| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 03:22 EDT
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Oh gosh Hinata I feel so bad for you after all those years and now you have him but lose him is so sad it's making me cry. But sasuke is right about naruto. When his stomach growles he becomes a bottomless pit!!! I am so happy that you wrote another chapter it made me jump around in my house in happiness!!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 12:06 EDT
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Oh my what a predicument that is now a good one. I hope Naruto gets out from under this. So please write as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 10:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hinata. I can see her confronting Ayeka and telling her that she had better not hurt Naruto.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO ON HINATA! KICK THE BITCH'S ASS!!! YEAH!!! THAT'S WHAT I WANT TO SEE! HINATA BEATING THE CRAP OUT OF THIS GIRL! Ha! Great chapter! I was wondering though, did you get some names from Tenchi Muyo?
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 07:05 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, as usual. Naruto in an arranged marriage. Hinata is going to hit the roof with Neji right behind her. Neji has even more reason to hate the cloud village than Hinata and he definately isn't going to like the pain that his cousin will be put through by them if they insist on this marriage. Of course, there is always a way out, Naruto will just have to find it. Maybe he can get his brother to take his place? LOL
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 03:58 EDT
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oh no!!! Will there be war over the two nations cause if so let me help naruto too! Anyways I love your fic and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 08:07 EDT
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I have really enjoyed your story alot I just ask that you not make Sasuke or Naruto a Kage of the cloud village it just wouldnt fit.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 00:37 EDT
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Holy crap!!! ......0.o Naruto wait for me into the unconscious world from this shock !! ( fall on to the floor and enter unconscious world ) Please write some more so i can wake up again from this shock.......
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:33 EDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU STORY SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT SAY MUCH MORE CUZ IM SO FLIPPING HYPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~runs around and jumps off a cliff singing mary had a little lamb while sipping sake and flapping my arms like wings~
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 11:22 EDT
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wonderful as usual. I love it when that fuzz ball comes out like that. Keep out the excelent work.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonCat10101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 22:11 EDT
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This is......beautiful, y-your going to make me cry...Why are you so good? I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Drac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 17:52 EDT
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Definately loving the story you set up. This is great. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Neat story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story whatever all the chapters have been interesting. wanna hear all of it.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 11:31 EDT
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He better take that offer. I know I have not read this in many days but it was worth the wait to do so. Keep up with the excelent work. and update soon.
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Title: PLEASE update
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 10:33 EDT
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Please, please update!! I like your story. It has a few grammatical errors, but it's pretty good, and very believeable, if you would only update! (silent sobs) I want to know what happens!!
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