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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 21:49 CDT
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Wow! first thing first, im really glad you updated(dontcha just hate computers sometimes!). The part about shessy's past was really amazing and i almost felt like i was there. im glad that sango is done with kouga and i have a pretty gud idea who this "guy" mite be. UPdate soon! Love the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww thank you!!!! another GREAT chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: June 08, 2008 18:17 CDT
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I just finished chapter 14 and it has to be said that I was truly moved to tears. I can't believe the raw emotion I felt when Sesshomaru relived his most painful memories. I was literally sobbing when his mother killed the chick in his hand by squeezing her claws through it. Not to mention when present day Sess had to witness little "Shou" behead his only loving influence. I think that your story is wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 16:24 CDT
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interesting. i feel bad for sesshomaru though, talk about being a man trapped in a woman's body. poor guy. about time sango saw kouga for the asshole is truly is. update soon. i eager to know who saved sango.
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Reviewed By: choka On: June 08, 2008 15:57 CDT
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I just want to comment on the amount of thought, detail, and creativity you must have put into this story. I've ready MANY MANY fanfics but the development of and between each character in this story is very unique. Keep it up and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Title: inuyasha and rin
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!! I can't wait until Rin and Inuyasha finally get together!! When is that going to happen?! And really, I am clueless as to who Sango is going to end up with, but I really hope its Miroku. But, I'm not sure!! Can't wait til chapter 14!!
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Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:13 CDT
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Please please please update soon!! I think this story is really good!! I can't wait to read more!! Keep it up!! :)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 14, 2008 16:29 CDT
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I love your story! I wasn't feeling well today and skipped work...after a much needed sleep I hoped online to find your story and I read it in its entirety. I have to say that I am hooked and really excited to see where this is going. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
half way threw reading this chapter and I have to bring in my computer in to the store so I missing my computer for 2 days and now that I have it back I need to bring it back in again..... oh and you REALLY are a sadist..... come on put Kagome and Sesshy out of there misery...
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 15:25 CDT
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... *.*... that was... HAWT!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! and i can't wait to hear from miroku, the poor guy is obviously still very much disliked by Sango >.
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Title: re-write your summary
Reviewed By: SybillVayne On: March 07, 2008 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may want to re-write your summary since this story is about Rin and Sesshomaru. Kagome isn't even in it that much except for the sex. You know i wouldn't mind Rin so much either if she wasn't so stupid. Her personality makes me want to rip her out of the story and kill her myself. I found myself almost glad she was brutalized in the beginning. It's not a bad concept but you should change your summary because it is misleading.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur story is in my top favs. U definatly bring the drama in this story. I really enjoy what you do with each character. Can't wait for the next chapt. Your doing great.
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Title: I AM STILL LOVING YOU..xD
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..YOU UPDATED A LOT QUICKER THEN I THOUGHT YOU WOULD..xD..That Means..ILY EVEN MORE..xD..KEEP UPDATING!!..AND HAVE A GREAT LIFE Love, Sesshomaru_Kagome_Lover_4ever P.S:REMEMBER!! ELMO KNOWS WHERE YOU LIVE SO YOU BETTER KEEP UPDATING..xD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH! THE ENDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Oh well. It was wonderful, Kouga is utterly creepy. Kagome's gonna get Laid..... *Trembles with excitement for a new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!*
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Reviewed By: elly86 On: February 26, 2008 16:48 CST
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Your story is sooo good!! I love it, everytime I start to read a chapter that you post, I get excited (not sexually lol) to read it, I'm thrilled! Seriously can't wait for the next chapter!!
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