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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 15:25 CDT
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... *.*... that was... HAWT!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! and i can't wait to hear from miroku, the poor guy is obviously still very much disliked by Sango >.
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Title: re-write your summary
Reviewed By: SybillVayne On: March 07, 2008 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may want to re-write your summary since this story is about Rin and Sesshomaru. Kagome isn't even in it that much except for the sex. You know i wouldn't mind Rin so much either if she wasn't so stupid. Her personality makes me want to rip her out of the story and kill her myself. I found myself almost glad she was brutalized in the beginning. It's not a bad concept but you should change your summary because it is misleading.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur story is in my top favs. U definatly bring the drama in this story. I really enjoy what you do with each character. Can't wait for the next chapt. Your doing great.
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Title: I AM STILL LOVING YOU..xD
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..YOU UPDATED A LOT QUICKER THEN I THOUGHT YOU WOULD..xD..That Means..ILY EVEN MORE..xD..KEEP UPDATING!!..AND HAVE A GREAT LIFE Love, Sesshomaru_Kagome_Lover_4ever P.S:REMEMBER!! ELMO KNOWS WHERE YOU LIVE SO YOU BETTER KEEP UPDATING..xD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH! THE ENDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Oh well. It was wonderful, Kouga is utterly creepy. Kagome's gonna get Laid..... *Trembles with excitement for a new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!*
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Reviewed By: elly86 On: February 26, 2008 16:48 CST
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Your story is sooo good!! I love it, everytime I start to read a chapter that you post, I get excited (not sexually lol) to read it, I'm thrilled! Seriously can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was priceless!! the story gets better every time. Fist the scene with kikyo and now "your place or mine?" XDXD WOW!! hot stuff!! keep posting!! and the horribly tasty tension and all those tangles between mir/san and rin/inu are driving me insane!! Good work!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 13:18 CST
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damn i sense a lemon coming up there better be a lemon coming up. today is a wonderful day no classes until thursday for me yay! more time to read fanfiction! yay so please make it come out before the 12th you'll make my spring break really nice that is it starts on thursday for me yay!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit!!! damn kagome is so in trouble. i can't believe this i can't wait for you to update. this awsome and at the moment i can't spell so yeah i'm so exicted i can't wait really so plese update!!!!!!!
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Title: Just Keeps On....
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps on getting better and better. LOL. Everyone is in this fic is somehow linked one way or another. I love how you have knitted this web of intricate details in this beautifully written fic. I eagerly await you update and I pray that it will be soon. I am no longer confused as I was before in Chapter 4... You have made everything perfectly clear and I do hope that this will be a fic that will actually be completed! So many times have I stumbled across a wonderful only to find that it had been abandoned for months some even years. But I hope that this fic will not be the case... you are way too deep into the fic now. I look forward to you updated and I commend you on your astounding performance in writing this fic... Until Later Chapters Ja Ne!!!!
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Title: Cannot Move Away
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this and I am loving every word of it... Even though I still don't quite understand what is going on... I cannot bring myself to move away. I am about to move on to chapter insues. I will review again soon... Until thenm, Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Today has been GREAT you updated, CMK2CMM updates, ShadowsWeaver1 updates, and FlameTwirler updates, you guys are spoiling me!!!!! By the way... you did it perfectly!
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Title: ILY!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just realizes that there is a +17 hour time difference here from MM time. (Its 6:21pm here at the moment) And that this will make it 4 reviews in a row!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
starts reading.... not a new CHAPTER!!!!!1 awwww..... ANY WAY.. I hope you feel better soon.
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