| "My Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hkbff On: May 02, 2013 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this fic. I really hope you continue it. I know it's been almost a year, but I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: x_short On: September 18, 2012 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the type of juicy dark fanfic that I've been looking for! I LOVE how it explores both the pleasurable and not so great side of sex and submission, especially with the contrasting emotions of how she felt about Inuyasha and Naraku. I love it, please update soon, I can't wait till Inuyasha realizes he loves her more than as a "pet." |
Reviewed By: oz9607 On: July 11, 2012 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE IT AND ALL BUT IT JUST SEEMS SOO TORTURED. IF I WAS KAGOME I WOULD HAVE KILLED MYSELF THE SECOND HE BRANDED MY ENTIRE BODY AND PREVENTED ME FROM HAVING CHILDREN. THAT IS SIMPLY A LINE YOU DO NOT CROSS. I WOULD KILL MYSELF TO BE FREE AND TO SPIT HIM!!! HOPE INUYASHA HAS A HUGE REVALATION OR AT LEAST WALKS IN ON KAGOME ATTEMPTING TO KILL HERSELF, SAVES HER, AND THEN SUFFERS FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFE. IF ANYTHING I WANT KAGOME TO GO INTO THAT VOID STATE WHERE NOTHING MATTERS ANYMORE JUST SO THAT SHE CAN SHOW INUYASHA THE SHIT HE PUT HER THROUGH AND CAUSED HER. SORRY FOR THE RANT, BELIEVE ME I LOVE THIS STORY I JUST HATE THE INUYASHA IN IT. BUT IF ITS ANY CONSTELLATION, YOU ARE ONE AWESOME WRITER. =D |
Reviewed By: kazanova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2012 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got so into reading the fiction, I almost forgot to review. >=[ I should probably do it now before I forget again while reading the other chapters. Anyways, I love the plot and the characterization of the characters in this story. The story feels so real, and so do the characters. My heart always drops at the end of a chapter because I feel like it's going to be the last ;~; and I don't want it to end! Thank you for sharing this with us. |
Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: July 04, 2012 01:10 EDT
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OMG YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 YEARS....OMG I've been watching this for 2 years i was ready to kill the bookmark thinking you'd never come back! |
Reviewed By: Lainita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 19:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoy this story! inuyasha's attitude makes me mad though. i cant wait for him to re-deem himself (i hope he does anyway...) i hope you continue the story and appreciate your work (since we all have crazy lives after all) =)
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update again? :'(
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Title: HURRY UP!!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I've been waiting for you to update for like ever!!!!! OME!!!! THis chapter was..second to best...I wonder whats going to happen now that Kagome and inu have done the dirty deed and done it!!!!! I can't wait til you post the next chapter!!!!! Hope you post it real soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: May 13, 2009 11:20 EDT
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OMG!! I was worried you had given up on this story XD you totally made myday out of a sheer hope that you wouldn't give up i still check this fic every couple of days when i do my rounds my heart skipped a beat when I noticed you had updated XD~ sorry to hear you've been sick I do hope you get to feeling better...I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: mymichelle On: May 11, 2009 23:15 EDT
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I'm really loving this fic so far, you're a very talented writer! However I did notice some inconsistancies, especially in chapter 14. Kagome's hands are shackled to the bed frame at the beginning, but then a few lines later she's digging her nails into inuyasha's back. Perhaps there's a line I neglected to read, but if there isn't just a heads up! keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 08:41 EDT
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yayyy u updated!! lol well even if it was pretty short it was still a really good chapter and definetly better than nothing. so kagome does ballet?? OoOo i wonder wat inuyashas gona do when he finds out cuz he will find out rite?? N wats up wit Koga? r dey lyk "together" or sumthing?? Hmmm interesting i cant wait to see hw dis plays out. update again soon! -FoxyLove
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, took u a long time, huh? I'm just glad that you didn't give up! Oh, and I'm sorry that you got sick, And I can't wait for those longer updates! C ya!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 19:50 EDT
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haha i love kouga... he's so adorable... i really want to know what you have planned for him.. can't wait for your next update! =)
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Title: (=
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 16:43 EDT
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yay! an update! I'm glad you finally updated for so long, I'm excited to see how kagome gets her revenge. Inu's an ass. Fame? happinesss? Sounds good, UPDATE SOOON!(=
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your such a good writter that no matter what your story's great! Hope your better and thanks for the update
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