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Reviewed By: Kags _rocks On: January 03, 2009 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!
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Title: Halfdemon
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 04:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was like the best chapter of them all. I hope your gonna write more to this chapter because i would like to know what else happens betweeen inuyasha and kagome. and....does she get pregnant? i just wanna know...because yeah i think it would be so freaking cool if she did become pregnant by this one night of non-going sex into the night. And what about that other slut.....the other slave? is she gonna come out in the other chapter as well. i hope so....i wonder if shes going to be jealouse!!!! please write soon!!!!
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Title: ....O_O
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 02:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ear sex? Wait never mind...I don't think I wanna know...
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Title: asdf;lkj
Reviewed By: ahhhhhhhh On: December 14, 2008 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhh please update please please please please update this chappie was awesome :)
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Reviewed By: sexi-licious93 On: November 17, 2008 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is amazing but "sleep well my material?". I dont get it...
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Reviewed By: GirugameshGirl On: November 15, 2008 15:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!i cant tell u how many times i check to see when it's updated, thank you ^_^ and the last thing he said when translated was 'sleep well, my substance' in the literal meaning the last word was iffy, did it mean toy, or possession?Or did it mean his very air his food and water cause that's what i thought substance mean
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Reviewed By: 'Ber On: November 12, 2008 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm baaack!! =]] and I must say....wow. this story has me fannin' myself all over again! hehe. Kinda sad about Kagome bein' "consentually raped"...is that an oxymoron or what?!...but the story is irresitably awesome. I must say: Bravo! and please update soon. You're awesome!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 19:48 EST
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Coolness... Kagome's little no-so-virgin-anymore self is gonna have a bunch of fun from now on!! Thanx for writing! Can't wait to find out what he said!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome i got scared for a moment and then i was just left shocked
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(not signed in) On: November 01, 2008 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and that's it? your sooo mean
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 00:52 EDT
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also what did inuyasha say afterwards?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha found out about kagome & sango sneaking out... and inuyasha has finally punished kagome all the way... what will happen the day after... what will kagome do... what will inuyasha do... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally enjoyed this chapter. Could it be they're falling in love? So many questions! Can't wait until the next post.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST CHAPTER SO FAR HANDS DOWN UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOHOOOOO!!!!! yay! Ive been waiting forever to read the updates! Very good, I loved the chappie:D:D I can't wait for the next one.. keep up the amazing work:D:D:D
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