| "Her Protector" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: March 27, 2010 20:36 CDT
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It's good, but I'm worried about the distance between the last two chapters. Will you be updating soon?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 fantastic Chapter!! its been a very long time but I don't think you have lost 'it'. As wonderful as always!!!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2010 04:43 CST
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I hope you update soon! I really like this story!
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: inuyashagirly On: September 29, 2009 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's chapter 19!? ); i've been checking every day for the past few months and nothing.... waaaaaah. i'm reeeeeeally looking forward to it. good luck on writing it!!
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Reviewed By: dam in not signed in xD On: June 25, 2009 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMMMMMMMGgggggggggggggg Freeeken AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE as usual xD I can't wait till sess and kagome go on their first date xD its gonan be so cute!! and sexy i can just see it! lol As for inu and rin well i hope he finds out soon and connects the peices! So they can finally get together. Keep up the writing!! Definately in my top 3 Inuyash stories!! will prob be number one when theres more chapters and all! hehe Awsome keep it up! maybe a little closer in the chapters :) mehehehe thanks for an more than enjoyable chapter! i might go read the whole things again!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fucking fantastic chapter!!! Sessy-sama!??? lol. lovely to hear from you again! InuYasha such a... if he just gave Rin 5 seconds he wouldn't be in this mess!!!
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Title: yes, that is my real email!
Reviewed By: rosie_matthews@yahoo.com On: June 24, 2009 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! Wow. Great story! I like the way that it all flows together and it is easy to follow along with. i would like to point that that you spelled realize incorrectly. lol. i've always been and InuKag person and will always be, but this is the only story that doesnt have my favorite pair in it that i totally love. i am in no way hinting that you should change some of the people's relationships but i just dont like how close rin and sessy are. it bothers me to no end for some strange reason. and how much rin and inuyasha like each other, i don't like that either. it's so different. but you're the incredibly awesome writer and i trust you to make the relationships how you see fit. this is probably the all around best fan fic i've read. i would like to thank you for all the hard work you put into writing this story. it is truly amazing. for me to read something that goes against my personal favorites and actually LOVE it, it MUST awesome! :P i can't wait to see what happens next! *omg!* :) i hope you're doing well and have as much fun writing the story as i do reading it. a million thanks!! :D
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 16:08 CDT
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this was good, i cant wait for inuyasha's reaction when he smells sesshy on kagome
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 08:28 CST
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*hugs* Time eases wounds my dear, and it is my hope that time has begum to ease yours. This was an exceptionally well written chapter and I have great faith in your writing abilities for the next chapter. Especially for what you have planned. *grins* I wish you the best of all luck. DD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... Its really great to have a new chapter and now that even thought things aren't too terrible that you are still able to indulge us poor little readers... I guess tones of people are saying "I don't know what to say..." I guess its just "shit happens" and some times good people end up getting caught in it... best wishes to you and every one that they touched in their short lives...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell aka School) On: October 13, 2008 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! I'm not here... (this close to being kicked out of class for not doing real work....) instead reading and can't stop!!! BEST CHAPTER!!!! Glad to see you are back (and not just fixing your previous ones)... oh yea.. Must kill Kouga.... evil ******!!!
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZIINNNGG!! I can't wait till kagome finds out that Sesshomaru's Moonie!! The anticipation is killing me! xD keep going its AWsOmE!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:05 CDT
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i thought it might of been miroku, that came to sangos rescue. and then he offered to train her. that cool. kouga made a huge mistake going after rin. if sesshomaru ever gets a hold of him while in his male form, i do believe kouga is dead. as for kikyo and kagome getting closer, is is hppening slowly. as for her crush on moonie, i would like to read so more about they going on. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:04 CDT
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Ah so that Is what took so long for chapters. I was begining to wonder if you decided to go on a vacation. I got stuck reading another story for a week and I was looking for another story to read or continue reading. I forgot that I started this one. It's really good by the way. I hope that you continue to write!
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Title: O my gosh!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting so good! I wish the ratings had bigger numbers than 10 because i definitely think that your story is highter than 10 rating!! I love this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! The person that saved Sango in my mind can only be 2 people: Kikyo and Miroku. But, Kikyo is now sleeping with Kagome, so i don't think its her!! Also, when are Miroku and Sango going to get together? They belong together!! I'm waiting for that to happen! I also can't wait to find out about Miroku's past... All of the characters in this story's pasts seem really deep. Poor Sesshomaru!! His memories were so sad!! This explains his personality. But still, poor Sesshomaru!! And I still like Sesshomaru better than his old name!! When is Sesshomaru going to find out that in Kagome's mind he=Moonie!?!?!?!? The plot in this story is really creative!! Can't wait til chapter 15!!
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