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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 09:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And, once again, I love your characterization. Inuyasha and Kagome were so cute in this chapter. I think a lot of us can relate to what Kagome went through at the shooting range, not hardly able to think (or breathe, lol) while the guy you like so much is right behind you, practically holding you at times. That is a great feeling. And Inuyasha's pouting at the end when he got put in the doghouse.....too CUTE! I really enjoyed their scenes so much this time. But I also really liked Sesshoumaru in this chapter. Yes, he and Inuyasha talked badly to each other.....but mostly because Inuyasha insisted on being the bratty little brother, lol. But, my favorite part was at the end, when Sesshoumaru said that he hoped Inuyasha could find the same happiness that he had with Rin. Now THAT was a real glimpse into what he really feels. They are abusive to each other verbally....but that line tells you clearly that Sessh loves his brother deeply and would do anything for him. We knew that anyway by his actions. But, those WORDS were really touching. Wonderful chapter. And I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
60th comment i feel special lol but at the same time i feel bad... i missed ther other chapter T-T but 'Sesshoumaru in a speedo' how have been HOT!! but any guy in speedos usually aint a pretty site lol and OUCH! that story of Kagome and her scars and... T-T that nearly killed me... but Sesshy and Rin going to have a kid.... N'AWWWWWWWWWW how CUTE!!! and HA Inuyasha is getting some pay back XD what a evil Kagome :P
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Tink2Kagome On: February 21, 2008 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read alotta fanfics and few have ever really grabbed my attention. I've only reviewed twice on a fanfic. This story is awsome! Write more!
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Reviewed By: Kags13 On: February 16, 2008 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What thats it! You need to write more! Write more NOW! In other words please update!!!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man telling you that I love this story is and understatement, but hey I do. can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 07:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I really enjoyed the parts with Inuyasha and Kagome. Her story about her scars was so sad, but when you look at how she acted in the beginning of the story, I guess it really shouldn't shock you. She's obviously been through a lot...and, as Inuyasha said, it's good that she didn't succeed. Inuyasha's story with Amanda was sad also; I can't imagine treating someone the way she did. Man, both Inuyasha and Kagome have been through so much. I just hope that they don't chicken out, that they will grab onto their shot at happiness. I really do like how you're letting them get to know each other instead of it being all out sex. Yes, they have had some heavy make out sessions....but it's been mostly about them getting to know each other. I really liked that.
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Title: Ten!
Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just going to say 'WOW'! This chapter was simply brilliant! I almost hurt myself laughing at 'Sesshoumaru in a speedo'! LOL! Did you really think I'd miss the sneaky wench line?! (Sneaky Wench!) I think what I liked most was Kagome taking that final step in trusting Inuyasha and he in turn trusting her. They've shown each other their hearts and bared their souls and trust and love each other the more for it. They have begun to heal each other. This chapter was a perfect blend of humor, raw emotion and drama with a little citrus thrown in. I LOVED the "I'll kick her ass for you" LOL! I kinda suspected about Kagome's other secret but I never thought she would have tried that method. Generally girls don't use such direct methods...at least not back in the stone ages from whence I come. :) You keep right on writing the way you do, award committees be damned! Your style is fantastic; it draws you into the story and won't let go! It's what captured me into this fic. Of course you can use the shooting range idea if you want and it's not stealing...it's freely offered and I'm honored if you think it worth using! You've never let this hentai down and I think the 'pace' you've set it perfect. Thankyou for sharing your story!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am SO thrilled that you finally updated this fantastic fic. I fell held over heels for it the moment it graced my vision. The latest chapter brought tears to my eyes as Kagome confessed her darkest secret to the man she loves. You can really relate to the pain she felt at that time-- and the act of cutting is such a sad and common occurrence. I love how deeply they love each other and your ways of illustrating their unique affections. The plot is spectacular and extremely original despite the influence from both the Indiana Jones movies and Rumiko's feudal fairytale. I love, love, love it. Thank you for updating!
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Title: VERRY GOOOD
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!! WE WERE JUST LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO READ WHILE KEEPING THE FIRES HOT AND FOUND THIS STORY AND AFTER READING the first 6 CHAPTERS WE HAVE DEEMED IT GOOD ENOUGH TO ALLOW YOU TO BE ADDED TO THE FAVORITES LIST OF THE LORDS OF THE UNDER WORLD!!!! DO NOT TAKE THIS HONOR LIGHTLY.... FOR I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks They will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an Update is posted!!!! After which they will transform Back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are And want to play with you for a couple of hours Before coming home!!!! .... SO DON;'t KEEP ME WAITING TO LONG !!! STORY IS REALLY GOOD LOVE THE INTERACTION BETWEEN YASHA AND KAGS,,,, If this is your first fanfic then you are Good!!! The story line is excellent, and easy to follow. Your first Lime was also good... I thought I would just Let you know how good you are doing!!!! Now I have to catch up on the rest of the story,,, We shall see if our trust in your abilities will be justified... BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" sorry I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 01:16 EST
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Great story so far! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: January 22, 2008 20:10 EST
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can't wait for the next chapter. great story!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see Kagome taking another step towards letting Inuyasha into her life by deciding to not run away when things started heating up. It's so sweet how concerned Inu is about not going too fast for her. I'm also glad he was able to make her understand why he stopped...he's usually not so good with words. LOL!! So, is there going to be a scene with Inu teaching Kags to shoot...holding her close with his arms around her showing her how to aim?...hmmm The firing range is probably an even less desirable place than the seedy motel! lol Can't wait to see how everything develops! Sneaky Wench!
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Reviewed By: I_K_4L On: January 05, 2008 16:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its inu_kaGOme_4life...I AM SOOO SORRY FOR NOT BEING HERE IN THE LONGEST TIME!!! real life thought it would b fun to mess with me so now im brain dead and dead beat tried...i just came to wish u a belated merry xman, happy birthday , and happy new years...okay so im gunna go and finish reading all the chapters i hvent read..and dont worry ill always b ur number 1 fan!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 03:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need to squeeze something!! and yes you have gained a new reader/reviewer ^^ all of the other stories have Inuyasha and Kagome hit the bed within like 5 chapters but im happy you didnt do that ^^ and its good to see Inuyasha and my Sesshy have a better bortherly love for each other :P and oo you had to go to hospital T-T im in hopsital at the moment with my trusty laptop lol ^^ and its sad that Miroku sounds like my oldest brother... him having some of his friends watch me >.> (my brother is in another state) but HA Sesshy's idea to send Kagome, i was thinking it would have been Rin :P and the latest chapter... MY GOD i was drawn to it lol anwyays hope you get well and dont rush anything ^^ and i just realizsed... im longest comment ever HA ^^ oooo and my grammar, spelling is CRAP to the max XD
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 08:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Inuyasha is WONDERFUL in this story. I think I've mentioned that before, lol. Only a REAL man would turn down sex, no matter where he is. And the fact that he loved and respected Kagome enough to not want to make love to her for the first time in such a seedy place, even though she was willing says A LOT about him......and all of it GOOD. Very good chapter. And I really hope that your New Year is better than the end of your old one. It sounds like you had a really tough time. I hope you feel better soon!
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