| "My Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: shei On: October 08, 2007 09:35 EDT
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no i think inuyasha is just fine....if u make him meaner its just gna ruin the connection that they clearly have...the only thing i HOPE u dnt do is make her sleep w/ that grl n have him watch...i cant c her bein in love w/ him after that...but hey its ur story plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: 2hot4u On: October 01, 2007 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Lovey On: September 15, 2007 03:13 EDT
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really good, other than the fact that it makes Inuyasha sound like a complete and utter dickwad. You're doing a great job of Kagome's stubborn personality, though I hope later her and Inuyasha get along a little better.
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Reviewed By: JJ On: September 10, 2007 21:37 EDT
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I love your story! please hurry and continue update asap. its a great story and i llllloooovvveeee iiiittt! please hurry and update.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 16:46 EDT
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Pretty nicely done, though a bit OOC as Kagome is way too disobedient for a pet. And knowing Inuyasha's character, he would never be so lenient. It appears as though they are equals rather then master/pet relationship.Well, I'll be looking forward to reading Kagome's punishment.
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Title: :]
Reviewed By: GummiPanda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 19:32 EDT
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This is a pretty entertaining story. I'm very pleased with it, and am overjoyed Kagome hasn't broken yet! GO KAGOME! :] Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 04, 2007 11:42 EDT
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yay guess what i wrote more and it deleted. But i was saying that although going back to skool sux ur story is making it better... anyways i start tomorrow so i gtg... good luck and update soon! Geez fr me that was a weird review... guess i'm still tired from last night..
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 04, 2007 11:40 EDT
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Great job... I can't wait to see what happens... I know it'll be great! Now i gotta go tough gotta do stuff fr skool...>-
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Reviewed By: HunniBunn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi hi Im a new reader i just have a question umm why did you choose Yura to be his pet that he bought and not Kikyo? other than that question I love the story... Plz update
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 05:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! I absolutely loved the line where Sango said that Kagome can take it as well as she dishes it. Nice! the fight with Yura? A-class lol.
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: September 03, 2007 02:22 EDT
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Ok you got me there. not so much for the beating but for everything else i would kill to be in her position lol i don't blame her for beating on Yura either I'd have knocked the ***** into the next century lol you can fill in a word for the * lol i know a few that would fit. I love the new chapter can't wait for the next one. as always you've made my day ^_^ keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 02:15 EDT
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Pshhh he's such a loser. How is she gonna fall in love with him when he's abusing her like this?
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this and all I can say is wow. I was looking for the next chapter and there was none. I can wait for you to post the next one. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't punish Kagome too bad because Yura did start it and she does sound more like a slut than a woman with morals. I know it's the point of the fic to make her look that way, but boy is she bad.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more i want to what he is going to with kagome
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 03, 2007 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really love your story. Kags makes me laugh hysterically with her witty attitude. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Again I really enjoy reading your story. So update soon and keep up the excellent writing.
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