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Title: Sorry about this...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 11:47 CDT
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For some freaking reason only 10 percent of my review posted. So now I'm posting another one. For the Ichigo/Rukia story I would like you to write, It takes place before she is taken back to the soul society by her brother and Renji. It's about Rukia is beginning to have human feelings now that's she's been in her Gagi (sp??) too long. She makes up her mind to 'use' Ichigo by helping her explore these emotions, and the the rest is history. But Ichigo by far in this story in the beginning is very reluctant AT FIRST, but he catches on. And then in the aftermath of what have done they feel awkward about it, and how can they maintain a soul reaper working relationship now since they have consumated their friendship? Will Ichigo loose focus? Will Rukia want to really go back home? You can email me at gokusgirl_2000@yahoo.com if you need more elaboration about the fic...but I really feel you could do it justice! Until then, good update, have a great summer!! gg
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH no Renji don't do it!!! This is is a great chapter, I freaked out when I saw my pen name in your story!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And so Renji and Ichigo meet! **evil grins** I'm not surprised that Renji hit him, but I am surprised that Ichigo wasn't expecting something like that from Rukia's ex. yet another good chapter, and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I can't believe he punched him. Well, yeah I can. I'm glad you had fun at camp. When I was younger, I used to love to go to girlscout camp. I went twice in one year one time. Hope to hear from you soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be sooooo great!!!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 11:05 CDT
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oh no renji is back what will happen and i hope ichigo will beat his ass for that punch to the gut
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Reviewed By: ancha_289 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I like the new twist! Keep up the good work and I'm glad you had fun at UVA (even though they denied my admission application. grr.)
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I love this pairing, and I've looked all over the place for fanfiction on this pair. You made Ichigo exactly what I think of him- sexy, dark, posessive, sexy... and did I mention sexy? :D This is a VERY well written AU, and you should be very proud of yourself. I was just floored that you would be in my area (UVA) soon for a writing camp; I wish I knew about it. I'm a writer myself and I can just tell how you write that you are well studied in the art of wrting. I don't think I could come this close to this kind of writng skill! BTW... I was wondering if I could contact you by email with an idea or two on a IchRukia story that I have bopping about in my noggin... I think you could put it to good use. Well enough of my yaking, good job, and it will be a treat to get the next update when you come back! Enjoy you vacation! gg
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 04:38 CDT
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finally read chapter 5! possesive arent we? but, gosh! inside the workplace? in an office? and under the desk too! i didnt know one could even do that! renji must be pretty stupid or pre occupied not to have noticed! keep it up man. so, when will you post chapter 6?
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Title: (^_^)
Reviewed By: Taiyou-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, love the story, keep at it.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this chapter to be very romantic. And not just because of the locale. You can see them falling in love with each other, even though they are trying hard to hide it, afraid that the other won't feel the same (if they only knew!). I was completely amused by the ending as well. I like Renji as a character enough to feel bad for him about Riiko, though I was also glad that he did get his just desserts. But I am really waiting for the first time that Renji and Ichigo finally meet. That should be extremely interesting. Please keep up the great work, and enjoy your vacation!
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Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 04:31 CDT
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Usual great writing and interesting situations. And so very hot.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 06:42 CDT
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what office sex scenes? where's renji? thye last chapter that is available here is the one with byakuya. have you updated? is there a chapter 5? where the hell is it then?????
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Reviewed By: ancha_289 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:24 CDT
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I normally don't care for AU storylines that stray so far from the original storyline, but this is so. good. and you seem to have incorporated some canon into the plot, like Renji working under Byakuya and Ichigo's family still being the same. All the people are still in character, another oddity in most AU fics. I also LOVE your lemon scenes. *fans self vigorously with Urahara's fan* So hot!! You are able to make them into more than just "he fucked her" into "emotions conveyed into extremely fanfuckingtastic actions." I can't wait to see more! Update soon!! *fangirls and adds to favorites*
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 01:08 CDT
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sorry for flooding but, uh...I didn't know it was suppose to be rhetorical. lol. my fault...anyway your work(s) is a masterpeice!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 11:32 CDT
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omg it's already hot enough in here! Omg the last 2 chapthers are..hott!! great job!!
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