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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 11:54 CST
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This was a very nice chapter to read. it really got things moving and it even got some of the emotional aspects of the various characters out into the light. Though if you aren't careful with Sesshoumaru he'll end up developing a personality disorder unless he keeps a point of stability in his life. Which it looks like there aren't many considering his narrow point of focus with the eyeless murders. Again. Great writing. DD
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:54 CST
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ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this story is really good please write more. Thanking you in advance
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I hope that you are able to finish the next chapter early. I would love to see what happens next as soon as possible. I usually ramble on about this and that when I like a fanfic this much, but I am not feeling too talkative at the moment and it had nothing to do with your fic. Hopefully by the time you put up your next chapter I will be giving you a review worthy of your work. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more tens!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter
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Title: Her Protector
Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, great sense of humor, Interesting plot(I don't think I have read any other story like this). In the status it says the story is complete but it is more like somewhere in the middle are you going to continue the story? I really hope so it's very, very good. Keep up the good work, and good luck!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......Alll I hope for now is that InuYasha doesn't try to hit on 'Kikyou'... Inucest...,butthen I wouldn't put it past you at this point... Is sweetkijo right with the who falls for whom? oh god I hope you don't make InuYasha fantasize about Kikyou.....
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lawd...this just gets better and better. The history of the characters was nicely protrayed. Great job!! Tell me, is this gonna turn into some sorta weird love triangle, Sess is in love with Kags, Rin falls for Inu, and Inu falls for Kikyou.....ouch my head hurts...too much thinking! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you had updated..... (me just having refreshed the whats new list (of Inuyasha) squeals when I saw yours was, and then the dramatic disappointment when it wasn't.... bu that probably means you are going to update soon (you've done this before), but I'm up set (only a little bit) 'cause it's nearly 9pm or 21h?? and I might miss the update before I get to bed... however I know it will be wonderful... continue on with the great work.
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy!! This story is fun..I cant wait to see the damage that gets handed to Sesshy! Whoot!! Thanks for this lil gift of a story!
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Reviewed By: Chibi(from fanworksfinder) On: August 19, 2007 14:41 CDT
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i got teh story link from fanworksfinder and OMG!this is soooooo good. cannot wait for next update. Sessy is sooo cute. love teh situation you've created. keep posting soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't you know GREAT minds think alike... lol. Anyway you were leading to some great possibilities... and you had only sheild light on them... I will admit, you story is VERY unique. Please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 03:17 CDT
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*holds sides laughing* oh that is soooo rich wonder how long it will take him to notice he's a topless girl ? this story is pretty good and I cant wait for your next update
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... I just thought of it.... I wonder what would happen if some guy Shessy knows tries to hit on him while he is a 'she.' *rocks and smiles while tears of suppressed laughter come out.* Will not say 'update soon, please!'
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Reviewed By: devyne On: August 08, 2007 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Absolutely loved it...Please update soon. I think Sessy as a girl will be devyne (Pun intended). I'm guessing that Sessy will look like a girl using some sort of illusions (since u talekd quite a bit about it in chapters 1&2). Maybe even disguise his scent using Shippo's scent charm thingie. ummm...and since he looks like a she maybe one of the guys falls for her...inuyasha maybe... How am i doing? if i'm rite, those fireworks u mentioned may be quite interesting. Please please update! Can't wait ::begging on the knees::
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