| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShyaRie. On: March 10, 2011 12:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i simpely loved the story. more to the point,I WANT MORE CHAPPIES PLEASE...XD.. like i was saying on AFF,i totally,totally,totally love this fic. can't wait to see what happens next. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...XD..yers truely S.R. |
Reviewed By: nechrono21 On: March 12, 2010 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude! wheres the next bit, yo? why aint you written in like 2 years? I WANNA SEE NARUTO KICK SOME ASS! :) oh...btw...great effin story bro :)
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Reviewed By: hakutou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was waiting for an update on this story because I love it so much. It's great in that there is a story line that while serious it is still entertaining. Personally I like the name Arashi for Naruto's dad but I just have to get used to the other name. But anywayz you are an excellent writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 20:29 EDT
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This is really good. You should really update this story on adult fanfiction. I'm just really glad I found this on here. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 13:40 EST
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HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!? I THOUGHT WE HAD SOMETHING!!! FOR WHAT REASON DID YOU BREAK MY HEART AND LEAVE ME AT THAT CLIFF HANGER! THERE WAS A CONNECTION!!! T.T lol, write more soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amaleea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! I just starting reading it yesterday, and I couldn't stop! I hope you will get out of your writer's block soon! Your theories are amazing and well thought out and they actually make sense.I love the Kyuubi's connection with everyone. Your broken and now whole family is amazing! I am so glad you brought the Yondaime back and that Naruto and Sasuke are now brothers. Poor Hinata! I wish there was a way for her to fight back. Naruto is hers and like she did with those fan girls, I hope she can find a way to state her claim. Though Naruto's bethrothed is not a bad person, and it would be wrong to hurt her for something out of her control. Maybe Naruto's Grandfather could have a change of heart. You could also have her fall in love with someone else. Neji? That actually might appease her father as another woman he was supposed to marry married Neji's father. But her father is crazy... That might not work.Though, this is your story. I am sure you can come up with something good! Amazing job! I can't wait for the other chapters.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 14:26 EDT
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Chapter 4: I find it strange that the entire story is in italics - it makes it a bit difficult to read. Interrupting the story flow, in my opinion. But anyways, its a pretty nice story, though the chapters are all incredibly short thus far.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Naruto fan fic I have ever read keep writting.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 04:34 EDT
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Nooo!!! Please don't bang your head you might split it open and then how are you gonna read your reviews from your fans like me!!! Please keep trying your doing a great job!!!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To think Sasuke has that ability now, sheesh watch out enemies of Konoha. I knew someone was gonna get hit with the needle. I was secretly hoping it was Ryo lol oh well. I doubt that'll be the first and last attempt on the Uzamaki's life.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't bang your head to hard, might cause brain damage, and then you wouldn't be able to think and continue the story. Which by the way is sooo asome and cool.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 14:58 EDT
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wow, that is it wow.
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Title: woo hoo
Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read all the chapters up to 75 and all I can say is wow 0.0 it blows my mind. When I watch the actually anime of Naruto I have to remind myself it's not the same as this story ^_^. It's a very creative story and I can totally place myself in the story and picture everything that's happening. By the way the part with Sasuke getting some blonde hair made me laugh soooo hard! At first I thought he would get mad to look like the dobe but I think you were right with his reaction all the way! I can't wait to continue reading it! Starting at this point I'll review each chapter just to let you know how awesome the story is =^_^=
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Title: G R E A T
Reviewed By: Train1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
G R E A T this FF is simply great...I've read it in a rush...you are a quiet good writer. I really hope, that you write your next chapters, very fast!!! I can't wait, this story has the same side effects like drugs to mee ;) GO AHEAD!!! mfg Train1
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 03:10 EDT
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Awwww!!!! Poor Naruto and hinata!!!! I wish I could help but I can't!!! I wonder how naruto is gonna deal with the whole Ultimate demon lord coming!!! I just can't wait to see what happens next!!!!1
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