| "Her Protector" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 15:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write more especially with an ending like that
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't know what to think of this fic. I mean the whole Rin and Sess thing is kinda making me pissy to the whole thing. At this point I almost want Inu Yasha and Kags togther and that is not a pairing I'm really into. Your making the story more about Rin and Sess, well actually about Rin and it isn't why I started reading it. I hope it improves soon. Sorry if this seems like a flame but your not really following your desription at all and leaves me completely lack luster for this fic that held such promise in the start.
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY.... UP DATE SOON!!!!;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO, you rule! I've loved the 'Rin parts' so far, they have been funny and great. GREAT cliffhanger.
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Were you planning on making any lime/lemon yuri with Sess in his female avatar, or were you going to have them run into each other as Sess/Kag?? The way things are building right now, I think throwing any citrus in would be just fan-service, you know? I feel that you should continue this story the way it appears to be heading with the Sess/Kag plot and not bow to any gratuitous demands for citrus just for the sake of citrus. I like the premise, I love the way you have developed the characters so far, and I strongly feel that you should continue to do YOUR story YOUR way!! Please? :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't worry too much about Rin stealing the spotlight. If she didn't, and without trying, she wouldn't be Rin. I trust your judgment as an author. I say go with the original plan on the lemons. If you have slow reviews until then, it won't be much of a problem once new people find and read the story. The story needs it's background before we can have anyone jumping in the bed. Just about every time I have seen a Sess/Kag story where there was a lemon early on between those characters, it just doesn't seem to work right. They can still be a good read, and the alternate universe thing helps a lot, but if you jump in too early, the best you can hope for is a good read when with this story, you could have greatness, in my humble opinion.I really hope you can update soon, because you left poor Rin standing there scared and confused and I can tell her emotions are going to rush through her really fast and then she is going to do something, and I hope she's ok... I absolutely love Sesshoumaru and his female avatar. I bet Kaede is going to need a little break after he leaves just to soak it in... I can't wait to see how Sessh reacts when he sees just who Kagome is and then his frustration... now that he knows or at least has a big hint that his charge is what those people doing the Eyeless Murders are looking for, things will be interesting indeed. I really hope that Kagome runs HOME and not into a dangerous situation. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 11:54 CST
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This was a very nice chapter to read. it really got things moving and it even got some of the emotional aspects of the various characters out into the light. Though if you aren't careful with Sesshoumaru he'll end up developing a personality disorder unless he keeps a point of stability in his life. Which it looks like there aren't many considering his narrow point of focus with the eyeless murders. Again. Great writing. DD
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this story is really good please write more. Thanking you in advance
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I hope that you are able to finish the next chapter early. I would love to see what happens next as soon as possible. I usually ramble on about this and that when I like a fanfic this much, but I am not feeling too talkative at the moment and it had nothing to do with your fic. Hopefully by the time you put up your next chapter I will be giving you a review worthy of your work. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more tens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter
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Title: Her Protector
Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, great sense of humor, Interesting plot(I don't think I have read any other story like this). In the status it says the story is complete but it is more like somewhere in the middle are you going to continue the story? I really hope so it's very, very good. Keep up the good work, and good luck!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......Alll I hope for now is that InuYasha doesn't try to hit on 'Kikyou'... Inucest...,butthen I wouldn't put it past you at this point... Is sweetkijo right with the who falls for whom? oh god I hope you don't make InuYasha fantasize about Kikyou.....
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lawd...this just gets better and better. The history of the characters was nicely protrayed. Great job!! Tell me, is this gonna turn into some sorta weird love triangle, Sess is in love with Kags, Rin falls for Inu, and Inu falls for Kikyou.....ouch my head hurts...too much thinking! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you had updated..... (me just having refreshed the whats new list (of Inuyasha) squeals when I saw yours was, and then the dramatic disappointment when it wasn't.... bu that probably means you are going to update soon (you've done this before), but I'm up set (only a little bit) 'cause it's nearly 9pm or 21h?? and I might miss the update before I get to bed... however I know it will be wonderful... continue on with the great work.
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