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Title: oh no
Reviewed By: west On: March 27, 2009 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I skipped writing a report and stayed up till 2:30 in the morning and it just stopped.... noooooooooooo. Wonderful story though. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. i can't take it if another person just stops updating right after i get into their story. Keep up the good work. Nice touch with all the planning consideration... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: March 27, 2009 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch 16 - farcking awsome ch. loved the interaction and the realistic and not idealistic aproach to how everyone delt with the situation... ^_^
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: west On: March 26, 2009 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only through ch 14 but i had to write a rerview. This is one of the most unique fan fics i've read in a while... a long while. Did inu really die and now is hiei. it would make sense. Any who i gots to go keep reading.... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Do you even know how to proof read your fics? On: March 22, 2009 04:26 EDT
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I've long since stopped reading this story for entertainment value. Now it's just for the train wreck factor to see just how much you're going to keep contradicting your previous chapters. But please, can't you at least keep your dialogue straight so I can tell who's speaking just before the train rails over the out of character mockery of a character you're attempting portray? I get confused when Koenma's talking to Kagome and all of a sudden he starts answering for her. It's amazing me that people are saying this chapter is so great and no one has called you on this yet. Are they even bothering to read it before reviewing?
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 23:01 EDT
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Hardcore yo, Im almost ready to start crying... My god, what a tear jerker this has been, and its not even over! But thats cool, if its good enough, then let the tears flow... And trust me, it is good enough. So update soon!
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Title: None I Can Possibly Put Into Words
Reviewed By: cerinae@yahoo.com On: March 21, 2009 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay....I wanted to burst into tears several times throughout this story. I felt so bad for Kagome. Her pain made for a really good story. Sad as that sounds. I enjoyed it very much. There were some spelling errors, I noticed. The one that I took major notice of was between chapters 8 thru 13. You stated that "Kagome had a revolution". I think, and I'm assuming here, that you meant that she had a REVELATION. Revolution being a circular motion(RPM-Revolutions per Minute) and Revelation being an eye-opening experience or something close to that meaning. I did notice a spelling error in one of the last two chapters, but any reader could tell what you meant to write, so that didn't stick out all that much. I will be honest and say that I had started this story about a dozen times, and never actually sat down to read it. Now, I will visit this site and look for your story at every opportunity. I can't wait until your next chapter. Great work!
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Reviewed By: aura9969 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 16:50 EDT
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Very good...made me wish that there was another chapter waiting for me after this one. Keep up the good work, although Hiei is a little OOC along with some others, but still not bad.
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 12:52 EDT
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This is great, can't wait for another update. Chrystal-Hearts
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Reviewed By: MarielleLaB On: March 21, 2009 10:37 EDT
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yay keep writing this ive been reading from the beginning and am crazy about this one there are only 4 fics out there that i follow this closely two im the artist for and one is my brothers and i dont know you but i like your stuff so keep it coming and ill keep reading peace awesome writer person
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: March 15, 2009 02:59 EDT
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Ah, I think this chapter may have been one of the best so far. There was not any ridiculous arguments thrown around because people don't want to listen to others and we have a lot of progress, I also think Kurama's attitude really stood out in this chapter Showing hes not some character to screw around with and clearly always thinks with the cold logic that many fanfiction writers forget about.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 20:38 EDT
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the story is as hardcore as ever, and i love it just as before. but my god you took long enough to update... please dont be so slow about remembering us next time... this story makes me cry, and it makes me mad, and its just really well written. i truly do enjoy it... i have a little ball of saddness and hate coiled up in my chest from just one chapter. i feel so badly for Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 23:47 EST
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i havent heard from you in a while... i dont even remember what this story is about anymore... but ill remember, ill read it, if you update... so please update... i dont like to, but i do give up hope eventually...
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 19:00 EST
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so... life gets in the way and all... but id really like it if you could update... im not rushing you or anything... just saying...
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: January 16, 2009 10:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another really good chapter but I still really want to kill kurama. He had the nerve to get angry that Hiei's soul was in danger but be indifferent to poor kagome's situation. Even though Hiei is the only character I kind of like right now since he feels actual guilt, I kind of want him to get hurt so Kurama and the others suffer. Koenma is also angering but I'm shocked with Yusuke. Instead of worrying that they hurt kagome, he's worried that now he won't be able to trade her in for his girlfriend. Normally, I like keiko but again I can't help but want something bad to happen to her so the group suffers. God, their so horrible. Sorry about that but I'm very passionate about this story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: January 16, 2009 10:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going really well. I absolutely am in love with your story. However, I'm unbelievably angry at KUrama and normally, I love him. Still, I want him to pay for being so heartless and cruel to propose that idea and than not even feel guilty about it. Even Yusuke and Kuwabara don't feel as guilt-stricken as they should but Kurama's aura is maddening. I'm not saying you didn't make him in character; in fact, he is very much in character and You're doing a great job not mixing up characterizations like so many do. I'm just really angry at him! Will he/they have to pay for what they've done to her? Anyways, great job!
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