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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: November 06, 2007 17:49 EST
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heh. Kagome afraid of needles... I was too, i guess, but since the rabies vaccinations i don't really notice them. oh.. wait... you don't know that story... well... abatwasinapoolsoipickedituptokeepitfromdrowninganditbitmeandittestedpositiv eforrabiessoigotthevaccinationsandnowi'mbetter! YAY! But enough about me... the story! Yay!!! I can't believe Inuyasha would do something like that to her! bGarrgh! The short story was pretty cute... I really liked it. Maybe you could have a sort of epilouge to the mini stroy next chapter? Well, it's your decision. I won't say anything. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Stream0ftears On: November 03, 2007 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A truly interesting story you have going on here. Youre a fantastic writer! Keep up the good work.And Good luck on your 50,000 word novel!
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: November 02, 2007 02:46 EDT
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Woot! YAYAYAYA lol greatness as always. I'm not so patiently awaiting mid december lol
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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: November 01, 2007 19:30 EDT
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oh my god. please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. i love this story! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: sheila On: October 31, 2007 21:15 EDT
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OMG!! NOOOO!!!! oh god u gna b those authros that neva finish their stories arent ya?!?!....plz dnt forget this...we want u 2 finish it
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Reviewed By: ThatGirlWithTheHair On: October 31, 2007 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. Absolutly wicked. Yay for this story. Haha, please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 17:10 EDT
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AWW.. the short story was adorable. And the REAL story well that was teasingly short. But i did like it. Especially how she was ever so deteremined to not be defeated. But to mark like that on her chest. Now she cant hide it unless she is like wearing turtle necks and high neck line tees. But hey you cant blame him he IS determined, and is purely an ass. lol =D well HAPPY HALLOWEEN to you too. I might be to old to go trick a treating but I think i deserve some fun. lol PLUS i wants me some candy!!! HAHAHAHAH! Well Ciao!
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Title: Say0mi Saki
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I already reviewed this story on ff.net as Say0mi Saki but I love this story too much to leave unreviewed on one website! Please update soon...I just need to read more! Inuyasha really is being cruel i thought he was starting to get a little sweeter but instead he TATTOOED her WITHOUT her KNOWING!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... so inuyasha had kagome branded... wonder what he plans to do now... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dogdemon ri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 21:15 EDT
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its good. and i think you should continue your story as you wish it to be and not what others want it to be. it defeats the purpose of writing for yourself and you wont enjoy it as much
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Im going to try my hardest of how I see this story. lol That sounds like Im about to bash it. HA! Like I would. Your story is very unique. Though there are stories about slavery. This is different. Though Inuyasha is suppose to be ruthless, I think he is getting a little to far out of character. Well at least not yet he has to be ruthless alittle longer. Because you know he ddint like her really til after the Yura battle and the sword time in the grave. But this story is great though tome some thing is missing. Something that good make it so m uch better. Though I am still trying to determine what that is. I wanted to ask i fyou planned on putting Inuyasha's night into the mix. Because tha was a major point in the series and could bring slim fluff into story if you wanted it. In the end .. I love this story..is one of the best. Heyy since its so chop full of hentai moments soon to come and angst you shuld put it up on Eternal Destiny. Its a site for Inu/KAg and their looking for angst stories like yours. Well hope you do update soon. Once again.. I love it . =D
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: October 15, 2007 01:24 EDT
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As far as people saying your making inuyasha too mean or too nice screw it I mean i love what YOU have done with the story and I check daily to see what YOU have come up with not anyone else so dont let them confuse you do what you gotta do to get it done but its your choice how he is I think its perfect just how it is. with any dom there are nice as well as mean and any good one will switch between the two depending on the situation so you do it as you've been doin it Its perfect just how it is....and now with that said..you make me cry *whimpers* i need an update..
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Reviewed By: mic_check On: October 14, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is a really good story. i think you contrasted kagome and inuyasha perfectly, they play off one another very dangerously and keeps me on edge about how far kagome can push inuyasha and how much inuyasha really cares for kagome as a human, pet, or something else? i'm interested in seeing how their realtionship changes/grows, or if there is any room for growth at all. looking forward to the next chapter =)
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