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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 16:07 PDT
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Oh my gosh, the ending to this chapter was just so cute! I was hoping there would be a confrontation between Cain and Tanny with his cake. That's just so adorable! Aw, I liked Kurt's dream; Miroku was very sweet lol.
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Title: Chapter 79: So, your theory was correct, Mangaluva....
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sango. DUDE. The cuteness of it all. Wow! That flashback was so sweet! And, oh, that showdown with Tanny and Cain...HELP ME, JESUS, that tickled me! Loved this chappie!
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Title: Chapter 78: They beat the Sugar Honey Iced Tea outta my boy! But, he's a trooper! Miroku lives...again!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 14:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was AWESOME! I LOVE your action scenes, Sue! I kept envisioning all those hits and shoves and counter moves and the blood arcing in the air and **shudders** it was so....VIVID! But, Kurt showed and proved! YES! I was kinda 50/50 about Kich bowing out cuz part of me wanted to see that "grudging respect" thing where the one with the grudge beats his nemesis to a bloody pulp but he still stands ready for more...then, with the fury flowing off of Kich, I was nervous that he'd go a little overboard and go out for blood, even, in frustration, descending to fighting dirty. Then again, no. I have more faith in Kich than that. I nearly squirted the proverbial milk out the nose when InuYasha's sword came to his full size and Kurt said "Oh, HELL no!" I felt his pain. **STILL giggling helplessly** At one point in the fight between Kurt and Gunnar, I got nervous that Kurt was aiming for his signet ring that supresses his YB. Glad i was wrong--PHEW! This chapter was too cool! **high fives Sue**
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 13:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D !!!
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Title: Chapter 77: Go, Sue, and your $20 words! Pulchritudinous...wow!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, weird title, I know; but, hey, you KNOW I'm random already, right? LOL! I. Adored. This. Chapter. Well, Kich's version of venting notwithstanding. Honestly, I still feel his pain but I just don't want to see his tubborness causing a rift between him and his Dollbaby. That would be too sad. Tanny tickles me! I love her and her little candy fixation. I keep laughing to myself imagining her bouncing off the walls on a sugar high. I was glad Inuyasha was the voice of reason for Kich, though. He may be PO, but Kich respects his Old Man. I hope Kurt and Sam don't hurt each other too bad. Doubt it, but...stuff happens.
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 11:27 PDT
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I'll have you know that I almost spit out the chips I was eating when I read Cain's line "She stole my cake! She's a cake thief!" THAT was hysterical! I love Cain.. he's so wise, understanding and immature at the same time :-) Another awesome chapter. I wonder if Inu and Kags (or Shippou) will ever see Sami as human with Kurt - I'd guess they'd be totally transported back. I knew Sami was Sango's descendant - and she IS a hunter - that would be wonderful if she was her actual reincarnation. Love the story similarities. It reaffirms that a true soul mate is eternal. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:42 PDT
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A lot of humor injected to this chapter. Im glad though that Sam deided to take a break from hunting. I think it would be good for her. It will give her a chance to regain some of the confidence that she lost while she was imprisoned and also give her a chance to help Tanny with her learning and social skills. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww! Tanny likes cake too! how cute...I loved this chapter. Gin's reaction was funny. great job!!
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:19 PDT
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mine mine mine!!! every parent's dreaded words. i wonder if she likes any real food yet? it was funny to see cain fight with tanny for the cake and lost lol!!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:12 PDT
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that Miroku/Sango moment was so sweet ;___; I miss Miro and Sango Tanny va Cain was epic win. I've got tears in my eyes! that was so cute X3
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:09 PDT
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Stitches... I'm in STITCHES after the "battle for the cake"! Honestly, one of the most powerful youkai in the world, sticking his tongue out at a toddler for stealing his cake... *snort* The little retrospective Miroku/Sango moment had me crying, BTW. "Promise me you'll find me"... *sobs*
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG I'm Dieing (laughing so hard can't breath) that was soo funny!!!! Cain and Tanny are great together. Cake thief hahahahha Loved this chapter Sue! Yay Sam is Sango! Please update Soon!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: demon13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so adorable at the end with Cain fighting with Tanny haha so cute
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 07:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, you so have to have Kurt meet Serria, the incarnation of Miroku and the great great-something daughter of the couple ^_^ lol
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 07:22 PDT
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That was maaaddd cutee!!! Cain is hilarious. Lmao...rotf....gasping for breath. Ok ok I'm done. But I think kurt should consult inuyasha and kagome on the issue of his dreams and bring up the fact the sami looks like sango when she's human. they might find it interested that their granddaughter is the reincarnation of on of their best friends. Ah it all comes full circle. It kinda makes sami and sierra a little xtra related. ;-) ne? Anyways I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I meant to mention before that I like kurts name is cute...douglas...even though I'm set to name my sons jayden yomari and sebastian kayden I still like to see the names you come up with. Douglas is a nice one...so was gavin (luv that name) and ryomaru. I like evan also but a guy that I absolutely can not Stand is named that...so its sorta like a conflict of interest. Hehe. Can't wait till the next. Ja ne!
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