| "Wild Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 05:37 EDT
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Lack o' internet sucks major ass! NE way...YAY we get Hee-chan back and we now have new relationship links...Q-bean is Packfem and sub to Du-chan while T'o-chan went from Packmale to Alpha and is dom to Du-chan. Will it stay this way or change again and is T'o-chan trying to help Du-chan w/ his control when he does the masturbation bit or is he just trying to get answers? Woot, things will go boom in the night very soon. Please, PLZ, PPPPPLLLLZZZZZZ update asap...or at least by time I am able to get internet again...which will probably be next week T.T
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Reviewed By: ToniK On: August 12, 2008 19:54 EDT
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Cool at the end - a slip of the grip.... very nice so far - I look forward to where you will end up with this.....
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 08:18 EDT
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Oh My God! That was probably the hottest chapter EVER. I mean you have a plot and everything- the sex just enhanced the story! Wow, I Love this story. Update soon, please?
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Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 03:38 EDT
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EEEEgadsss!!! You are trying to kill me >,
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 14:35 EDT
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Shit that was hot. And weird, and more than a little disturbing. Seriously, how the hell can anyone function with feelings like that? Neh, well written, and awesome smut though man. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: A.K.A BahbahBlacksheep
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 12:17 EDT
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OMG you are trying to kill me with all this suspence! Gah! What's happening with everyone else? I sooo can't wait for another chapter >,
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 15:07 EDT
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And there are many thoughts on how Heero and Duo might do things. Heh. COntinue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 20:45 EDT
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Hey this fic is really good! I hope you can update soon, and hey what about the others pilots, I want to know to how are the couples, is just that 2x4 is really weird xD, I love to see 1x2 and 3x4 well that's it, til next chapter
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Title: Too lazy to log in
Reviewed By: BahBahBlackSheep On: June 04, 2008 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! I think I read this story somewhere else...but you had like 4 chapters up already. I can't wait to see how the others are dealing with their "problems". So with that I say I can't wait for another chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 04:27 EDT
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Poor wolf-Du-chan he's so confused as to what to do and poor Q-bean. Not only is he chicken size at times he also now has two bodies...or rather feels like he has two. Does this mean that if Du-chan were to get injured or aroused Quatre would feel it? Or would it eventually turn into a ghost of a feeling? Like he would always be able to feel what Du-chan is doing but could ignore it? Kind of like a dull headache? I can't wait for the next chappie T.T *runs around in circles until she falls over*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 22:35 EDT
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hmmm, combine the space heart, that strange empathy of Quatre's, and their animal nature with sex, and you would get something strange. And hell, quite amazing, the level of connection. Of course, the real question is, will this connection continue ro exist, or fade over time, or connect with the other pilot, when, hell, they have sex with each other? Create a network between them? Complicated. Heh. Continue to update. Ja ne.
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Title: chap 17
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 21:30 EDT
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Oh dear. It seems the wolf has very little in the way of self control. Not that I really expected it to. And oh but what a lovely scene that lack of control led them to! Yummy. I'm rather a bit worried about Quatre being in both their heads. Not the best time for him to be experiencing weird and disorienting new mental powers. I hope he gets his head straightened out soon. I feel rather bad for Duo's wolf too. So many conflicting instincts! I'm interested to see how they manage to get out of this one, though it just occurred to me that if they're stealing separate planes, Duo may very well end up meeting up with one of the others. That could be interesting too. Thanks for writing! ~ jess, your grinning fangirl.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 12:12 EDT
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Heh, guess you are right, sex between species would be some fucked up shit. On the other hand, having sex like that makes anyone interested. Heh. And keep em on the point of being close to obsession. Seriously, when Duo finds the person that means everything to him (probably Heero) it's gonna be a couple of days before they can get back to the mission. Hell, same deal for Quatra too, heh. Neh, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 11:45 EDT
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o.o It's a Du-chan/Q-beany chappie. I usually find this pairing sweet enough to rot teeth, but I like it for this story I guess...or is the love going to spread as the pack grows? I'm still convinced Du-chan is like the pack leader with Q-ball and T'o-chan being betas, but that's my theory and I wont mind being proven wrong ^_^
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Reviewed By: sylenctone (still too lazy to sign in) On: April 21, 2008 10:40 EDT
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Oh my! That was rather surprising, wonderfully surprising in fact! Note to self, do not annoy Rashid. The scene on the oasis was delightful, though I do wonder who had the audacity to shoot at Q. Whomever it was, they certainly stirred ut the Manguanac ant hill! I'm glad Duo pulled himself together enough to come down and investigate because I really want to know what has them all riled! Thanks for writing! -jess, your very pleasantly surprised fangirl.
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