| "Hunt for the Sword of Legend" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: White Dire Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 14:11 EDT
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whoa, was up late last night wanting so bad to finish it and spent all morning reading! It's now 3pm and I only just noticed how the day just went, and now I'm sad I have read it all the way. Great story line and I like how they are progressing with each other. A true romance story, with a great flair (since I am an archaeologist and I love adventure stories ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe^^ thats a BIT too late seeing as ive already beat the crap outta him..lol...ehh...i agree with inuGoddess that was a MAJOR SETBACk...en when he finally made the move to...dang....o well nothings fair in love and war... inukagome4life
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But a MAJOR setback. I felt so sorry for poor Inuyasha! He had just worked up the courage to finally make a move.....and Kagome just totally dissed him. I know she's scared, but I just don't see how she could resist that puupy face I KNOW he'd been making at her the whole day after that, lol. Her hang ups are going to make it TOUGH for them to get together. I just hope that Yash doesn't give up on her. I don't think he will give up......but I also think that Kagome should need to fight for HIM for a change before this is all over. The war wounds shouldn't be all on his side. Great story.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm just glad that Myouga wasn't killed. The stuff with Kouga was interesting, too. Inuyasha beating the crap out of Kouga and knocking him unconcious, just because he made Kagome sad and cry.....what a sweet gesture! LOL. On a more serious note, though, things are getting more dangerous for them by the second, thanks to Naraku. I'm just glad that there hasn't been any real harm done yet. But, I'm sure things can and will get a lot worse. I'll definitely be looking for the update.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup having no internet sux but everything is fine now....BACK UP...THERES A NEW ONE COMING OUT??? *turns to lil brother* WHY WAS I NEVER TOLD ABOUT THIS!?!?!? *turns back to you with a sweet smile (a bit too sweet)* plz excuse me while i kill him....*runs off screaming "SUNNY YOU LITTLE TWREP"*
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i noticed the whole indian jones thingy too...i hve the complete collection at home me en my bro where watching them and i was like its kinda like ur fan fic...love ya ~inukagome4life~
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Title: chpt 3
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sry for not coming in a long time...i just moved and i hve no internet...right now im at the libaray...thing hve been crazy...so ur saying your boyfriend laughed....dont worry mines did too when he read what i worte...lol...but your right about one thing they dont under stand the whole author + #1 fan relationship thingy...anyways gotta go read the other cahpters you put up be back in a few to leave more reviews.... ~inukagome4life~
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Reviewed By: Vixenpi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more! Very well written with nice long chapters. Great character development with Miroku being a hero in disguise. I can't wait for the next chapter! Good work!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. It is so significant that both Inuyasha and Kagome are trusting each other with secrets that they haven't told people they've known and trusted all their lives. I don't think they even realize how important that fact is. Clearly, they have both fallen for each other hard and fast. Inuyasha actually admits it, but Kagome seems afraid to. Suprisingly, she may be the toughest nut to crack in this respect. Yasha has his work cut out for him, so I hope he's up to the challenge. It will SO be worth it if he is. I definitely look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Whether Kagome sees it yet or not, she has already started feeling close to Inuyasha. No matter what the circumstances, unless she already felt pretty comfortable around him, Kagome would never allow herself to be alone in a room with someone she didn't trust. She's much too gun-shy for that. So, Inuyasha has already won half the battle for her heart whether HE knows it or not, lol. I look forward to seeing more soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm new to reading it; I just jumped aboard here at Chapter 3. Your plot is so interesting; I never thought of Inuyasha as Indiana Jones, but it suits him so well. Both of them are daredevils and treasure seekers. And the the romance brewing between Inuyasha and Kagome is wonderful. That first scene where they were talking to each other after the attack and they couldn't stop looking into each other's eyes....there are no words for how beautifully that scene was done. I did notice a few minor grammatical errors, but overall this is very well done. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...my type of person...lol....I LOVE YOU!!!!!! lol...anyways....im curious (sp) here...that guy who attcked kagome it was naraku? awww love at first sight....o yhea i hve another question for u (sorry) how old exaly are kagome inuyasha miroku and sango....i love where this is going plz update soon....ur now #1 FAN INUKAGOME4LIFE AND DONT U FORGET IT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... this is very interesting, I have to say. I really like your style of writing and I'm anxious to find out where this goes and what kind of hunt they're going to have to go through to find the sword. Update soon, please! I really really reeeaaally wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is really cool...i really like where your going with this.....looks like inuyasha's going to get in to something bad.....update soon please ~inukagome4life~
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:18 EDT
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Yay! Inuyasha meets Indiana Jones! Awesome. Very well written, too, which only adds to the enjoyment. Please update soon!!
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