| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:41 PDT
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I hate how they treat Sam!!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another wonderful chapter.... this reminds me of the Buffy episode where Spike is taken by the Initiative and asks if this is a it is a cosmetics company taking him in to do tests on him...
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:23 PDT
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this is a good story. man everybodies so worried about her! cant wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 17:45 PDT
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Poor Sam. Thinking she's all alone when in reality she's surrounded by family and friends but doesn't know it. Kurt's reaction to finding out what a hanyou is, or actually seeing her on her human night is going to be interesting. Will he feel guilt for subjecting a human to this torture, or will he not be able to see beyond the demon he's labeled her. Great update. Look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 17:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG it started out ok, I thought Kurt is being kind of nice. But now I want to cry AGAIN, poor Sam. Sue Please update soon! I'm dieing.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:44 PDT
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oh! poor sam! such a stressful story! i really appreciate the frequent updates, it makes it easier when you know there'll be a chapter in the morning.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how this is going. Kurt is slowly but surely coming to think of Sam as more than an 'it'. Even if he is trying with all his might not to. I hope he decides to look up the definition of hanyou like he did youkai. I can almost see the look of alarm on his face. he he he.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:04 PDT
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Yeah, she finally get to eat!! Can hanyous survive longer without food than humans can? Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:02 PDT
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Aw, you almost made me cry at the ending of that last chapter. I have tears in my eyes but they didn't fall. Man, I would be sick too if I had to hear those high pitch sounds too. I wonder...will Kurt look up the meaning of 'hanyou'?
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 15:45 PDT
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Oooooooooo! Sesshomaru and toga are coming...I luv this !!!! Absolutely love it! Can't wait to read more cuz its on now! Although I do feel as if the search wud be more affective with kagome searching with one of them because she has the power to sense barriers and spiritual powers. Just a thought I had...once again though you're phenomenal. Lol it would be hilarious when they found her if all the white coats were shocked out of their mind that the 'demon' has a family and those family members are actually key members of society like sesshy toga and cain..lollll
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 14:57 PDT
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I have to wonder if Kurt is ever going to get curious enough to look for the powerful auras he's sensing- just to see what they are. Since he is a powerful holy man, would any one be able to sense him if he got to close?
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 10:11 PDT
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Looks like damn near everyone's in the States now... Since Kurt finds even Sam's aura amazing, if SesshoMaru, InuYasha and Cain walk into him at the same time, i'd say his brain's gonna blow. Those white coats are SO going down!
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Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the "white coats" want to harness youkai power or commit genocide. If that information gets out to the youkai world it could lead to a bloodbath and/or a revolt against Sesshoumaru himself. Seems like youkai like MacDonnough are positioning themselves for that anyway and this could be just the thing to give them the edge. And Kurt has sold youkai to more than one of these labs. Cartham's intuition appears to be right and it's good Sesshoumaru and Toga are getting actively involved. I love this story. It has so many variables that I can't even guess where you're going next with it. It doesn't seem like Sam's youkai voice is too thrilled with Kurt, and if you plan to get these two together it will be interesting to see how you do it without it seeming like Stockholm Syndrome. Look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 06:53 PDT
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Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! Sammi got a BURGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! Whoop whopp whoop! It's so sad that I'm so excited she's getting a stale burger....but I am!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 05:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Sammy got a burger! Ooooo, I wondered when Sesshoumaru was going to give in. Hold on to your guts and garders. They are not going to like dealing with him. It would be better if he were there to keep Inuyasha in check. Like Kagura said, he's the only one that can keep Inuyasha in line. Well, him and Kagome, but for entirely different reasons. lol
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