| "Kakashi's lessons in seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Title: ello mate
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 23:50 CDT
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Awesome to read another chapter! I am still yet a loyal fan. boom-shaka-laka
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: maegerakawaii On: October 14, 2007 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this all in one go. Now I'm swamped with homework but it was worth it. I love the pairings you picked. Even though Gaara is a bit OOC, he really is awesome in your story. I love how you made Naruto confused over his feelings for Sasuke, because I love angst. I was just a little bit confused over the last chapter. Now I could be wrong, but I thought Gaara bound Lee for 3 days after the festival, when they confessed to each other, so why did Naruto tell Lee that the festival was only the night before he talked to Lee? Anyway, other tham this little confusion, I really enjoyed your story and hopefully I can enjoy it some more after you update.
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! Its so good! More Gaara and Lee!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: October 11, 2007 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* I have no problems with the other couples! i wanted to see how Lee and Iruka was faring. Since you mentioned they might be sore in the morning after. As for Naruto, Lee gave out good advice! now all he has to do is go to Iruka for advice...If there's anyone who might knock some sense into Naruto, it's Iruka! *amused* Poor Lee! He has his hands full with the horny ex Kazekage there...Please have Neji and Tenten show up! I would love to see their reactions to the fact that Lee is walking funny...Tenten might be a yaoi fan-girl, but I doubt Neji will be thrilled. He might decide that he's now 'scarred for life'...And please put Iruka in there, I want to see what happens in the morning after...
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 15:49 CDT
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YAY! Can't wait! Oh, poor Lee! Poor, poor, Lee. Hope to hear from you soon, in not too much pain.
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 21:19 CDT
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lol i know what you mean i haven't been readin alot b/c of school work...:( but hmm...i wonder what your teacher would do if she were to read these stories...but yeah to comment on this chapter. it was really cute!! i agree w/ lee too love is love no matter your sexual preference...hehe maybe Nauruto might find somethin new about himself that he never even knew...hehe
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 21:07 CDT
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for you question both, and this was a great chapter keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: k On: September 27, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a damn good fanfic. i like your style of writing because you dont hold anything back.you display the characters and their emotions towards each other so vibrantly. however, about sasuke i would have made his character a bit more like the hardcore sasuke in the anime instead of making him the weak one in this fanfic. its nice to know that he can be soft at times but by making him less appealing in that manner can take away from his original character and make ppl lose interest quick. honestly i dont like reading fanfics where the guy whom is suppose to be "tough" all of a sudden gets "weak" ya know? O.o!?!?!? i like how you kept gaaras character in perspective even when dealing with lee. overall this fanfic was really great. i loved it as well and i cannot wait to read chpt 20 when you release it!
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: September 12, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need to find out what happens!!!!!!!
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Title: wats up
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 03:13 CDT
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Purrr. Sexy chapter! I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 10, 2007 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry about my spelling, but i'm in a hurry. Since I cannot stay up too long.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 10, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snikcering* SO Iruka's going ot be sore hte nezt morning. *puzzled* Vibratopr? WHat is Kakashi up to? SO he is in kinky sex? *shakes head* I KNEW it! i knew Icha Icha Paradise was a bad influence! *muses* I have to wonder what Yondaime would say if he could see how Kakashi turned out. I doubt Kakashi read Icha Icha Paradise when his sense was laive, or in front of Naruto's mom. Because i doubt she would have approved of those hideous books...And if she didn't disapprove, what about reading pron into front of under-age kids?!
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Reviewed By: ukexchan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my cheese! This is by far my favourite fic of all time! Kashi and Ruka are the most darling couple, and you write them well! I honestly could hug you! It's brilliant! Utterly brilliant! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 09:24 CDT
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heh kakashi is one strange guy but it was great chapter heh cant wait till nexted one
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 23:58 CDT
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I love this one! Kakashi is so full of surprises!I can't wait to see what he does with the vibe! Please update soon, I really want to see how Sasuke is taking being rejected!
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