| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: GoldenTuna On: December 20, 2009 21:12 PST
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ohhhh this gave me chills, you captured the emotion so well! I enjoyed your choice of focus characters and POVS, the way you held off expressing kagome or inus thought process. I'll be alert for the next one!
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Title: cwillia
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 20:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I was soooo into this chapter, it's unfortunate that a pair of boots and jealousy cost Yuka her life. If you dance with the devil be prepared for the consequences... just hurry with the next chapter..LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 20:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY JESUS! That was soooo intense!!! Great update!!! And Yuka is a jerk for not calling earlier, Kouga's an ass, and will continue to be an ass, but regardless, that was an awesome chapter!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Twilightlover On: December 12, 2009 15:46 PST
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I think this might be more addicting than twilight! I am giving it to all of my friendS! Update soon please!
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Ron_Hermione On: December 08, 2009 15:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to tell you that i found your story a month ago, I finished it in a day, and i have been rereading it constantly! I hope you update soon! It's addicting!
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Reviewed By: Chocolate Cake On: December 08, 2009 14:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FNYMRJSNBSYW AVWIBUINHCN!!!!!! D: Nooooooo.Get that creep awaaaay. InuYashaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, where are youuuuuuuuuuuu?! Love the story! Gald you updated. *hearts
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Reviewed By: Chocolate Cake On: December 08, 2009 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FNYMRJSNBSYW AVWIBUINHCN!!!!!! D: Nooooooo.Get that creep awaaaay. InuYashaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, where are youuuuuuuuuuuu?! Love the story! Gald you updated. *hearts
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2009 19:12 PST
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Jst so u knw i have been stalking ur page for a while hoping u update and if u dont do it soon i will lose my mind lol so please save me from losing my mind and update gosh darnit. plz and thank u lol :)
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Reviewed By: Ronke On: December 05, 2009 12:01 PST
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Wow what a great story!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: E_team On: December 04, 2009 06:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all your stories this week! And this is the greatest one of them all! I am so psyched to read more about this! This would make a great TV show! Have you thought about publishing?
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Reviewed By: Werewolf lover On: December 03, 2009 11:13 PST
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Wow, write more please I can't wait for more! YOU ARE REALLY GOOD AT WRITNIG
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Reviewed By: Kimiko124 On: December 03, 2009 07:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I started reading this such a long time ago, and then I stopped for some reason. One of my friends then told to me read on, adn I could not stop reading! Kouga is so evil! But oh this makes it so good! Please continue with the story!
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Reviewed By: Yomiruki On: December 02, 2009 00:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
58 chapters later, and it feels like nothing. I loved your story so much, I cried so many times! Nothing was cheesy or fluffy! I loved the part when Inuyasha talked about condoms, ugh that was so wonderful! I am so excited to see where you story will go, because i feel like the fun stuff is just about to begin!
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Reviewed By: Kouchu On: December 01, 2009 18:07 PST
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Can I tell you how much I love this! I started reading it this morning, and I finished it tonight, I think I need to read this again, lol!
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Reviewed By: Deeply On: December 01, 2009 11:39 PST
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Update soon please
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