| "Hunt for the Sword of Legend" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 06:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are probably losing their minds right now. I hope that they aren't in such a rage that they can't think clearly enough to formulate an effective plan to get their ladies out. Rage can make you strong, but it can also make you reckless. I just hope that they can get it together, in spite of the extreme provocation. Good one.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.. How can you leave it at such a Cliffy.. I'm on the edge... Please please update soon.. and keep up the great work. I love how kagome and inu's relationship is progressing! LOVE IT! lol.. :D:D Great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 16:52 EDT
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AHH! EVIL cliffie! But so very Naraku.....hurry and continue! I wanna see those sexy inu-bros kick some serious butt!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... WHY END IT THERE!! HOLY COW!!!
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Reviewed By: Timmy45 On: September 22, 2008 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far but the hanging was mean but can't wait read moree soon please. Don't have Narku actually touch the much that's just wrong.
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Title: I"M BACK
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUUUUM I'M NOT SURE WHAT HAPPENED BUT YOU GOT LOST SOMEHOW, I WAS CHECKING FOR NEW STORIES AND FOUND CHAP 25.... I SEEM TO HAVE MISSED A FEW CHAPS SOMEWHERE SO YOU ARE SAFE FROM THE HOUNDS FOR NOW!!!! YOU ARE NOW BACK ON THE FAVORITE LIST OF THE LORDS OF THE UNDERWORLD !!!! JUST SO YOU NEVER FORGET,,,, I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a couple of hours before coming home!!!! NOW FOR THE REVIEW!!!! AAAAAAAGGGG!!!!!""OMG"" HE HAS THEM BOTH???? THERE BETTER BE SOME SERIOUS NARAKU ASS KICKING HAPPENING SOON OR I MAY WRITE MYSELF IN TO THE STORY AND DO IT MY SELF,..... OOPS GETTING A LITTLE CARRIED AWAY .THERE!!!!hehehe BESIDES THE FACT THAT YASHA AND SHESS WOULD NEVER FORGIVE ME FOR NOT LEAVING ANY FRESH MEAT FOR THEM ....LOL WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 04:12 EDT
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ooo im all excited now XD
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Reviewed By: adeaneri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it anthing to do with adventures cant wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But we should have known Naraku would make his move soon. I just hope the boys can get to Kaome and Rin in time. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG NARAKU IS BACK!!! OMG OMG!!! KAGOME AND RIN!?! OMG!! *starts to panick*
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. The love confessions, the lemon. It was a perfect blend of passion and fire....but also sweetness and vulnerability. Kagome and Inuyasha's first time is a real reflection of their entire relationship. Unconditional love....balanced by misunderstandings because they are insecure about trusting in a love that strong. Quite frankly, it would scare the heck out of me too, lol. Great characterization. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo yummy :P and that song, just by reading it, made me wanna cry... lol
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 01:10 EDT
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oh that was SOOO worth the wait!!! and the song is amazing!!! what a mood setter! Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful and tastefully done event with us!! I love the way you instilled the doubt and insecurity they each felt at that crucial moment, and the tender way it was resolved. This truly was a beautiful chapter and well worth the wait!!!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 16:11 EDT
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GAH! What a horrible way to end a chapter!!! *panting for more*.....well, since you promised a citrusy chapter next time, I suppose I will have to wait (just don't take TOO long, or I may have hurt someone!!! lol) I simply adore the way you are building their relationship. You make it seem so natural and effortless. The hint of danger lurking is wonderful, and the fact that you still have Kagura plotting an escape is great!! Another masterful installment to a truly magnificent work of literature!!!!
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Title: Mouth-droppingly awesome
Reviewed By: Oddcake (not signed it at the moment) On: July 16, 2008 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant AU fic. I have spent the whole day reading this and I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. The story is well written, romantic, funny and yet still full of action and with some chapters that leave me shouting at the laptop because I get so involved into the story (if that makes sense!) Please keep this up and I will most definatly be waiting around for the next chapter!
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