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Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic work as usual. That conversation with Chiyo was enlightening. That explanation for Sesshomaru's predicament was nicely done. That image of a male Kitsune growing taller made me chuckle... That's interesting that Sesshomaru responds to Inuyasha's commands. Hmm... Poor Sesshomaru! What would he do if lusty Inuyasha found that one out? I can see Inuyasha using that particular compulsion for his own nefarious purposes... Poor thing he seems a little hurt by Sesshomaru's harshly spoken words. I can tell he feels more for his older brother than he would care to admit. That moment where he was working so hard to keep looking at his face rather than his naked body was bittersweet... I like Kazuo so far. I hope you'll keep him... Hmm... That is interesting that Chiyo took Inuyasha's side in the arguement about the mating. The part with the pup was truly warm and wonderful. I felt like metaphorically swatting your Sesshomaru on the head for spoiling the moment in a very Sesshomaru-like fashion or would that be cranky pregnant lady fashion? *snickers* I can see that things are going to get more interesting from now on with the arrival of the others... I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FLUFFY A IDIOT! I wonder how long will it take for those two to get together? the whole feeling your pup is so sweet awe! I totally awe and I would have loved to see the look in inu face. sessy better shape up or I'm going to beat him up on his butt of course don't wanta hurt the pup. kagome gotta know soon she getting on my nerves baka and make sure to take that damn leash off to please. and what the hell is kagrua up to? plz update gotta know.
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Reviewed By: Strawberry_chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove this story :) I took a long break from fanfiction and have only just now come and caught up on my reading which is why i haven't reviewed since like, chapter two lol I think the thing i'm most impressed about with your story is how you've managed to write an mpreg fic with sess as the uke without making me go 'ah, yeah right, this is getting ridiculous n awfully far fetched' i mean, its about as realistic as such a fic is gonna get, so good job! And you've kept everyone in character pretty well too. The scene with inu feeling sess's stomache was really cute! Will kagome and the others find out inu is the father soon?
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 02:06 CDT
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yes. bridge chapter it may be, but this time inu gets to feel his child. this just may be the sundering of kagome and inuyasha. the child - inuyasha's child, will take precedence over kagome, i think. he will not allow it to be "unloved". looking forward to the "fireworks"
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: July 09, 2007 21:08 CDT
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I'm excessively happy for having recieved some material thing, but I'm glad this story got updated too. A double whammy in one day.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: June 28, 2007 21:05 CDT
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I think that the cat will be out of the bag soon.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 01:31 CDT
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sess and inu and kagome together. sounds like a trio made in hell. of them all, kagome would have the least number of problems inu has to worry about the pup, sess, and how kagome will react and sess. sess will be more about what to do with the kid... i was thinking this is a bridge chapter where nothing much happens.. just the 3 of them in sess's home... perhaps the next chapter will be about discoveries.. or knowing the truth i await the developments....*grins*
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Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course I enjoyed this latest update. I hope you did well on that last test... Hmm... Am I reading too much into Sesshomaru finding Inuyasha's presence comforting, and the fact that he was playing with his hair and showing the pink part of his lids when he was talking to him? It's quite sweet how tolerant of Kagome he has become, so much so that he would compare her to Rin. Chiyo did not disappoint. Her talking to Sesshomaru like he was a child was quite funny. Then again it has been suggested that he is a child in demon terms... Inuyasha's curiousity about Sesshomaru is disarmingly cute. As is his protective streak. Our favourite demon lord blaming Inuyasha for his predicament made me snicker. After all it takes two to tango! They're bickering like a couple already. I wonder how Chiyo will take the news that Inuyasha is the father of Sesshomaru's baby? What else can she do with that stick? Hmm... Any saucy Inuyasha POVs coming up? I won't dare ask about lime. I set something of a personal record by making it to chapter 18/19 of the fic I'm working on at the moment before the protagonists kissed... I look forward to your next update!
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Title: boy's'n'their thick skulls
Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this..... it's more complicated than the usual story-lines w/ this pairing (not that i dislike those any less.. just different qualities ^^;; ) that neither one of the brother's are at a point of compromise, even though it's all out in the open now, is very frustrating but at the same time.. well.. the anticipation is worth it!! 'Cuz I can't wait to see how this turns out! And both of those boys need to deal w/ a lot of suppressed (some not so much) aggression~ Very kewl so far, very kewl. .................. very very kewl................ **waits ever so patiently for more**
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should use the email for gen50inlj... although i did get to read your email but it took me a while to remember who it was.... mating is special to demons - okay. why... because they have such long lives. egyptians dont. true they believe in the afterlife, but then their obligation to the throne (or royalty for that matter is over) so mating must be special to demons. particularly to guys like sess, lord of the western lands. he needs an heir who is strong and will fight to keep their lands. therefore, mating is special - and most specially to sess. whoever he mates would have to be forever, you see. you are referring to concubines. yes, royalty does have that (actually muslims and ye olde chinese families have those as well) number one wife is always important - heir comes from no. 1 wife usually. and number one wife, in sess terminology - is the mate. all other mates do not have that - how did you describe it - that red thread. i hope you have inuyasha falling for sess at some point, i mean i always thought inu wanted to belong, if sess had been nicer in his youth i dont think any human female would win his heart. and even then the human females have NOT totally won his. (in my opinion, not totally. i mean how does inu fully expect to live in the 21st century?? so even kagome has something offlimits about her. anyway i should get on with my review - you sidetracked me with the mating question) that red thread and the glow. naraku saw the thread, but kagome did not. so at some point you'd explain that. why naraku? i mean evil guy that he is - why should he see something as beautiful as all that. and why myoga doesnt see it??? as for the glowing... you have to explain that. i'm thinking it has to do with a mating ritual but since you arent very receptive to that, then it cant be. so, i just have to say why? in a demon's ordinary life that could be dangerous isnt it - as it identifies mates... (or is it because sess didnt mark inu?? hmmm. i'm not sure about this so i have to re-read the thing - its in my hard disk - mainly because i cant read mm when my eyes get tired and i can enlarge word) as for killing the pup... i dont think sess can - if inu doesnt want the pup killed. (did you say that in the fic? i'm reading so many fics at the same time that sometimes i get confused - which is also why i re-read a lot). primarily since inu is dominant to sess (wont that be problematic for the lord of the west? i mean he is lord of the west. drats. i have to read that chapter again when he makes a deal with inu) hard for the lord of the west to be submissive.. (take inutasho for example - he took women as his mates - that meant he was dominant...) i agree. inu cannot terminate any child. and he will adapt himself for the child. the child is something of HIS. something he can claim for his own. he is the FATHER. what did you call sess? carrier. sounds cold to me but maybe because i dont understand the nuances of what you mean... i liked the chapter but i want so many things explained. well, let me re-read and get back to you later today. (i have plenty of time. i'm home with a cast on my left leg and cant go to work...)
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Reviewed By: Kamakura Yumi On: June 11, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Inuyasha to the rescue... Boy! He's dumb as mud but really very sweet. Don't get me wrong, I like that in a guy. So long as he's good looking too. Dumb and ugly just doesn't work... I do like the glowy thing and the pup responding to Inuyasha was so sweet and adorable! Hmm... So what has the evil Naraku got planned next for our favourite Inu brothers, huh? I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: June 11, 2007 20:07 CDT
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Well it's about as far from a love connection as you can get. But they are cute together(they glow, that's hilarious).
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Title: X3
Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaa~~~ yes. finally. a well deserved 'sit'. >__<
And! Soon! Confrontation!! yaay! T_T and someone needs to smack that Sessy and shove a steak down his throat. **mumbles** But.. so kewl. **bubbling w/ anticipation** **hugs**
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what did i say? hmmm. i dont know what i said that made you say all that... snow is the nickname of the author who writes sessxinu stories - "a day to play", "centennial hunger" (which i adore!), "whispers of promises..." you can check her stories out if you like. she writes very well. back to your fic- so now inuyasha knows he has marked sesshoumaru. and they are mated. mating is a special thing for demons, yes? since they have such long lives.. and well, i think they should value faithfulness. sess being the uke is surprising, but i like. inu to sess's rescue. it sounds romantic and so like inuyasha. he really doesnt hate his brother, and now ... i would like to see how sess behaves towards inuyasha - his mate... and how inuyasha would behave to his mate, sess sess didnt mark inu, but then inu was dominant. also figures sess would carry, since he's the full demon. i am quite excited about the next chapter. this chapter was essentially a bridge one, it enabled inu to realize he was mated! and sess gets to see a bit of inuyasha's life -how life with kagome was .. (loud, for one) i think i'm going to re-read all the chapters after i sleep and wake up. it is 2am here where i am, and do another review to see if reading all of the chapters changes anything i have to say... i'm glad sess wont be raped by naraku. i already hate naraku a lot and dont need to add any more anger.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: June 02, 2007 22:28 CDT
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So he rescues her and she bashes him. Not too smart, but it is okay because he only has eyes for Sesshy now.
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