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Reviewed By: darklori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reminiscent of Mer and Der in Grey's Anatomy in the first season. Absolutely love it! So sexy and funny and oh god, that kitchen sex scene in chapter 3... er wait... my nose is bleeding. The hiding in the fichus in chapter 4, yet Bya-kun still found them, it was both funny and horrifying. Chapter 5 desk sex, but not only hawt desk sex, but sex infront of the clueless ex... mmmm, sweet justice. Chapter 6, the mush here was so deliciously fleeting, I was just starting to soak it up, and then... make up sex, oh well. Chapter 7, lol. Oh my god, my boyfriend has weird tastes in movies too... and we did watch that same movie in his dorm, er... too much info, right. The Master fetish, hmm... interesting, and bastard renji makes an unwelcome reappearance, exboyfriends have the lousiest timing. The last chapter, oh gosh, I loved Bya-kun in this one, less of a monster and more of a brother. And oh, very fresh... that idea wherein Bya-kun and Ren-baka where on their way to Rukia's crib while IchiRuki were having a moment, the criss-cross of scenes, I loved it, It brought the idea that they just might get caught in the middle of it all. Geesh... sorry I ranted, but I'm ranting 'bout your fic, so I hope you won't mind, am just your humble fangirl. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inazagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story and can completely and utterly relate to Rukia. I have a psychopathically possesive brother and an unrelenting ex-boyfriend, so this was quite a great read for me! I was wondering halfway through the story if Rukia was going to begin to question Ichigo's motives, seeing as all he seemed to mention was sex. So I was rather surprised to leave it unnoticed (Until, of course the lake chapter =P). Again, another amazing story and I'm going to continue on with them all! I *adore* your style of writing, so keep it up! Anna xxxx
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I can say that this fic of yours was definitely worth my time to read. It was more then just good ol' smut (and who doesn't love juicy smut?? D=). It had a decent plot and story. Though its hard to believe a ONS could turn into something like them getting married, then again this is fanfiction so we can have a little fun XD! I loved the story greatly and now its become almost a habit of mine to read your stories late night before I go to bed (or rather sleep since I'm already in bed XD). Wonderfully done and I didn't have any real gripes with it. Overall a 8/10. Fantastic job and looking forward to reading your other titles!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH SH!T!!! I don't know what was more insane. The limeade you made during the zombie movie (which I found odd yet strangely enjoyable XD) or Renji punching Ichigo. All I can say is "WOW" you've got me on the edge of my seat (well I'm on my bed with my laptop, but w/e XD) since there is only ONE! more chapter left and thats the conclusion!! OMG can't wait to read the ending. Really good chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very romantic chapter I must say. The fic gets better with each coming chapter. I was skeptical at first, but I must say you've done a marvelous job. The emotions and passion was so wonderfully written that I could easily feel them myself. Your writing ability is truly majestic. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG ROFL I FREAKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! XDDDD!!! OK OK (calms down) wow this was freaking amazing. office sex? This is something that you can only read in fan fiction and enjoy XDD! I don't think I'll be able to sit in my office without coming back to this chapter. Damn your good XDD! It was HOT!, fun, and well written. Totally
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest I didn't really expect much from the fic as I continued reading the first few chapters. However, this one completely changed my mind. It was a strong chapter. The cute bits with the lingerie and Rukia hiding from her brother, but then the real turning point was the conversation between the three. It was quite powerful emotional wise and I really really (can't stress that enough XD) enjoyed the lemon. Wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL fruit and sex. Two of the sweetest things in life XDDDD!! Wow I'm loving this fic. Has some decent plot and great smut. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha some actual plot. I like it! I mean smut is fun n' great and all, but you need some decent plot to go with it! Loved the interaction especially with the motorcycle bit. And the sex was just great. I love reading about Dom!Rukia. I can totally envision it happening with Ichigo XDD! Good job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O! Now that was something That was some super HOT smut. You really do make the sweetest lemonade I've ever seen XDD!! And yeah Renji is one of my favorite characters as well, but I can understand if you want to make him into an antagonist. His crazy personality fits it just about right :P Anyways, so it looks to be a semi PWP fic. I like it! Can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: moonflowers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:35 CST
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Wow, you've written such an incredibly hot Ichigo! *fans self* I love how you make it clear that it's not just about the sex, though it is amazing sex. :) I really like how your AU characterizations fit so well with the original characters' personalities - Renji, Byakuya, and Ishida in particular. Let's hope Rukia gets around to making Ichigo clean that filthy room of his. :)
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Title: O.O I didn't review! Damn it!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crap, sorry I didn't review before! I really liked this story! The begining was good and everything was awesome! You did a great job with this fic!
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Reviewed By: stillselfishme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 01:56 CST
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i totally loved the whole thing. the sex scenes were hot& the content wasn't bad either haha. but i must say that i don't recommend sex in water! hah.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:22 CDT
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so didn't want it to end.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful ending!! Yay!!! It gave me goosebumps. See?? You are wonderful writer, I surely hope you will continue this in another story, but whatever path you take I know it will be successful. Thanks so much for the good read@!!! Ichigo and Rukia paring stories are so hard to find. Peace!
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