| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its been a while since i reviewed its only cuz i've been so absorbed in the story so congrats on a great story
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Title: Ameteretsu
Reviewed By: midnyte_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing is an 8 because I know from expirence that there is always room for improvement. Did you know that Ameteretsu is the Japanese goddess of the sun? Sopposedly all life sprung from her and the Japanese Emporer is a direct decendent, because the firts was (or claimed to be) her celestial child on earth. If you did, that's a great paralelle that adds a nice eerie quality to an already astounding plot twist. If you didn't now you do and the coiencidence adds something to the story. This is one of my favorite pieces of writing, and reading (either fanficcs or otherwise) is all I do, so it's high praise. (I cant afford a tv, nor do I want one, I know about naruto from the manga and internet) Keep up the fabulous work, and if you feel that you need a beta for anything, please drop me a line. Ja Midnyte
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 11:17 EDT
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Oh and I for got, the referance to Yu Yu Hakashu also Kurama was my fav. lol, keep up with teh excelent work.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:34 EDT
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I have noticed quiet a few time that there is a lot of refference to Inuyasha,,,,,, I am also a big fan of the anime. Love what you did to incorperate them in the story.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, milady! It's been a while. Excellent work. I am enjoying this story and thought that I would drop you a line to tell you. chuckles It seems that I am not the only one to have ideas for the fox demon that inhabits Naruto. Though, my own idea went back to Inuyasha. I thought about Naruto running into Kagome and the fox recognizing her as it's mother! Better still, Kagome recognizing the youki signature of the fox and her having a fit trying to get 'Shippou' unsealed from Naruto! It's food for thought anyway. sighs I haven't been able to write lately. There was a breast cancer scare with my wife and my mind has been focused on that. I tried but my heart wasn't in it and the story suffered. Fortunately, everything turned out okay so I am back into writting form again. We'll get back to work on 'Cat-alyst' soon. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:39 EDT
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I like your reasoning supporting it whole heartedly and as always I look forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 15:51 EDT
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I really like this story but I am confused since Sasuke killed Orochimaru what is he going to do with the sound village will he become the new leader oh well just keep up the great work and update soon please
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Reviewed By: harumikomi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 05:06 EDT
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u r 1 of my fave authors.u noe y?cuz u update evryday!!!Bwahahaha!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 09:33 EDT
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You are mean, But as it goes I love the story as it is, Keeps me interested and intriged. How did you find the time to research everything about the show? Well anyway keep up with the exclent work.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 03:24 EDT
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Poor Umiko!!! It's sad that dhe cares for naruto and his dad but has to betray them also. But the story is awesome!!!! So keep writing more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 17:12 EDT
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Nice chaps I could see why Naruto is jealous. Umiko is really confusing is she with or against the leaf; can't wait to se how that turns out.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man that was cool, poor Naruto to be jealous like that great chapter as always looking forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 00:27 EDT
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Perhaps I'm mistaken, but wasn't Arashi the hero in a war against Rock, not Cloud?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:57 EDT
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I feel.......happy!!!! Loved the Chap
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 15:38 EDT
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thanks for the permission to use base ideas : ) i dont know what i'm going to use for Naruto's mothers name though. im thinking of two names tho; kijutsu, tejina. both mean magic, but im thinking that i could say that one reason Naruto's father was attracted to her was cuz "jutsu" was in her first name. so im thinking of using kijutsu : ) kinda fits ne? anyways, keep going, your fanfic is going really well! and i liked that little bonus story at the end, although i didnt get to read it all cuz i had to go to school. (i didnt have to be in school until a later time and had a lil time to read but when i came back my desktop had nothing on it -_-) but when i can i'll go back and read the rest. o and i liked that part about Hinata's handkerchief calming Naruto while he was all demonic hehehehee nice very nice touch. -^^- NARUTO X HINATA FOREVA BIZATCHES!!!! (sorry for the outburst) will Umiko and Arashi get together in your story? u put her in quite a spot T.T how horrible yet so awesome! in a fanficcy type way >.> anyways! i like the way you describ Sasuke and what he does, even though i really dislike Sasuke (he's emo and i can't stand guys who are emo i dont know why either) its weird but its very true. oooooo and i loved the fact that you had Naruto actually accept a hug from his dad soooooooooooooo what they both need!!!!!!!!! and omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg i had sugar O.O not really irrelevent but... (goes on forever saying stupid pointless stuff that no one understands) and furthermore i act like im high even though that's far from the truth. ^^ ~crickets~ yeah i'm done -_- ^^;;; gomenasai keep up the good work! can't wait to read more!!!!
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