoe? gah," i don't even like it when they kissed even if she just visited kenshin in his sleep. you can definitely say i am sooo not liking tomoe. but i do like the way tomoe left kenshin when akira suddenly went to the picture, that was just.. so cute. but kenshin and kaoru are way cuter... and sweeter! and more romantic! okay, i'll stop. .... ...kenshin and kaoru forever!! haha. i can't help it. i love them.
| Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:47 EDT
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Kenshin with no top on yummy. It's been a great story and I am proud to have been following from the begining. Can't wait to see the epilogue and actually to read another story by you. Must have more naked Kenshin. I've gotten better at sharing I promise.
| Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 00:59 EDT
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oo Yay. I liked your ceremony! I would have been like pshh this works as a ceremony and just throw something down. But since they were already married it didnt have to be a BIG thing and i lurved it. Confetti for you! ~Rosie
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 01:33 EDT
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a coconut alergy!! don't feel too bad, i'm developing a sensitivity to chocolate =/ ~~~ aw, sweetness and fluff! chocolate covered kittens! ~~~ i shall be looking forward to your epilogue and many more wonderful stories written by you in the future... please inform your disgruntled reviewers who don't like the mixed languages that japanese manga/anime mixes english with japanese all of the time and a fan fiction author should not be maligned for doing the same. emulating the creator is the true aspiration of the craft. . . take a very short break and WRITE MORE STORIES!! ~ >=) ~~~ always a pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: Laughedalot On: April 28, 2007 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. The last few chapters really made me laugh. Keep up the good work.
| Title: clueless ~_~''
Reviewed By: Meet.A.L.E.X. On: April 24, 2007 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
for starters, i don't think i can answer the question you posed before the chapter... haha! -naive, dork warning yet again- ^_^ i loved the WAFF on this chapter, it was sweet, and honestly, for once i now understand how sometimes couples still are able to deal with early pregnancies before marriage without the feeling of guilt or shame. having a child borne out of love should never be hidden, society just sometimes can be too judgmental -small smile- haha! i am amused and sometimes more irritated about the fact that they are most usually CITA :P and yahiko entering their bedroom got my ears pink with irritation more than the megumi incident since the bedroom is private and the dojo really is a public place :P but kenshin handled that well enough, and it's a good thing kaoru's still asleep. kaoru giving kenshin a hickey was a nice way of retaliation :P can't wait for the wedding, kenshin was sooo sweet with preparing everything. you know, it's fun how your story has evolved into a tragic one to a really happy story. more! more! :) thanks for sharing your story. ja! ^_^
| Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 00:02 EDT
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Haha Yay update! At first i was confused about the marriage thing, but i got it now. ^-^ Poor Kenshin and Kaoru getting the hell embarassed out of them. I love it! Happy Writing! ~Rosie P.S. I cannot truthfully answer your question because i have not been able to compare the two. XD
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