| "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 282 ] |
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 19:52 PST
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Amazing fight scene. Easy to imagine & very clear. I love bad puns, so I enjoyed Fe-san. Can't wait for Sess to catch up. Kagome is going to have some 'splaining to do ;)
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Reviewed By: Nami no Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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When you go looking for trouble, it usualy comes sneeking up behind you. I hope she knows what she's doing. How are Jaken and Inuyasha getting along without our heros? Anyhoo...Your awsome and I'm looking forward to the next episode.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 12:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help but think that Kagome may have bitten off more than she can chew this time. She has always been reckless in certain moments. And not waking Sesshoumaru...I mean...Do-Gu could do something to the story. Anywho, thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 09:05 PST
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I don't mind the slow pacing, I've enjoyed Mon-ki & Fe-san. I still look forward to the next chapter though of course.
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:28 PST
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This story is really good in my opinion. I love it and can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: Des (not signed in) On: January 19, 2009 08:17 PST
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Of course we're staying with the story! You're a very talented writer and I really enjoy reading your work. It doesn't feel like you're trying to make it longer just for the sake of making it longer. It feels like for you to properly tell the story you've envisioned and developed in your mind you're going to end up with more chapters than you originally estimated. Please keep up the good work!!
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Title: Chapter 49
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 00:53 PST
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Ah, and to add to all the fun from today/yesterday, another wonderful chapter from Lady B!! As I said elsewhere, I LOVE this story. The time you've spent lovingly intertwining the characters within the tales is phenomenal. The amount of care you've taken with the continuity, development, pacing and all the other thousands of details is nothing short of amazing. AND, the "interludes" whereby you answer reviewers questions are brilliantly hilarious. I look forward eagerly to each and every update, but with the patience one must have when waiting for more of such an intricate story. Thank you so much for the many hours of entertainment you've provided thus far, as well as for the hours to come!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 01:35 PST
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Aww, and here I was hoping for some physical contact. XD Oh well, the tension mounts and soon they will face the next trial of their journey. I hope poor Sesshoumaru will be feeling better soon. Hmm, I can't help but wonder how much time will pass outside the scroll. Hopefully it will not pass at the same speed, seeing as Kagome were on that beach for like 30 years. Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 18:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Kagome! I'm so glad she figured it out so quickly, and stopped herself when she did. Kagome has always had a need to 'make things right'. And reguardless of the lessons Sesshoumaru has learned, he is still a very proud being. But, I hope Kagome doesn't get herself in trouble trying to prove her worth. That will only make it worse. Thanks for the lovely chapter.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2008 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you may have noticed (or maybe not), I only review every other chapter, and that's because I "save up" on updated chapters so I can read several in a row. It's easier to keep the story fresh in my mind then. But this time I don't think I can wait for two new chapters before I read again. That authors note you left there in the end made me want to crawl out of my skin with impatience. XD I really hope you'll update soon. But looking at how long it's been since your last update, I'm guessing there might be one coming soon. Hopefully this year. ;) I can't praise you enough for this masterpiece of a story. Gosh, I wish I had your talent!
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Title: New Reader
Reviewed By: Morvelaira [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. What a place to start reading this story. You have a wonderful writing style my lady, and the thing I am actually enjoying most about the story is learning the Japanese legends through your telling. I am mostly surprised though at how similar some of them are to Western legends. Issunboshi (sp?) is of course a parallel to Tom Thumb (or alternatively Thumbelina) and oddly enough the Dragon King's tale reminds me of the Twelve Dancing Princesses in some measure. (Be sure to have Shiro-sama bring that up in the next hot tub session!) Speaking of which, I have a question that will probably be answered long before it is read by Shiro-sama. Since we seem to be collecting most of the trapped denizens of Scroll World at the QAs, will the monk be joining them? Thank you, ladybattousai, for this lovely tale, that I cannot wait for you to complete. I only hope that some day I will be able to craft a tale of equal complexity, reality, and enjoyability.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 10:30 PST
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So Kagome is finally starting to piece things together...does Sess know what exactly is happening to himself??? Can't wait for the next chapter...please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 10:24 PST
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*applauds* As always, it's amazing. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh!!! its getting good. Well, it was always great, but now its getting to a good part. So all Kagome has to do now is is think about her time with Shiro-sama. Then put together what he did with what Sesshoumaru did. Its so exciting! Thank you for the update!
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: November 20, 2008 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awsome chapter. Great stuff. I'm glad she has an idea of what happened... ^_~
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