| "Kakashi's lessons in seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: kryatal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:01 CDT
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I really like this fanfic...ive been reading it for a while but i only just decided to comment ^_^ Keep up the good work....how many more chapters are there?
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 21:07 CDT
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aww thank you very much!! i guess i can be a crybaby sometimez...but yeah...hehe i love ideas...my friend sayz wouldn't mind tryin out something new...
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 10:25 CDT
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yay!!! i'm soo glad that kakashi and iruka got together!! ^_^ still feel bad for sasuke....:(
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Title: shweet
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 23:19 CDT
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lol, be proud of your great writing, chica! this chapter is good for the storyline, which means, good story!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiou-chan On: August 31, 2007 14:40 CDT
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*falls over* What about poor Sasu? T-T
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 31, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* AW! How long do we have to wait for the KakaIru lemon, hm? *taps feet* At least give me a decent answer of the number of chapters we have top wait! *cheers* Finally they admitted their feelings! But what does Kakashi mean slow?
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 22:08 CDT
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ture it is like that song. thanks for the update great chapter, that cheered my day up
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 10:09 CDT
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That was a great chapter. Good to see that they finally got that straighten out. I can't wait to see what happens next with the other couples. Good luck to Sasuke and I hope poor Lee isn't sore.
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Reviewed By: Saiou-chan On: August 16, 2007 21:59 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOO! NO NO NO NO! NARUTO YOU IDIOT! GO BACK AND TELL SASUKE YOU LOVE HIM TOO! You better update soon, or there will be hell to pay! I'm upset about another fic I just finished, don't leave me hanging! oh, and nix the Gaara/Lee view points, they really shouldn't have been added in.
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Reviewed By: KC777 On: August 14, 2007 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I just read this whole entire fanfic at once, from beginning up to the most recent chapter, and it's awesome. I mean at first I almost didn't read it, just because it's told in a bunch of first person POV sections and I don't usually like those, but I decided to give it a chance and I'm really glad that I did. Also I started reading it for the SasuNaru but now I'm reading it for the SasuNaru AND the KakuIru. I still can't bring myself to enjoy the Gaara/Lee stuff... I dunno, Gaara just creeps me out and Lee bugs me. But whatever, it's still a great fic ^_^ As to the most recent stuff... AWWWWW! *tears* It's so sad... Sasuke FINALLY gets up the courage to really admit his feelings, something which he never seems to be able to do, and when he does he gets turned down. It makes you wanna hug him. It's also really obvious that he's in love with Naruto, just like the way Kakashi feels about Iruka... in a way. Only Sasuke isn't as confident in general which makes it that much more fun to read. So yeah, I love the way things are going overall. Slightly disturbed by the Gaara/Lee-ness but the SasuNaru and KakaIru TOTALLY make up for it in my mind, I really hope you continue writing after taking the break you need ^^
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Title: ello there
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 06:15 CDT
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Just because you're an amateur doesn't mean you're not good. You've got talent. And the story, I like how it's actually got emotion and all that shiz, not the pale crap people usually write. I don't write fanfics, but stories, and I personally like the way you put the physical side into it (er..if that makes any sense... I'm a confusing bastard).
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Reviewed By: DeiDeitheSpazandSas-uke-Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, how could naruto be so mean to sasuke?!i mean, come on!he knows he's in love with sasuke!!!lol.sorry.i just like ranting.n/_\n
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 20:21 CDT
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ow that had to crushed sasuke but it was still good heh thanks for the update
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:51 CDT
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Oh, poor Sasuke. Welp, hope ya update soon!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 15:27 CDT
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Poor Sasuke! I hope Naruto can sort this thing out. I can't wait to see out it turns out.
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