| "Kakashi's lessons in seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: lo On: August 09, 2007 11:39 CDT
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It is ok to take a break from a story so it does not go stale. The 3rd person point of view. First person just does not tell me enough. It is still a cute story.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 09, 2007 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shakes head* WTF?! Talk about being into denial...If I was Tsuande or Sandaime I would have put Naruto into therapy ages ago! His childhood was beyond fucked up! I'm betting that's the main reason why his priorites are skewered...He has bad taste into friends and loves! Hinata obviously cares about him, YET he likes Sakura! A fan-girl of all people! His beast friend is Sasuke-a TRAITOR to his own country! I still think he should have been put on different teams! Lee or Haku would have had made decent friends for him! Sorry but I cannot stand Sasuke's attidude! He's way too much like a spoilt brat...When Naruto got stronger he GOT jealous instead of being happy for Naruto! He should have been happy that his friend was improving! Then he tried to kill Naruto! That's UNFORGIVABLE! Jiraiya was right, when he said there was NO hope for Sasuke to return! Hebi-pedo is dead, YET Sasuke refuses to return to make up for his crimes?! I LOATHE traitors with all of my soul! I will never understand WHY someone chooses to desert/turn traitor when they have people who care about them. Itachi had a kid brother that looked up to him, and a best friend that cared about him, yet he chose to kill them and never look back. Not to mention traumatizing his brother for life, and warping his soul so there's nothing left except hate. Plus if I recall the flashbacks right, Sasuke was a decent kid before Itachi warped him. SO it all started with Itachi...A pity someone cannot bring Itachi back and force him to fix the damage he caused and turn Sasuke into a normal teen, with better socializing skills...If this chapter is what your muse came up with, PLEASE get a KakaIru lemon out of him/her! Or I'll sic Anko or Ibiki on you...
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tear* i feel sorry for sasuke...i don't know how i'd feel if i just told someone "i love you" and they'd just leave... --darkness_is_beautiful--
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Reviewed By: Smari-chan On: August 07, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is just too good!!!!! please update soon i wonder how Iruka and Kakashi r doing.....
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Title: 100th review
Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Sasunaru time, thank you thank you thank you. this was down right amazing what you have done, turning what could be called one of the shortest limes/leomns into a very enjoyable chapter, thanks for all of this, it is utterly awesome. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
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Reviewed By: sadisticsymphonies On: July 29, 2007 05:35 CDT
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*giggles maniacally* Hee hee, this is awesome. I love Shikamaru in this fic! He's so funny. *glomps Shikamaru*
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Reviewed By: DeiDeitheSpazandSas-uke-Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh!!you had to stop!!meanie!*pouts*anyways..that was one of the best i've read yet,uh!not that i,erm, read these kind of things often!!uh,hehehe.lol.
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 22:42 CDT
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as i did say i dont care if they are short or long they are still GOOD upload next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 21:09 CDT
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YAY! You updated!...I'm having a brain melt down thingy right now so i can't think of anything else to say...Can't wait tilll the next chapter! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 15:15 CDT
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That was great! :D See? I knew you could write erotic stuff. *purrs in delight* I espcially lied the way you described how the precum "bubbled" from Naruto's member... ^^ Smexy! But once again, I think it was a bit too short ;-) You're such a teaser, I want more! Update soon, ok? You rock. *chu*
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Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 14:08 CDT
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...woah. You're once again the queen of writing. It's hard to find good stuff like this. And it's awesome you're working on a longer chapter. Good luck dude.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really good chapter! I really enjoyed how you ended it like that. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading another real soon!
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was great!! i really want to know what Naruto does to Sasuke, but i also what to know what Kakashi does with Iruka...your stories alwayz leave me with this smile that i can't get reid of... --darkness_is_beautiful=--
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Reviewed By: Smari-chan On: July 23, 2007 12:55 CDT
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OMGN!! this story is amazing! please write more! please make more Sasuke\Naruto and at least one Kakashi\Iruka. I hope our preadators get their prey soon. ;-)
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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