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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... Its really great to have a new chapter and now that even thought things aren't too terrible that you are still able to indulge us poor little readers... I guess tones of people are saying "I don't know what to say..." I guess its just "shit happens" and some times good people end up getting caught in it... best wishes to you and every one that they touched in their short lives...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell aka School) On: October 13, 2008 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! I'm not here... (this close to being kicked out of class for not doing real work....) instead reading and can't stop!!! BEST CHAPTER!!!! Glad to see you are back (and not just fixing your previous ones)... oh yea.. Must kill Kouga.... evil ******!!!
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZIINNNGG!! I can't wait till kagome finds out that Sesshomaru's Moonie!! The anticipation is killing me! xD keep going its AWsOmE!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:05 CDT
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i thought it might of been miroku, that came to sangos rescue. and then he offered to train her. that cool. kouga made a huge mistake going after rin. if sesshomaru ever gets a hold of him while in his male form, i do believe kouga is dead. as for kikyo and kagome getting closer, is is hppening slowly. as for her crush on moonie, i would like to read so more about they going on. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:04 CDT
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Ah so that Is what took so long for chapters. I was begining to wonder if you decided to go on a vacation. I got stuck reading another story for a week and I was looking for another story to read or continue reading. I forgot that I started this one. It's really good by the way. I hope that you continue to write!
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Title: O my gosh!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting so good! I wish the ratings had bigger numbers than 10 because i definitely think that your story is highter than 10 rating!! I love this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! The person that saved Sango in my mind can only be 2 people: Kikyo and Miroku. But, Kikyo is now sleeping with Kagome, so i don't think its her!! Also, when are Miroku and Sango going to get together? They belong together!! I'm waiting for that to happen! I also can't wait to find out about Miroku's past... All of the characters in this story's pasts seem really deep. Poor Sesshomaru!! His memories were so sad!! This explains his personality. But still, poor Sesshomaru!! And I still like Sesshomaru better than his old name!! When is Sesshomaru going to find out that in Kagome's mind he=Moonie!?!?!?!? The plot in this story is really creative!! Can't wait til chapter 15!!
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 21:49 CDT
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Wow! first thing first, im really glad you updated(dontcha just hate computers sometimes!). The part about shessy's past was really amazing and i almost felt like i was there. im glad that sango is done with kouga and i have a pretty gud idea who this "guy" mite be. UPdate soon! Love the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww thank you!!!! another GREAT chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: June 08, 2008 18:17 CDT
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I just finished chapter 14 and it has to be said that I was truly moved to tears. I can't believe the raw emotion I felt when Sesshomaru relived his most painful memories. I was literally sobbing when his mother killed the chick in his hand by squeezing her claws through it. Not to mention when present day Sess had to witness little "Shou" behead his only loving influence. I think that your story is wonderful. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 16:24 CDT
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interesting. i feel bad for sesshomaru though, talk about being a man trapped in a woman's body. poor guy. about time sango saw kouga for the asshole is truly is. update soon. i eager to know who saved sango.
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Reviewed By: choka On: June 08, 2008 15:57 CDT
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I just want to comment on the amount of thought, detail, and creativity you must have put into this story. I've ready MANY MANY fanfics but the development of and between each character in this story is very unique. Keep it up and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Title: inuyasha and rin
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!! I can't wait until Rin and Inuyasha finally get together!! When is that going to happen?! And really, I am clueless as to who Sango is going to end up with, but I really hope its Miroku. But, I'm not sure!! Can't wait til chapter 14!!
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Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:13 CDT
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Please please please update soon!! I think this story is really good!! I can't wait to read more!! Keep it up!! :)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 14, 2008 16:29 CDT
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I love your story! I wasn't feeling well today and skipped work...after a much needed sleep I hoped online to find your story and I read it in its entirety. I have to say that I am hooked and really excited to see where this is going. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
half way threw reading this chapter and I have to bring in my computer in to the store so I missing my computer for 2 days and now that I have it back I need to bring it back in again..... oh and you REALLY are a sadist..... come on put Kagome and Sesshy out of there misery...
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