| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: jensu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
next chapter please^_^ man i love this story so far^_^
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 16:56 EDT
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Update soon please! Arashi meet your son! Uzumaki Naruto!
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Title: Why
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 01:31 EDT
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Why is it all in italics? More please and it's A_bigfoot37 though I'd prefer my FF.N Pen name: Anime Insaniac.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This great! Can you update soon please? Also, can you make the chapters linger?
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:37 EDT
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I like the story. My kids would probably be able to pick out the timeline problems that the one reviewer did since they are huge Naruto fans. I've become very interested in Naruto (not as much as Inuyasha, but close). This story is well written and very interesting. I hope that writing it helps get you out of your funk. In the meantime, we will get to enjoy your self therapy. It's a win/win situation. Later, Fyrloche.
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Title: Problems
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't appear to have that much data on Naruto do you. Kakashi was only 26 when he actually passed a team, meaning that he was 14 when the Kyuubi attacked Konoha and if you add 14 and 17 that makes 31. You're also exagerating the time skip by 2 1/2 years. Naruto is only gone from Konoha for 2 1/2 years but you're making him be away for 5 years. I seriously don't think anyone close to Naruto, especially Hinata, could be away from Naruto for that long. I specify Hinata because she was the only person to see Naruto for who he really is for a while, she was the only one that could see through the facade he put up. You may want to correct a few of these errors. You got something here, I've seen things similar to it but nothing exactly like it so I'll keep my eyes peeled for updates.
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Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i havent been here in so long. update soon!
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