| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed reading this fanfiction so far because it is very realistic. those are obviously always the best ones. i can't help but wonder though, if you are going to do a flash back of when sasuke and sasami left the sound?
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:59 EDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!!?!?! YOU LEAVE ME AT A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO!?!?!?!?!!?!? T.T You're so evil!!! They're acting like chum chums! Wooo! I normally don't like Sasuke, but he seems tolerable in your story. I didn't know someone could do that. o.o Good for you! ~squeals and falls to the floor~ HEHEHE NARUTO AND SASUKE GETS A FAMILY!!!! ~girly squeal~ O.O OMG WTH DID I JUST DOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ~collapses to the ground in shame~ (i know, really random much o.o) ~shoots herself with a shuriken and kuts myself with a kunai~ SHAMEFUL KITSUTORA!!! BAD!!! NO GIRLY SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Please update soon. (i'm not phychotic! I'm just on crack >.> [not really])
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:24 EDT
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You and those cliffy's, but that is all right I love this story. Keep up with the excelent work.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 02:17 EDT
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Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why stop there it was getting to the good part!!! But that is also a good cliffy!!! Please write more soon don't keep in suspence or I might just slice some random person with my katanna !!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 10:08 EDT
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noooooooo haw could you stop the story just like that its not right you are soooooo cruel im going to cry
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 08:29 EDT
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Great chapter I loved it the cliffy is great I cant wait to see how this develops!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story kees getting better and better please update soon
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 18:39 EDT
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Really good as usual, I really love your fanfic so far, it's getting really deep. and... YAY!!!!!!!! YOU PUT NARUTO AND HINATA TOGETHER!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!! Lol, well I don't know what much to say, (did I mix up my words?) You should toy around with some other couples too (i like Shikamaru Temari pairings personally) -^.^- teeeheee lol jk but seriously, that's a cute couple, just a suggestion though. Question, what does Sasmi's grandfather having the snake summoning contract stolen from him have to do with the whole situation? You gonna explain it in future chapters? I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 09:21 EDT
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delightful as ever. Keep up with the great work.
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:00 EDT
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Wow1!!! That was unexecpeted that the snake contract was stolen from sasami's grandfather. The story is totaly awesome as always. Keep up the awesomw work!!!^_*
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 10:22 EDT
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I am really getting more and more into this with every chapter and I have to say I am as hyped about updates for this is I am about the manga great chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 17:51 EDT
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It was a little jerky and I agree I like the Sasuke Sami moments espiecially the peek at his 'memory' all around a good chapter and as always I look forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 13:29 EDT
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That was an awsome chapter. Really, can't wait for you to up date.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 13:00 EDT
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UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGgggggggggggg, Love the cliffies. Wonderful Chappy.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you've been around me too long. You are quite adept at the use of cliff hangers. I like the story but you are having a little trouble with some of your spelling and grammar. It's not that you are misspelling the words as much as you are using the wrong spelling. Ex.- then should have been than. Most of your mistakes are like that which is why spell check doesn't get them. You are not getting the spelling wrong, just the wrong spelling for what you are saying. Otherwise, this is a great story. I look forward to your next chapter. Later, Fyrloche.
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