| "Her Protector" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy!! This story is fun..I cant wait to see the damage that gets handed to Sesshy! Whoot!! Thanks for this lil gift of a story!
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Reviewed By: Chibi(from fanworksfinder) On: August 19, 2007 14:41 CDT
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i got teh story link from fanworksfinder and OMG!this is soooooo good. cannot wait for next update. Sessy is sooo cute. love teh situation you've created. keep posting soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't you know GREAT minds think alike... lol. Anyway you were leading to some great possibilities... and you had only sheild light on them... I will admit, you story is VERY unique. Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 03:17 CDT
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*holds sides laughing* oh that is soooo rich wonder how long it will take him to notice he's a topless girl ? this story is pretty good and I cant wait for your next update
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... I just thought of it.... I wonder what would happen if some guy Shessy knows tries to hit on him while he is a 'she.' *rocks and smiles while tears of suppressed laughter come out.* Will not say 'update soon, please!'
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Reviewed By: devyne On: August 08, 2007 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Absolutely loved it...Please update soon. I think Sessy as a girl will be devyne (Pun intended). I'm guessing that Sessy will look like a girl using some sort of illusions (since u talekd quite a bit about it in chapters 1&2). Maybe even disguise his scent using Shippo's scent charm thingie. ummm...and since he looks like a she maybe one of the guys falls for her...inuyasha maybe... How am i doing? if i'm rite, those fireworks u mentioned may be quite interesting. Please please update! Can't wait ::begging on the knees::
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Title: Voting
Reviewed By: faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great fanfic! I vote for Sess to go undercover as a guy.
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Reviewed By: Sov On: August 01, 2007 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's Sovereignty, (too lazy to login on the skool computers...)just checking for any up dates... and get none... nice to read other users comments though... OH GOD " i so want sess to go undecover a a girl" -Miss Mischief; this so makes me think of make up... (Cant figure out why... maybe its in an Add...) You will so have to have Sesshys thoughts about what he is doing while he is a 'girl' Trying to be all 'nice' but realy having underlying murderous thought for those who put him in this position. So far 2 for him being a girl and one for him to be a guy.
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 02:57 CDT
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Lol! Wow....can't wait to see how that works out! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!! (it works!!!!) tried so hard to review... first the school computers don't work properly (spam filler doesn't work (must remember to change setting for the net there(stupid bloody things have to have deep-freeze on them))) and I cant remember what I wanted to say other than I vote for Sesshy to be a 'girl!' already thinks of plot lines you could do with it (Ahhh! The first time I tried to review is coming back to me), /he wouold probably have to share a room with her... bad naked stuff... ("is that girl a lesbian?" "why does she never get changed when i'm in the room?(not like that, like locker-room stuff you pervs)") being being able to smell if a person is a boy or a girl (Inu thinking that Sesshy is a boy) random miko power fluctuation's. the possibility's are endless...
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: July 26, 2007 11:01 CDT
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You have some interesting match ups and a cool plot. For my vote: Sesshoumaru as a guy only because he sounds too scary to be a girl. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally love this story especially the end part of chap 4, yes i so want sess to go undecover a a girl, it sounds hilarious and u hav a lot of potential with it and of course mischief. can't wait for more and lol too
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Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I didn't even notice any spelling or grammar errors! I love the plot already! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very (too tired to find any thing to critise) and I love Sesshomaru being all.... well... 'outraged...' I think is a good word... agrees with HentaiVixen, but I think it should be a little further in... umm.... yawn... :) :0 (yawn) :) you've made me feel a little better now... I have been feeling like Sh*t as my parents have just finished yelling at me... and the truth is I kinda deserve it... not that I'd say it to them...
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool!!! a lemon is coming? right please!!?please up date soon!
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