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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 14:37 CST
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I"m so sorry I thought I review already. I'm glad to know that your feeling better. Inuyasha is being stupid his pup life is at stake his dislike for Sesshomarus should not make an unborn child suffer for such a thing. this also goes to sesshomaru, inuyasha of all people should know better that you can't pick your parents. They both should get over themselves. I know in my head that Kagome is upset she's heart broken, but really she have no right to be upset. she never thought that after the jewel is completed that she may not be able to stay there going back and fort. besides she doesn't belong there just like Inuyasha doesn't belong in the future. and she doesn't treat him right at all. Kagome act like inuyasha is her slave and a dog. and tries to change him. She is immature and need to think on how she is what she does. he's not a human she doesn't seem to remember and in any case she could leave and run home like she always does that one reason why they never get anything solve. she a girl not a woman.I wouldn't want to be with someone who could sit me at there pleasure. " Damn it! How could she have been so blind and stupid? Life wasn't perfect! How could she have believed that Inuyasha would sacrifice everything for her, throw away everything to be with her? Was she just some high school girl with a fairytale like crush on a guy she just couldn't have? She'd wondered about it sometimes, about whether their close friendship was just that: friendship. Despite them having kissed, they hadn't really admitted or changed their actions towards each other. They didn't hold hands, they didn't hug all that often - Inuyasha just wasn't the one for cuddling - they didn't really do anything any normal couples did. With that thought in mind, Kagome numbly questioned herself: did she have any right to be as angry as she was?" so true, and shippo needs a good spanking or something. he can't live with humans forever. " He was nothing more than a wretched half-demon, dirty, foul…" how dare she! stupid wench someone will have to put a mussle on her soon. huff ok now that my ranting is somewhat done. hmmm and the evil hanyou and offspring is up to no good. oh good lord your brought back the evil mother from hell. poor sesshomaru he will have to learn what his mother is. (poor inuyasha the inlaws are coming) XD DUNDUDNDUNDUNDUNDUNNNNN!(incert cheese mystery music) ok UPDATE PLEASE ok I'm going to end it here. hope you are alright and things are going good with you. ladytokyo
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: October 08, 2007 20:57 CDT
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I feel bad for Sesshomaru. I don't think Inuyasha is strong enough to protect him.
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Reviewed By: erisincognito [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! I like the way Sesshomaru and Inuyasha don't lose their personalities despite unusual circumstances. Very well written with just enough depth to keep the story full but not so much that it bogs down.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: September 21, 2007 21:02 CDT
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Inuyasha is being stupid. He can get in some free groping and doesn't wanna! why?
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Title: pups
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey are you doing ok? I'm not very good on words with emotion correctness. I alway left that up to the other girls but I did want to know how you are doing and holding up. Hm sound like a evil hanyou we know is up to no good. Rin made the face, and Inuyasha lol it's him and he show alot of concern for his pup. he may have to lay with his brother again to save there life. that's something we have to see. maybe they can take this time an really get to know each other to somewhat grow close in this time of need. Hm another jewel is in play whats going happen dondondon! see ya for the next update.
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: September 12, 2007 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At the risk of getting personal, I hope you're doing okay in the aftermath? It's situations like these where my words fail me. It's easy to kill off a character in fiction, 'play God' so to speak but in our lives the ultimate reality is quite different. The pain goes on and on... Your new chapter, more involvement from your original characters which I loved. The times that I wished I could sprout wings and fly... Miroku's reaction was truly excellent. I eagerly look forward to more time and tide permitting.
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Title: it's out in the open
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo sorry that your father passed way. I hope your doing alright. I am soo happy that you updated. baka Sesshomaru! at least Inuyasha seem to care. it's time for a reunion of sorts. sesshomaru needs to get over himself! just when Inuyasha was going to tell Kagome here comes Kazuo spilling the beans. and it's so cute that Inu is protective over the baka. And what the HELl does Sango feel Betrayed!???? I'm slow but did Kagome sit him or did Kazuo knock inuyasha out? cause would inu have gone with him just to get to his pup? update
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 22, 2007 20:50 CDT
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well goodbye to Kagome. It's a yaoi fic so she's not needed anyway. hahaha
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For being mpreg, you've done a great job. Inu and sess are so IC. I don't know that I can even do that. Those two are great. I don't know how you can possibly bring them together unless Sesshoumaru being sick truly is a crisis. Can't wait to see that one. Oh yeah. I am looking forward to that next chapter. Oooh, Sesshoumaru was such an ass to Inu...as expected. Inu's rescue of Sess was great. The comedy and the angst. I sure wish Kagome would have taken a liking to an interested youkai. Instead of freaking sitting Inu to hell. That bitch! I love the whole glowing thing and the two being in such denial. Ahahahahaha. That is so them! Chiyo is great and I hope to see her a lot more. Sess needs a real spanking. Miroku's reaction to Inu's revelation was hilarious too. LOL I'm really worried about sess and inu. Like I said, I'm anxious for the next chapter. Wish I could update as regularly as you. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 13:22 CDT
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feeling a little bitter? writing is cathartic so i applaud your use of it back to the fic. finally. inuyasha will realize blood will tell he's going to run to sess! besides wasnt that awful of kagome to sit him hell hath no fury like a woman scorned indeed!
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Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 21:42 CDT
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I have been reading your most excellent story Dubious Relations . I usually like to wait til the end of a story and give an overall review . Overall I enjoyed it very much , you have a good grasp of the characters personalities and make them come alive . The only thing wrong is that it's not finished ! Please continue , I hope to see more soon .
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: August 12, 2007 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic work as usual. I'm afraid I didn't get to read it again. :-( I got a bit carried away working on my own story and now I'm really frazzled. I swear the quality of your writing gets better with each installment. Perhaps it was a little jerky but each segment stands on it's own. Much thanks for including a number of scenes with Kazuo. For some reason I really like the idea of him being an old married man. :-) I loved his joking manner with Inuyasha and his explanation for why Sesshomaru and Inuyasha glow. The idea of Inuyasha spying on his half-brother made me giggle for some reason though it's probably not supposed to be funny or cute. Inuyasha's loving thoughts about him are really sweet. I'm very much looking forward to finding out the explanation for why Sesshomaru's scent is at that scene of the carnage in the next installment. Until then I hope that the exams are over and done with and that you get much need rest and relaxation. whisper
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Reviewed By: Amanda Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, came here to let another review for my actual fave inusess fic cause it's adorable and also you're adorable person! Please update soon, okay? *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 06, 2007 20:51 CDT
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I would've liked to have read the scene where Inu and his gang got the boot. I'm sure it was quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: pretty-crazed-doll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 17:29 CDT
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More more please! No enough people manage to mpreg Sesshomaru and keep his character. Can't wait for the next instalment!!
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