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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha some actual plot. I like it! I mean smut is fun n' great and all, but you need some decent plot to go with it! Loved the interaction especially with the motorcycle bit. And the sex was just great. I love reading about Dom!Rukia. I can totally envision it happening with Ichigo XDD! Good job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O! Now that was something That was some super HOT smut. You really do make the sweetest lemonade I've ever seen XDD!! And yeah Renji is one of my favorite characters as well, but I can understand if you want to make him into an antagonist. His crazy personality fits it just about right :P Anyways, so it looks to be a semi PWP fic. I like it! Can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: moonflowers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:35 CST
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Wow, you've written such an incredibly hot Ichigo! *fans self* I love how you make it clear that it's not just about the sex, though it is amazing sex. :) I really like how your AU characterizations fit so well with the original characters' personalities - Renji, Byakuya, and Ishida in particular. Let's hope Rukia gets around to making Ichigo clean that filthy room of his. :)
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Title: O.O I didn't review! Damn it!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crap, sorry I didn't review before! I really liked this story! The begining was good and everything was awesome! You did a great job with this fic!
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Reviewed By: stillselfishme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 01:56 CST
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i totally loved the whole thing. the sex scenes were hot& the content wasn't bad either haha. but i must say that i don't recommend sex in water! hah.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:22 CDT
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so didn't want it to end.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful ending!! Yay!!! It gave me goosebumps. See?? You are wonderful writer, I surely hope you will continue this in another story, but whatever path you take I know it will be successful. Thanks so much for the good read@!!! Ichigo and Rukia paring stories are so hard to find. Peace!
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Title: AISHITERUZE, BABY
Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you so much. You give us such a magnificent story. I really admire your works. Keep on writing coz everyday I always check your name in this site whether you update this story or new stories. It's really worth to wait it coz your story really amazing. T I recommend to you to try this site. fanfiction.net Many people give their reviews here compare this site. Anyway hontou ni arigatou for your stories
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 23:30 CDT
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great!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very awesome. I hope this really isn't the end. But I will leave that up to you . You are the author after all. I can only say that I have enjoyed it this far and would be sad if it ended.
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sad that it's over no no no i don't want it to be over but maybe you could write the marrage sequel that would bu cool
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Title: Love'n Ichigo!!
Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your story...I'm new to the site and this is the first Bleach FanFic I've read...you're doing a great job, can't wait for you to post another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Itachis_Mistress_sprialk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need I say it: OMFG. This was the best hentai I've taken the time to read in ages. And I love this pairing like crazy, which made it even better. Your story + my eyes = luff
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 22:01 CDT
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whoa!!! what a cliff-hanger that was!!! i thought they'd just settle for death glares, but a punch! you caught me off guard there!XD...NICE ^-^
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Reviewed By: ichigo1rukia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I absolutely love it, please finish I'm going crazy here!!!
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