| "Kakashi's lessons in seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 12:59 CDT
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I forgive you! This chapter is fucking great! Can't wait till the next capter!
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Reviewed By: lo On: May 25, 2007 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice!! With the beta your story has taken off. Great job!! I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 15:43 CDT
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This is really good! You have to keep writing! [:
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Reviewed By: Pink5667 On: May 23, 2007 08:54 CDT
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Very nice I like the lesson it was hot & sexy.the story im liking it so far
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Reviewed By: BlackORT310 On: May 23, 2007 08:47 CDT
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I Think the lesson was hot and i like that chatper very good.
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Reviewed By: lo On: May 22, 2007 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a fun story to read but, ther spelling and grammer errors make it a but difficult to read. If you would just proof read more or find a BEAT this story could really be good.
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:26 CDT
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this one was really cute! i liked it alot. i can't wait to read more. --darkness_is_beautiful-- p.s your an awesome writer!! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:31 CDT
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i lyked the convo w/ sasuke & kakashi 2. it was funny. anyways update soon plz.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: dark karena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 14:38 CDT
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wow this is really good i loved the talk between sasuke and kakashi that was funny but yeah plz write more i can`t wait to see the update
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 23:34 CDT
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kickass story! Hope you update soon! :insert big puppy dog eyes here: please?
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Title: firedragonmaiden
Reviewed By: firedragonmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Snickers. Poor Sasuke, I hope he gets laid soon.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 03:16 CDT
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Great! I loved it! The conversation was pretty funny. Lee was acting pretty strange. Wonder if secret will be reveled as well? Oh well, can't wait for more again! Lookin forward to it.
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
better update soon unless u want me 2 send my foxes to bite u untill u do!!! . . . just joking... but i really want u to update!! The story's really fun to read!
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Title: cant wait!
Reviewed By: aly95959 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until your next chapter! If you need some one to proof read your chapters, I'll be happy to do it!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 18:34 CDT
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I could just faint because of this story...it's absolutely HOT and yummy...adn I LUV IT!!!...can't wait to read what Kakashi comes up to help Sasuke seduce Naruto!
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