| "Kakashi's lessons in seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 15:32 CDT
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it'z really cute!! i love story so far! keep writing! --darkness_is_beautiful
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 17:03 CDT
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dang! that was hot!!! i thought it was a lil funny how naruto fell off of the couch. lol. anyways, update soon plz.
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Title: OMFG.......*faints*
Reviewed By: MyKittyRox On: May 10, 2007 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*insert fangirl squeal* That was so freaking HOT!!! O.O Too bad it was only a dream but...gods...I almost had to control a nosebleed. =^^= Koneko-chan
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Reviewed By: pink5667 On: May 09, 2007 05:38 CDT
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Not bad.I look to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: BlackORT310 On: May 09, 2007 01:28 CDT
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VERY NICE,THAT CHATPER WAS BETTER.And i like the drama at the end that was funny. But dont be piss at me for what i said because i did say i like it and as for the sex i always get mine i just like to read sex and smut online sometimes.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 13:08 CDT
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I didn't see that comin'. It makes me want to read the next chapter even more! Sorry, you must get tired of me reviewing all the time. Lol.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:02 CDT
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this is kool! & pretty funny 2. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic you have to update again soon
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 13:20 CDT
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It might not have helped others. But it does clear up a little for me. I don't think a redo is neccessary. But if you want one go ahead.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: tovah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! Please continue with it. I could see this becoming an awesome fic.
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Title: all
Reviewed By: BlackORT310 On: May 05, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell was that?I was bored out of my mind with 2 and 3 but I like the first chapter with Sasuke that was good but you will have to step up your game for me.Oh don't be mad I like your work but where is the damn sex or the damn Kakashi's lessons?hmmmmmm.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:45 CDT
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I like the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lo On: May 01, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. You just need to proof read more carefully to fix the grammer and spelling errors but, this is a lot of fun. Nice job!
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Title: looking for more
Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very inter5esting, especially because it is written in Sasuke's view. I will look for updates. :)
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