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Reviewed By: smich16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 21:35 EDT
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this a great fic. nice detail and insight to kagome and inuyasha. i like the way you keep focus on the plot and kagome and inuyasha's relationship and thoughts. you also put in some sango and miroku without distracting me from the main point or main couple. i did favorite this fic cause im really anxious as to see whats going to happen. great fic!! ~smich16
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Title: desert siren
Reviewed By: desert siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! The reaction Miroku received when Kagome asked him to join her for her bath was just too funny. Can't wait until next update.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sry for not reviewing last time...great new chapter...ummm gotta question....in this chapter u said that inuyasha's father had died before he was born but i remember in i diff chpt u said that his father used to tell him and fluffy stories about how they were the desendents of the owners of the swords......loving the whole brotherly love inukagome4life
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I loved the reaction to Miroku and Kagome's bath ritual! I look forward to New Orleans.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I am so glad that Inuyasha got a chance to whip that guys butt (that is much too nice a term for what apparently happened to the guy, but I'm trying to avoid profanity, lol). He certainly deserved the butt kicking. And I also liked the explanation of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's somewhat strange relationship. There is brotherly love there.....it's just expressed a little differently, lol. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter! It's so sad what happened to Inuyasha but it's cool that Inuyasha daring to take a chance again is encouraging Kagome :) Yeah! Sweet to see Kag open up to Rin a bit! I really liked seeing Inu's and Sess's relationship explained a bit more although I always had the impression from your writing that they cared about each other underneath all the verbal abuse. :) What a beautiful way for Sess to show Inu that he was sorry! *sniff* Should be an interesting bath! Hope you had a great time camping!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah...go ahead and keep telling yourself that you are just homesick Kagome! LOL More like lovesick with Inu :) We begin to see the tiniest bit into Kagome's psyche and now you've got me on the edge of my seat wondering what happened to the poor girl in her past! At least, for however briefly, she is seeing a possible happy future with Inu. I did a few searches for info on Voodoo...Wikipedia was hopeless but I did find a bit of stuff at the sites below. Not really sure what aspects of Voodoo you are looking for information about but hope these help http://www.teachingreligion.com/voodoo/beliefs.html, http://www.religioustolerance.org/voodoo.htm, http://www.neworleansvoodoocrossroads.com/rituals.html Still luvin' it...keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 07:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I Really enjoyed the new chapter. I am glad to see that Kagome is daring to hope at least a little. I would like to help you find the material you need on Voodoo and I will look around tomorrow. (it's a bit late to start trying to dig up things like that) I have happened upon a few tidbit he and there about Voodoo, but I am afraid that it is a Mystery religion. I may be wrong abut this, but if I am right, it means partly that it will be really difficult to find out a lot about it, but that isn't really a bit deal, because it that is so, the characters wouldn't find out a hell of a lot themselves.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It wasn't long, but I REALLY liked it. The Inu/Kag stuff at the beginning was so sweet. And Inuyasha was so wise not to make it a big deal that she crawled into bed with him. It WAS a big deal, but she would run like a scared rabbit if he pointed that out, lol. They are just adorable, so I defniitely look forward to seeing how they progress. Kagome's fears are going to be tough to get over....but if she can, it will definitely be worth the trouble. I also liked the brief brotherly understanding that took place between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. I'm not sure that Inuyasha fully understands how much of his heart he revealed with his statements, but his brother and Miroku certainly got it. I look forward to reading more soon. And I'll e-mail that corny name for the story later. *sighs* LOL
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice chapter. It may not be action packed but it certainly moves the character development along nicely. Rin seems to truly like Inuyasha and I can imagine her acting as a bit of a peace keeper between the irascible brothers :) It's satisfying seeing everyone's relationships develop and being revealed. I think it's great that you get into the emotions of the story as you're writing. For me, that's what makes a story worth the time to read...the connection to the characters a talented author can make me feel. As for this being your first fanfic, BRAVO! I don't detect any 'cobwebs' in your writing. Your style is wonderful and you have almost no grammatical errors, something that a lot of fanfic authors I've read, who have many more titles posted, continue to have problems with. I'm not trying to put anyone down just to highlight how well you are doing. I'm really looking forward to reading more of the story! soon?
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 07:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I REALLY hope that they can figure something out about Naraku. And I definitely look forward to seeeign all the character interactions next time, particularly Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. There is such a love/hate relationship between the two brother, so it's always fun when they bump heads. As for a suggestion for a title......I've wracked by brain, but I can't think of one. You old one isn't bad....but I can see why you want to spice it up. If I come with one that doesn't sound as corny as the one I DID come up with, I'll let you know, lol.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really getting into this story. I have to confess that when I first started reading it I was kinda missing the half-demon Inuyasha but I do really like adventure stories! I'm really curious about what Kagome hasn't told Inuyasha that no one else, including Miroku, knows. When she eventually tells him hopefully it will allow her trust him a little more with her heart. I feel so sorry for whatever must have happened to her. I don't think she is intentionally hurting Inu, in fact she really wants to not hurt him. Just seems for some reason that she is really afraid they will wind up both getting hurt. Seemed like a pretty rookie mistake for Inu to make going into a totally dark room, with Kags, without checking it out completely first or turning on a light or something. Maybe he was just getting a little careless and hopefully this will be a kick in the pants to be more carefull with Kags without too serious consequences this time. Can't wait for more of the story to unfold!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was dying when inuaysha was like "Bullshit" pure jokes....the comforting part was really sweet.of couse you love having a number one fan...ummm..cuz its me..lol....i wonder why inuyasha and kagome fell asleep while (least i think they did...you implied that right? lol) the bad guy is in the room next to them....lol...hope miroku and sango stay safe... ~luvie~
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I really loved how Kagome and Inuyasha took care of each other at the end. But, it's definitely getting more dangerous. I wonder who those guys were? Inuyasha and Kagome got too wrapped up in each other to find out, but hopefully Sango and Miroku will be able to shed some light on who those men were next time.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my little brother is 14...you kidding this chapter was jokes!! the way kagome attacked totosai...but then again i would have to if he did that to me.....damn little old con men...hehehh^^...aww kagome gunna break his heart in to a million pieces with the way that she keeps on rejecting him...i can't hope to see want happens back to them back in New Orlans....later and update soon ur number 1 fan INUKAGOME4LIFE
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