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Reviewed By: Sover(Claire) On: February 11, 2008 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ONLY FIND OUT THAT YOU UPDATE WHILE AM AT SCHOOL!!!!! I have to wait more than 5 hours!!!!!! -lots of crying Sovereignty
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know your Email has just made waiting EVEN HARDER!!!!!!!!!! checking not just my normal list every day (which you appear in) but look up "protector" every day too now!
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Title: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING...I THOUGHT THAT I WOULD DIE!!!!!!! IF YOU DIDN'T UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LITTERLY LOVE YOU!!!! UMMM THAT SOUNDED REALLY WEIRD..AND I AM NOT!! INTO YURI..XD..SO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!! AND PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..AND I SWEAR IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON..I'M GONNA GETCHA..XD..WELL HAVE A GREAT DAY OR NIGHT OR,....WHENEVER YOU READ THIS..XD..BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last part it sounded so naughty!!!! Another wonderful chapter... would really like to see what happens when Rin and Sesshomaru talk. InuYasha and Rin fighting was... (wonderful by the way this little scene) leading up to that InuYasha's thoughts will need to be censored in the future on FF.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a really good story. I am not disappointed there have not been any lemons or limes as it is not time for them yet. Just enjoying a good plot is all I really care about for the most part and yours has it. Lemons are the extra sweetener in the stories hehehe. Please update soon. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
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Title: ELLO
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::HAS A HIGH SQUEAKY VOICE::Thank you so much for dedicating chapter 9 to me!!!! I MEAN IT!!! When I first saw it I was like yelling in happiness you could even ask my parents they were litterly closing their ears with their fingers!! MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST THANK YOU SO MUCH $ DOING THAT FOR ME AND ALL THE OTHER READERS!!!!!!!!!!! AND IF I WAS THEM I WOULD LITTERLY BE HUGGING YOU RIGHT NOW IF YOU WERE IN FRONT OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait a minute....I CAN::HUGGLES:: I THINK THIS STORY IS ADDICTING I SWEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN IT...WHEN I COME HOME FROM SCHOOL THE FIRST THING I DO IS...DUNDUNDUN!!!! GO SEE IF MY GIRL HAS UPDATED YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH YEAH HOW R U????? >,
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 12:45 CST
Comment/Review:
The um cliffy yeah it was good but not good enough. Need to do better. But the overall story was good. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice chapter. I don't think my consistency detector will be of use in this chapter because I got a massive headache halfway through (caused by sleep deprivation, not your writing), so I had to stop and go get some sleep. I really liked the whole thing with the ceremony, so your research payed off I think. I had no idea that Kagura was the name of a dance. That explains some things about the character... anyway, It looks like dog boy is relying on his nose a little too much and jumping to conclusions... not too unusual for him. I really look forward to the next chapter and I am sorry that I don't have much more to say about this one. I think it was good and it really sets up the rest of the story nicely. Oh... and Sesshoumaru's nightmare. I think you did a great job on that. The nightmares of a demon would have to be truly terrifying, especially for one named Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I just wanna hit InuYasha over with a foam covered bat... (Which is a very good thing (especially when he thinks that Miroku is cheating on Rin).) I love how Sesshomaru is at the end of the latest chapter... it is purely wonderful! Kagome doing the Miko thing was very cute! The Sango and Rin part was super funny!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92(not signed in) On: December 16, 2007 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, not ANOTHER Sess/Kags fic!! Sorry, but I absolutely HATE that pairing with a HARDCORE, DEEP PASSION. I might actually be interested if it were Inu/Kags. But I don't really like Sesshomaru's stuck up personality or how he's all 'emotionless' and all. And sorry to burst your bubble, but Sesshomaru would NEVER protect humans... That annoys me. But other than the pairing, it seemed like an ok fic (from what I've read) and looked like you are pretty good at writing. Sorry, but I probably won't be reading anymore of this... =[
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Title: Kikyou
Reviewed By: Amarioko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyou! I knew it! The moment you had him sketch Kagome I thought "Probably gonna call himself Kikyou." Lol >.> Love the story. Lovelovelovelovelove. ^^ •Amarioko
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so fucking love the part where you change Sesshomaru's sex...let alone he's going to look like the girl he's going to protect...I love the way you think!!!!!! I wish I had a mind like yours smart and a good way to keep people interrested I love it...Well hello I'm your new FAN NOW...Please keep up the good work...TOODLES...lol...Buh Bye
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 03:50 CST
Comment/Review:
moreee :)
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't read chapter revisions, but for some reason I did on this one. I didn't think there was anything wrong with it before, but I do like this version better. I only read the parts with Sesshoumaru in it. It looks like the only thing you changed was the scene in Kaede's office. I think you did a great job of keeping Kikyou from seeming like a split personality and more like something between an alter ego and a character an actor plays... I really hope that you put up a new chapter soon. I really like these characters, so I want to see what happens to them!
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Reviewed By: Lunasoleil On: November 24, 2007 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is totally original yet it still follows the plot for the Inuyasha anime. The only thing that is a little different is Sesshoumaru protecting all humans, normally he only protects his lands. All the characters have the same personality. Love it. Hope your having fun writing it cause it's fun to read and very ingenious and brilliant.
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